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书面表达学生观摩篇（1）书面表达训练假定你是李华，你所喜爱的实验报创刊十一周年（总100期）之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编mr. wang写封信，内容主要包括： 1说明你是该报的忠实读者 2赞赏该报优点：1) 国内外教育新闻 2) 学习经验交流及名人成功故事 3) 学生习作3提出建议 注意：1词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear mr wang, congratulations on the 11th anniversary of experimental newspaper! 【参考范文】dear mr wang,congratulations on the 11th anniversary of experimental newspaper! im a regular reader of your newspaper. i like it very much mainly for the following three reasons. first, it covers both national and international news of education so that, by simply turning the pages, i can learn all important things that have happened during the month. equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. besides, it offers us students a platform to exchange our learning experience and share encouraging stories. as a young student, i suggest that experimental newspaper carry articles to guide us in our english learning, and i hope that it will become even more popular. yours sincerely, li hua书面表达训练假如你是李华，你向美国笔友jack介绍你校开设的学生社团活动的情况，大致内容介绍：1、活动对象：高一和高二学生；活动时间：每周二 的三点钟以后。2、通过参加活动，你们的收获。3、你的感受。注意：1、词数不少于100；2、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；dear jack, thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school.【参考范文】dear jack,thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school .these clubs are set up by the students union and they are intended for students from grade two and grade three, open after 3 oclock on tuesday afternoon.the club activities, aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents, benefit us a lot. taking part in club activities can help us to make new friends, expand our circle, and develop interpersonal skills. at the same time, these activities can help us to develop self-confidence, communicating with each other more easily. besides, we have developed different skills and many interests, which enrich our lives.in my opinion, i acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. meanwhile, i bring myself more relaxation after hard study, which reduces my tiredness.【2014高考英语吉林省长春市调研试题】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，因陪母亲看病，不能参加明天下午关于美国文化的讲座。请写一封 短信向老师miss clinton请假。内容主要包括：1. 不能听讲座，跟老师表示歉意；2. 向老师陈述缺席理由；3. 询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当増加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。dear miss clinton,i am very sorry that _yours, li hua【语篇解读】 书面表达体裁为请假条，题材贴近考生生活。【命题立意】 本试卷书面表达的目的在于考查考生应用已有的语言知识完成一篇应用文（请假条）写作的综合能力。【参考范文】 dear miss clinton, i am very sorry that i will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on american culture. my mother is ill, and i will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. i will take care of my mother until she is better, so i have to ask for several days leave. i am very interested in the topic of american culture. it is really a pity that i miss it. i wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. if so, i can listen to it when it is convenient. thank you very much. yours, li hua【评分标准】 1. 本题总分为25分, 按5个档次给分。2. 评分时, 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次, 然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次, 最后给分。3. 词数少于80和多于120的, 从总分中减去2分。4. 评分时, 应注意的主要内容是: 内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予 以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。【内容要点】 1. 正确使用表示歉意的语句。 2. 陈述理由：母亲生病，陪她去医院看病。 3. 询问是否有录音，以便过后补听讲座。 4. 语气符合学生向老师请假的情况。【各档次的给分范围和要求】 第五档21分25分完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖了所有内容要点；-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；-语法或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高词汇 所致；具备较强的语言运用能力；-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档16分20分完全完成了试题规定的任务。-覆盖了所有内容要点；-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；-语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或较高词汇所致； -应用了简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。第三档11分15分基本完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容；-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；-有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解；-应用了简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯；整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档6分10分未恰当完成试题规定的任务。-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容；-语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；-有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；-较少使用语句间连接成分，内容缺少连贯性；信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档1分5分未完成试题规定的任务。-明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求；-语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；-较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；-缺乏语句间连接成分，内容不连贯；信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。【2014高考英语湖北省汉阳市联考试题】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）请根据以下提示并结合一个事例，就“潜能无限”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。as we all know, ones potential is limitless. especially in times of crisis, you can never imagine how powerful ones potential will be. therefore, its unwise to set limits to your potential. 注意：1） 不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；2） 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数120以上。 【参考范文】potential is limitlessits universally acknowledged that a persons potential is limitless. when exposed to various pressure or challenges, many people will be sceptical of themselves, thinking they are incapable. perhaps, never have they realized how powerful a persons potential will be.an interesting story will never fade from my memory though i heard of it many years ago. an injured soldier was informed that he would spend his rest life on the wheelchair. hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in drink every day. it never rains but pours.one day, hardly had he got out of a pub when he was robbed by three guys. unwilling to give in, he struggled against them, however, which set off the robbers anger and therefore they set fire to his wheelchair. just when the big fire was endangering his life, he suddenly jumped out of his wheelchair and ran through a whole street swiftly