江苏省泰兴市第三高级中学高三英语 漫画类写作指导学案.doc

漫画类写作指导写作指导一、观察漫画，确定立意1、由图画到生活（特点：把握漫画的寓意）2、由结果推原因 （揭示事件的本质）二、找关键词，关键句1.紧扣漫画主题2.抓住画面有效信息，合理发挥想象3.尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构4.确立人称、时态三、结构成篇下面是漫画写作的一些基本方法。1.描述基本步骤：描述漫画、图表引出暗含主题简短解释过渡参考模板：from the cartoon we can see that_. what it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society, and it conveys the symbolic meaning of_. according to a recent survey made by professor wang, head of social department in peking university, 90% of the people across the country are suffering from the problem. it is clear that_plays a important role in our life and work.2.阐明原因基本步骤：引出原因列举原因过渡参考模板：what causes the effect? there are at least two possible reasons. to begin with,_. in the second place,_. there may be some other reasons responsible for_, but i think what has been mentioned above is generally acceptable.nowadays it is well known that_.3.提出对策基本步骤：引出对策列举对策过渡参考模板：we should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up. first of all, the government should propagandize （宣传）to raise public awareness of_. in the second place, the government should take effective measures to_. finally, _ should be banned by law. this is my point of view and i am sure my idea is both reasonable and workable(可行的).谋篇参考模板：1) describe the picture（描述图片）the picture is talking about/showsthe picture shows a common phenomenon. the picture describes an interesting phenomenon.in the picture, there are/is (are) doingthe picture above is about lets look at the picture above/first.in the cartoon, we can seeaccording to my understanding, the picture isas we can see in the picture,as is shown/ described in the picture,2) interpret its meaning（解释含义）it seems very ridiculous（荒唐的） thathowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.the picture shows thatit is the exact reflection ofthe picture indicates that wenowadays, it is a common phenomenon thatthis is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongthe picture reflects a real problem in our daily family life.there are two major reasons for this:andwhat are the reasons for the phenomenon?3) give your opinions about the phenomenon（对于现象发表你的观点）i think/believe thatpolish up your article!（润色）1. to use linking words if necessary（使用连词）表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also.表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand.表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系 besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so on表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion2. to use complicated structures if possible （使用复杂句型）例如：people suggest that the conference be put off. it is suggested that the conference be put off. 被动语态she walked out of the room and many students followed her. followed by many students, she walked out of the room非谓语动词to his surprise, the little girl knew so many things. what surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things. 从句the couple were so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest. so curious were the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.倒装regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.it was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. 强调句many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters. but for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved. 虚拟语气高考英语作文实用性高级词汇及句型1. (支持)many people are in favor of the plan, believing that .(反对)most of them, accounting for 40%, opposed the plan, worried/arguing that / 2. people with good health can do work with full energy and their excellence in work in turn contributes to their health and happiness.3. is also a problem. (用语列举或陈述理由) /there exists a problem that the gas released from/ sent off from vehicles is also a problem, known as a main source of air pollution.4. .is a /ones good choice. =its a good choice to do sth. 5. there are two factors accounting for this (phenomenon).6. they are burdened with too heavy a learning load, which results in their staying up too late at night，and as a result/ in which case, many of them suffer from lack of sleep. 7. getting plenty of exercise makes heart beat faster and lung work harder, thus strengthening the heart and reducing the chance of heart attack, and helping to lower blood pressure.8. to make a wise choice of occupations, two important things should be taken into consideration. one is the interest, the other, the demand of the people and society. 9. it is definitely true that behind every daily activity lies a motive. as a matter of fact, we can achieve nothing without a realistic goal. 10. children often complain that their parents cannot understand them, while parents feel sorry that their children seldom show them proper respect and obedience. 11. more and more people come to realize the importance of regular physical exercise.12. physical exercise increases the circulation of the blood and develop ones self-confidence, judgment, and a strong will./ proper sports activities help us strengthen our physical body and build our sense of competition and cooperation.13. there is an increasingly loud voice from the public calling for firm action against pollution. / theres an increasing number of .14. it is universally true that . 15. but the limited land is decreasing at a surprising speed.16. fortunately, many countries have come to realize the seriousness of/ become aware of the problem and take active measures to preserve the environment.17. we sincerely hope that all the people will take part in the campaign and join hands to protect the nature.18. there is a great chance that / chances are that 19. its a tendency to do sth. / there is a growing tendency of20.the past 30 years have witnessed a boom/an increase/ a change fromto常用短语be available to sb; tend to think; contribute to/ result indirectly or indirectly; ; spare no effort to do sth.;have access to sth; compared with /to; be of vital importance to; raise/ promote/increase public awareness of.有助于做：help+ (to) do/ in doing; make it easier/ likely for sb to do; be helpful/ of help to the doing of sthopinions concerning the issue vary from person to person. weaken its development; out of the question; people aged 15 and over; practice our traditions; devote ones body and soul to doing;come to public attention; cope/ deal with ； among the best; next to none; bring out the best of us ;treat sb with respect not prejudice; have unpleasant associations with对没好感; generation gap代沟;owe their achievements to the formation of good habits in early life 把成就归功于早年养成的好习惯develop the problem-solving and communication skills发展沟通和解决问题的能力话题专用词汇benefit from the governments preferential policies得益于政府的优惠政策；fight/ commit cybercrime; encourage hatred and violence煽动仇恨暴力；slide into addiction逐渐上瘾；drunk driving酒后驾车struggle against our own laziness跟自己的惰性斗争; conserve natural resources 保护自然资源； if consumed in large quantities 如大量服用；wildlife extinction野生动物灭绝；endangered species濒危物种destruction of ecological balance（the balance of ecosystem）生态系统的破坏; greenhouse effect温室效应；for shortage/ lack of fresh water/water resources 由于淡水/水资源的缺乏；laid-off workers下岗工人population explosion/baby boom人口爆炸；poverty-stricken areas贫困地区; recyclable products可再生产品;shake off poverty and set out on a road to prosperity消除贫困走上富裕之路；resources exhaustion资源枯竭;bad co