江苏省泗阳中学高三英语 书面表达专项如何写好漫画类书面表达.doc

江苏省泗阳中学2013届高三书面表达专项如何写好漫画类书面表达漫画类书面表达属于看图作文的范畴，漫画通常被用来颂扬、批评或讽刺某种社会现象，并使读者从漫画中得到某些启示。漫画类书面表达基于这样的命题思路，通常要求考生看懂漫画，然后就漫画的内容进行表面的描述，再通过漫画联系实际，描述出漫画所反映的社会现实，最后要求考生针对这一现象谈谈自己的感受。一 解题步骤1 读图。找准“题眼”，即题目中最关键的部分，透过题眼的表面现象把握内涵。2 解意。解意时要遵循读图中确定的内涵，解决三个方面的问题：辨明褒贬，找准角度；联系生活，明辨主旨；推敲文字说明，搞清题目要求。3 谋篇。首先对漫画主题（表层信息和深层含义）作初步解读，然后构思确立提纲，完成对主题的阐述。构思一般有三个步骤。第一步：表象或现象描述，即概要描述漫画，揭示漫画所反映的社会现象。注意避免平铺直叙式的对漫画细节的简单描述。要对漫画分析解读后将有效信息进行概括性引用。第二步：原因或根源分析，即详细阐述引起漫画表面现象的深层次原因或寓意。第三步：评论或建议抒发，即简要评述漫画所揭示的寓意及从中得到的启发或建议。为了获得高分，通常需要结合本人或社会生活谈谈看法或观点。二 漫画各部分常用的英语表达1 描述漫画部分1) from the picture / cartoon, we can see that2) as is shown / indicated in the picture / cartoon,3) this is a funny and instructive picture / cartoon, from which we can see2 论述漫画寓意及反映现象部分1) what it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society. / apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem (issue).2) what the cartoon reflects sets me think a lot.3) after seeing the picture / cartoon, i was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. in todays society, . 4) the picture / cartoon implies that3 评论与观点部分1) as far as im concerned, what we have to do is make full use of and also / if weand, it will not only . but also2) what we can learn from the picture / cartoon is that3) consequently, its high time that measures should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from happening again.4) therefore, i am firmly convinced that5) lets call on everyone to / in the long run, it will have a negative influence on constructing a harmonious society.6) in my opinion, something must be done to7) only in this way can we三图表作文模板as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure / percentage in the table/graph/picture /chart, _ （作文题目的议题）has been on the rise/decrease(goes up/increases / drops /decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from _ in _ to _ in _ . from the sharp/marked decline/rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _ .there are at least two good reasons accounting for _. on the one hand, _. on the other hand, _ is due to the fact that _. in addition, _ is responsible for _. maybe there are some other reasons to show _. but it is generally believed that the above reasons are commonly convincing.as far as i am concerned, i hold the point of view that _. i am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.四实例目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“health care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。 1.make an outline of the writing: (1). 漫画内容(2). 现象或后果(3). 你的观点para1. description:1). an old man was in hospital for his heart attack. 2).three weeks later, he paid his medical fee before he left hospital. 3). the bill with $5,0000 shocked him. 4). he nearly fell onto the floor. 5). the high fee was another heart attack to him.para2. phenomenon: the medical fees are very high.consequences: people & societypeople cant afford the heavy medical fees and have to bear the pain of illness. it wont be beneficial to the building of our harmonious society.para3. your opinion (measures): government & hospitalgovernment should set up effective medical system. they should put the benefits of the patients in the first place and reduce the fee.参考范文as is vividly shown in the picture, an old man was suffering from heart trouble. he had to go to hospital for medical care. when he saw the medical bill from the hospital, which was far beyond what he could afford, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. its really another heart attack for him.at present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care or have to bear the pain of diseases. worse still, some have to wait helplessly for the last day of their life. if this situation continues, it will surely cause the instability of our society and eventually interfere with the development of our country.therefore, we strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced. the government should build up a favorable, medical system so that every person can afford their medical care and can enjoy their life as long as possible.五、巩固练习【实战演练】01要求： 1. 描述漫画内容，结合生活实际分析这一现象，并发表一下自己的观点和看法。 2. 词数：150左右参考范文：as can be seen from the cartoon, two ladies living in the opposite flat say “hello” when they happen to meet each other. the two women dont know each other even if they are neighbors. it is the exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in the modern world. as we all know, most people live in apartments. they dont like to go out after work, and they will stay at home watching tv or playing computer games. they dont have any connections even with their closest neighbors, who seem no different from people they meet every day in the street. so it is no good to us, nor to our society. it will make people feel more lonely.as far as im concerned, its high time that we took some measures to improve it. people who live in the same zone can often be organized to have some activities together. we should ask people to be friendly to each other. they should smile and greet each other. then our society will become more harmonious in this way. 【实战演练】02下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点：1该漫画告诉了我们什么；2你对此现象的看法；3我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通。参考词汇：漫画caricature。参考范文：modern technology has many advantages. while we enjoy the fun and convenience of the internet, we also experience some new problems. this picture describes one of them. it shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his mother. i think it is totally unacceptable. nothing can replace face-to-face communication with parents, however interesting it