广东省高三英语二轮专题精品卷 写作（8）.doc

广东省2014届高三英语二轮专题精品卷：写作（8）iv.写作 (共2节，满分40分)第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）有市民向记者报料：网上有人代写暑假作业, 且参与代写的学生大多是在校大学生。“枪手”透露：代写作业收入可观。引起了各方说法。你作为记者将此事报道在某教育报上。学生作业太多找人代劳很无奈。家长强烈反对这种做法，只会耽误孩子的学业。老师暑假作业应因人而异：老师在布置作业时应该根据不同成绩的学生设置不同的作业， 这样既能对学生有所帮助也能减轻学生负担。专家代写作业害人不浅。老师不能把暑假当成学期的延伸，布置作业应尽量少，让学生在暑假得到充分的休息。【写作内容】1. 市民报料网上代写作业现象；2. 各方说法。【写作要求】 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。florence chadwick was a great swimmer. however, not all of her efforts worked out. in addition to working hard, she had a secret for success. at the age of 34, her goal was to become the first woman to swim from catalina island to the california coast. however, in 1952, the sea was like an ice bath and the fog was so dense that she could hardly see her support boats. her body was numb(麻木) and she had been swimming for nearly 16 hours. against the cold grip of the sea, she struggled onhour after hourwhile millions watched on national television. alongside florence, in one of the boats, her mother and her trainer offered encouragement. they told her it wasnt much farther. but all she could see was fog. they urged her not to quit. she never had until then. with only a half mile to go, she asked to be pulled out. still warming her chilled body several hours later, she told a reporter, “look, im not excusing myself, but if i could have seen land i might have made it.” it was not tiredness or even the cold water that defeated her. it was the fog. she was unable to see her goal. two months later, she tried again. despite the same dense fog, she swam with her faith intact（未受影响的）and her goal clearly pictured in her mind. she knew that somewhere behind that fog was land and this time she made it!【写作内容】 你准备参加学校最近组织的一次英文演讲比赛，主题是“the value of goals”。在准备演讲时，你读到上面的文章，给你很大的启发。请准备一份演讲稿。开头部分已给出，但不计入总词数。1、以约30个词概括短文的要点；2、然后以约120个词谈谈你对“目标的重要性”的看法，内容包括：1）你读完这个故事的感受；2）谈谈你是如何理解目标在人生当中所起的作用的；3）鼓励大家要树立目标，并为目标的实现而努力。写作要求：1在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准：概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯several days ago, i came across a story about glorence chadwick, _ 第一节：基础写作 one possible version： some citizens told reporters that some do summer homework for middle school students on line and those who do homework for middle school students are mostly college students, who reveal that they are well paid by doing homework for others. the phenomenon has aroused different opinions . in many students view, there is so much homework that they have no choice but to ask others to do it but parents strongly oppose the behaviour, saying that it will delay the childrens studies. some teachers suggest summer homework should vary from student to student and that teachers should assign different homework according to the student with different grades, thus not only helping them a little but also lessening their study burden. some experts believe that doing homework for others does great harm to students and that teachers should give as little homework as possible and let the students have enough rest during the summer vacation instead of regarding summer vacation as the extension of the learning semester. 第二节：任务型写作 one possible version： several days ago, i came across a story about glorence chadwick, the first woman who succeeded in swimming the catalina channel. it was a goal in her mind that enabled her to make the breakthrough regardless of dense fog, which failed her in her first attempt. i was deeply inspired by such a story, as it makes me realize the power of a goal in shaping ones success and gives me strength to pursue my goal, despite the hardships i am to go through.in my view, goals are crucial to guiding our lives. to begin with, as goals often go with hopes, they have the magic to enable us to be positive towards ups and downs. moreover, bearing goals in mind, we are less likely to be blind to the ideals of our life and be distracted from our way to success. finally, as goals are what we are longing for, they thus can motivate us to