浙江省宁波市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精炼（3）.doc

短文改错精炼（3）短文改错i used to love science classall of them 1. _biology, chemistry ,geography, physics. i think i 2. _liked those classes because i felt that it helped me 3. _understand what the world works. for example, when 4. _i was a child , the rain was a mystery (奥秘). in one 5. _class, i learned it rained. i think science classes 6. _clear up mysteries. but then there is always more 7. _mysteries look into. what was my least favorite class? 8. _that was maths. after learn the basics of the subject, 9. _nothing else seemed very practically to me . i never 10._saw how i could use it in my daily life.答案及解析1. class 改为 classes。class 为可数名词， 根据下文， 这里 class 为复数， 故改为 classes。2. 此行无错。3. it 改为 they。这里指代上文的 those classes。4. what 改为 how。work 此处为不及物动词， 不可用连接代词 what 作宾语， 只可用连接副词 how 作状语。5. 删去 rain 前的 the。此处 rain 为泛指。6. it 前加 why。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在课上， 我明白了天为什么会下雨”。7. is 改为 are。8. look 前加 to。需用不定式作定语。9. learn 改为 learning。此处 after 为介词， 后需用动名词作宾语。10. practically 改为 practical。seem 在此句中作系动词， 其后应用形容词作表语。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear fangfang,im sorry to learn that you were not getting on well with your english study recentlyid like to give you some advice on learning englishfirst of all, you should be confidently in yourself, which is first step in learning english wellsecondly, youd better make friends with the students who are good at english, so theyare very likely to helping you when you meet difficultiesthirdly, learning english well is a long processremember: to reward yourself when you have made progress, that will inspire you greatlyanyway, you must work hard on english and never give up learning itjust believe in yourselveswhere there is a will, there is a wayhope my suggestions will give you some of help sincerely yours, li ming【参考答案】5.dear fangfang,im sorry to learn that you were not getting on well with your english study recentlyid arelike to give you some advice on learning englishfirst of all, you should be confidently in yourself, which is first step in learning english confident thewellsecondly, youd better make friends with the students who are good at english, so they for / because / and或thatare very likely to helping you when you meet difficultiesthirdly, learning english well is a long helpprocessremember: to reward yourself when you have made progress, that will inspire you whichgreatlyanyway, you must work hard on english and never give up learning itjust believe in atyourselveswhere there is a will, there is a wayyourselfhope my suggestions will give you some of help sincerely yours, li ming假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。nowadays, it is very easily to find a student who is nearsighted. whats worse, the number of nearsighted students are still increasing. from my point of view, there are many reason that can cause nearsightedness. first and foremost, the wrong posture will easily result from nearsightedness. read in the dark places can lead to nearsightedness as well as. moreover, too much reading without a rest can be other important reason. my dear friends, it is high time that we paid attention to protect our eyes. the most useful method is do eye exercises more often and relax for a while after reading. watching green trees could also do good to the eyes.【参考答案】6.nowadays, it is very easily to find a student who is nearsighted. whats worse, the easynumber of nearsighted students are still increasing. from my point of view, there are ismany reason that can cause nearsightedness. first and foremost, the wrong posture will reasonseasily result from nearsightedness. read in the dark places can lead to nearsightedness as in reading well as. moreover, too much reading without a rest can be other important reason. my anotherdear friends, it is high time that we paid attention to protect our eyes. the most protectinguseful method is do eye exercises more often and relax for a while after reading. to/或改为doingwatching green trees could also do good to the eyes. can 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。many people go to school education. school education is 1. _important and useful, but no one learn from everything 2. _at school. no matter how many you learn at school, it is 3. _limited. so much more is to be learned outside school by 4. _students themselves all their lives. it is always important to 5. _to know to learn something that to get a good exam result. 6. _many great scientists and statesmen didnt get anything 7. _from school. for examples, edison and lincoln didnt even 8. _made primary school. but they were so success that they 9. _made great contributions