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山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错（3）及参考答案1.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。dear elli， im a senior student. i like making friend with people and i do my best to get on well for everyone. but in last week i found that one of my friends wrote in her english diary that shedislikes me. he doesnt want to my friend any longer. now she has started making fun of mebecause of im fat. i am kind to her but why cant she be friend towards me? my other problemis trying to lose weight. do i do more exercise? use pills? and do you know any other way?please give me some advices. yours, mary 【参考答案】1.dear elli， im a senior student. i like making friend with people and i do my best to get on well for friends witheveryone. but in last week i found that one of my friends wrote in her english diary that shedislikes me. he doesnt want to my friend any longer. now she has started making fun of medisliked she be because of im fat. i am kind to her but why cant she be friend towards me? my other problem friendlyis trying to lose weight. do i do more exercise? use pills? and do you know any other way? orplease give me some advices. adviceyours, mary 4.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及每一个单词的增加、删除或或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 mrsmith had neither wife nor childrenhe liked nothing but drinkinghe almost spent all of his money drinkssometimes he went hungry, but he had to borrow some money to buy some foodone evening he met a friend of him in the streetthe man invited him to have dinner in a restauranthe was very happy that he drank too muchhis friend stopped a taxi and ask the driver to take him homesoon they reached in the door of his housethe driver drove awaybut mrsmith couldnt insert the key into the keyholejust then a policeman went up, offering to help him but he refused, saying the house is circled nowif you can keep it moving, i can open the door myself”【参考答案】4、1. 4.wife前加 a2. money 后加on 或者 drinks 改为 drinking3. but改为and 或so4. him改为his5. very 改为so6. ask改为asked7. in 删掉8. went 改为came9. circled 改为 circlingkeep改为stop或者prevent，或在moving前加 from5.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i am glad to hear of you again. you want to know that everything is going in our school. in shortly, all has been improving since the school had began to carry on new policies. in the past, teachers always keep on explaining the points in class. our students just listened and took note. but now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. before class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. for example, we can read what we are interested in. we can go to the library or surf internet for various kinds of information. we are now masters of study, and we are happy.【参考答案】5.i am glad to hear of you again. you want to know that everything is going in our school. in shortly, all has been from how shortimproving since the school had began to carry on new policies. in the past, teachers always keep on explaining the points keptin class. our students just listened and took note. but now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the we notes raisedteachers or ourselves. before class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. for afterexample, we can read what we are interested in. we can go to the library orsurfinternet for various kinds of information. thewe are now masters of study, and we are happy.2.短文改错文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i often quarrel about my mother over whether i can watch tv after school. she holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. it seems to me that once i am allowed to do that, ill unable to control myself and forget all about my study. she also thinks it is bad for my eye. but i really cant accept her ideas. in my opinion, watch tv can set my mind at rest after a days hard works. besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. thus, we shouldnt be forbidden to watch tv.【参考答案】2.i often quarrel about my mother over whether i can watch tv after withschool. she holdsview that senior three students have to make fully use of the full every minute to work hard at their lessons. it seems to me that once i am her allowed to do that, ill unable to control myself and forget all about my bestudy. she also thinks it is bad for my eye. but i really cant accept her ideas. eyes in my opinion, watch tv can set my mind at rest after a days hard works. watching workbesides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at has 删除atabroad. thus, we shouldnt be forbidden to watch tv.3.短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在下面加上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear jim,i am so exciting that you will come to china. i will free from december 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you .i will meet you at the airport and then you will take bus no.8 for my home .you worry about the weather here in your email. in fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. it isnt very cold, but you neednt bring many clothes with you . during your stay here , ill take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. i am sure we will have greatly fun together.i am looking forward to meeting you soon. john 【参考答案】3.10. exciting改excited11. free前加be12. a去掉13. you改we14. for改to 15. worry改worried16. it改that17. but改so18. interests改interest19. greatly改great3.下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。one day tom and i were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. he was badly hurt. many people crowded around us. someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so tom disagreed. he has learned first aid. he said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. at that time the old man wasnt breathing. tom asked me to call in the first aid center at once and he began to start the old mans breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. they said that we had done was correct. i have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a reall