江西省景德镇市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错编练（6）.doc

江西景德镇市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错编练（6）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear elli， im a senior student. i like making friend with people and i do my best to get on well for everyone. but in last week i found that one of my friends wrote in her english diary that shedislikes me. he doesnt want to my friend any longer. now she has started making fun of mebecause of im fat. i am kind to her but why cant she be friend towards me? my other problemis trying to lose weight. do i do more exercise? use pills? and do you know any other way?please give me some advices. yours, mary 【参考答案】1.dear elli， im a senior student. i like making friend with people and i do my best to get on well for friends witheveryone. but in last week i found that one of my friends wrote in her english diary that shedislikes me. he doesnt want tomy friend any longer. now she has started making fun of medisliked she bebecause of im fat. i am kind to her but why cant she be friend towards me? my other problemfriendlyis trying to lose weight. do i do more exercise? use pills? and do you know any other way? or please give me some advices. advice yours, mary 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如：it was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with youluckily i was the amcompletely free then, so ill to say “yes”ill arrive in bristol at around 8 pm in friday oneveninga frenchman was once visiting londonhe wished to take a walk to see a citybut he was afraid he might get lost because he knew no words of englishso before he left his hotel, he stopped in the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was stayingthen he walked onat last, he got being lostafter several hours he found a policemanthe frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didnt know the name of his hotel, and he knew the name of the streethe then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebookit was read: “one-way street”【参考答案】1短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）1. 请按标准格式改错，每处错误及其修改均限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。though great progress has made in science these years, there are still many people lived in poor conditions. they make their livingby collecting and selling used thing. their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have no enough money to send their children to there.why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?the answer lies on the population explosion. a president of a developing country once said: “it is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to produce child without limit.” although these few words sound simple enough,but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.【参考答案】2.though great progress has made in science these years, there beenare still many people lived in poor conditions. they make their living livingby collecting and selling used thing. their children cannot go to school thingsbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? dothe answer lies on the population explosion. a president of a developing incountry once said: “it is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to weproduce child without limit.” although these few words sound simple enough, childrenbut they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion. clearly短文改错。we are all busy talk about and using the internet 76. _which set up in the 1960s. at first, the internet was 77. _only used by the government, but in early 1970s, 78. _the universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to 79. _use it, too. otherwise, computers were still very expensive 80. _and the internet was difficult to use it. by the 81. _start of the 1990s, computers become cheaper and easier. 82. _today it is easily to get on-line and it is said 83. _that millions of people use the internet every day. 84. _send e-mail is more and more popular among students. 85. _it has now become one of the most important parts of peoples life.【参考答案】3.76. talk-talking 77. set 前加was78. early 后加the 79. 去掉the80. otherwise -however81. 去掉it 82. become 前加had83. easily-easy 84. 85. send 改为sending(2013四川)today we had a chemistry test. i found the test difficulty, but i tried hardly to do it. suddenly mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. after think for some time, i let her copy my answers. but after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office. the teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. we were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. i was very upset. i didnt cheat. i was just helping a friend. why does she punish me?答案：today we had a chemistry test. i found the test ， but i tried to do it. suddenly mary, my best friend, me to let her copy my answers. after for some time, i let her copy my answers. but a