山西省霍州市高考英语书面表达训练及参考范文（11）.doc

山西省霍州市2014高考英语书面表达训练（11）及参考范文【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学二模试题】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。when sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. he thought he would be able to go home every weekend. when he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.he was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. he started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. he was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. he tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. he started feeling homesick (想家) and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.he got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. he could not concentrate in the classroom. all he could think was being at home with his family. he had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. he was angry and felt lonely. he thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括： 时间、地点和起因； 想家给学习和生活带来的影响； 你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。【参考范文】读写任务：version 1:sam, a student, was sent to a boarding school, in which he missed his parents very much, and thus he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons. (31 words) in fact, in real life, everyone must have an experience of feeling homesick. i remember when i was 10 years old, because my parents were busy, i was sent to my uncles in another city. right here, i would have to study in school for two years. although my uncle and his family were really kind to me, i still felt homesick. at first, i couldnt sleep well, because i didnt adapt to the climate there. and, since different teachers have different teaching styles, it was difficult for me to understand the lessons in the beginning. besides, i was new for the students there. as a result, hardly did i have any close friends. feeling terribly lonely, i couldnt help thinking my parents and my fellow guys in my city every now and then. however, as days went on, i slowly adapted myself to the new environment. it was because i actively communicated with my new schoolmates and made friends with them that my homesickness gradually disappeared.（167 words）【参考范文】读写任务：version 2:sam was sent to a boarding school and tried to adapt himself to it but failed. consequently he began to feel homesick and lonely and became reluctant with his study. (30 words)being homesick is not at all strange to anybody. in reality, i had a similar experience. in order to promote our competitive strength in exams, we were only allowed to go home once a month this term. it was the first time that i had had to stay in school for such a long time. so much did i miss my parents that on no account would i meet them without bursting into tears. it was this homesickness that had a bad effect on both my life and study. missing my family so much, i did find it difficult to have a good meal and fall asleep. i could not concentrate on my study and my study efficiency went down sharply. worse still, totally lost in the great pressure from study, i didnt know how to deal with it. i was about to abandon myself when my teachers gave me some advice on how to adapt to this busy school life. as a matter of fact, it was high time that i should study hard and independently. i then turned my homesickness into the motivation to study diligently. moreover, i made more friends and frequently participated in outdoor activities, through which i was able to relax myself and share my feelings with others. having seas of interesting things to do, i finally became accustomed to enjoying my school life. tough as it was to adjust to a brand new school life, i succeeded eventually. the experience of overcoming the difficulties has now become a precious memory and a sum of wealth in my life. (264 words) 【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（8）】读写任务（共1小题；满分25分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。the actions of international development volunteers, and the relationships they build, live on long after the volunteers return home.one such volunteer is carlie rocco. after completing an australian youth ambassadors for development (ayad) role, 27-year-old carlie travelled to china to take up the role of rural development advisor(咨询员)at yunnan agricultural university. “i had an interest in working indevelopment and learning new skills, so i decided to volunteer to be able to pursue that. we had one project where we used this knowledge to grow and collect chinese medicinal herbs (中药）, and then linked them up with chinese medicine companies.” “its a great way to acquire a lot of new skills in a short space of time it would take a lot longer if you wanted to do that in australia, to acquire some of those universal professional skills like relationship building, communication and cross-cultural skills.” reflecting on her volunteer experience, carlie felt proud of what she managed to achieve together with her local colleagues at yunnan agricultural university and, alter all, she gained valuable professional skills in the process:【写作内容】1. 以约30个词总结carlie作为志愿者的工作和收获。2. 以约120个词就“志愿者工作”发表自己的看法，并包括如下要点：(1)你认为志愿者工作有何意义；(2)列举你或他人的事例说明你的看法；(3)你认为成为一名优秀志愿者的最重要的素质是什么。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_ 【参考范文】读写任务 (one possible version)as an australian youth, carlie worked as a rural development advisor at yunnan agricultural university. she spared no effort to help others, and gained some valuable skills. as shown from carlies experience, providing a free service for others and improving oneself is what volunteer work is all about. my elder sister worked as a volunteer for the 2010 guangzhou asian games. she was responsible for showing the audience in and out of the stadiums and demonstrating a series of gestures to cheer up the athletes at the game. every night when she got back late, she was too exhausted to say a word or stand up. but she has learnt to appreciate what others have done for her, which she used to take for granted.”thus it can be seen that gratefulness is the most important quality for volunteers, because to be an excellent volunteer is to give rather than receive.【2013黄浦区】guided writingdirections: write an english composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.联系高三学习生活，详细描述一件令你印象最深刻的事。 （文中请不要出现真实的校名和人名。） 【参考范文】sample 1 away flows time. there are so many unforgettable things in my school life which are worth mentioning. the most wonderful one, which ill remember for good is taking part in the english speech contest. i used to be a shy boy who lacked confidence. at the beginning of the senior three year my best friend encouraged me to participate in the speech contest. afraid of delivering an address on the stage, i declined. i, in the end, agreed as he insisted. he helped me practice my speech skills as well as gestures and standing position. my skills were improved, modestly but steadily. then came the day of the contest. nervous as i was, i walked onto the stage, smile on face. with so many people seated in the hall, i felt anxious and my speech was not fluent at first. when i saw my friend listening attentively, i remembered the nights we spent together practicing speech. i was inspired and the speech flowed on successfully. the audience applauded with appreciation at the end of the speech while i happily found i was no longer the shy boy. it was the support from my friend that enabled me to gain confidence. while life in senior three is occupied, wonderful things take place every day, the precious friendliness has left such a deep impression on my mind that i will never forget it. (231 words)(9+9+4=23)【参考范文】sample 2 the thing that impressed most in grade 12 took place on a sunday morning. that was when i took part in an english contest, in the final stage. the contest was so difficult that i thought the only thing i could do was to wish myself good luck. the listening comprehension was unlike what id prepared for, so i just tried my best. but when i moved to the reading part, the situation got better. what id thought to be greek turned out to be just the combination of words i knew the meaning of. i felt a little bit happier. as to the writing, i had wanted to give it up and let my creation fly, but i surprisingly found that i had a lot to say about the topics. i even used the stories of a scientist id read about to support my idea! then it was an oral exam. although it was a contest, i still told the teachers exact what i had in mind. i didnt have anything fancy to say, but the thoughts were genuine. the result came and i won the third prize! at first i thought it was sheer luck, but then i realized that what i had learned helped a lot. i didnt mean to prepare for it, but what i had done brought me what i deserved. even though im no faced with the college entrance exam, i still know that what really matters is the process of learning. do your job and the result wont fail you! (257 words)(8+8+4=20)【参考范文】sample 3 do you have the fear of acting on the stage? well, i do, at least before i was asked to perform at the schools arts festival. as the arts festival drew near, the teachers asked me to read an english poem, which made my heart jump. this would be a perfect chance to show my english talents, but not in front of the whole school! i was a shy boy that even freaked out when speaking in front of my class. as i strongly opposed to this kind offer, the teacher told me, “youll never know how things go unless you give it a try.”encouraged as i was, i repeated the poem in front of the mirror for countless times, being more confident every time. the day finally came and i was on the stage, sharing the beauty of english with the whole school. i managed to read the poem in an idiomatic accent without