雅思小作文流程图讲解+满文例文.ppt

流程图写作要点 找到流程图的过程 起点 终点 找到图上标出的已知动作 如果出现生词 尽量猜测 流程图里面存在生词是完全正常的 生词多数都是名词或者动词 而且生词旁边还配有解释性的图画 所以大致方向是可以猜出来的 最好方法是直接抄到文章里 按照步骤 分段描述 千万不能省略任何一步 切记 加入流畅合理的表示顺序的关联词 句型以主动为主 搭配被动 以及主语从句 例如 Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat 时态要使用一般现在时 Writingtask1 Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask Theillustrationsbelowshowhowchocolateisproduced Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures Writeatleast150words 高分范文及深度点评 Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate 所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时 流程图必备三个词 process整个过程 stage阶段 step步骤 流程图特点之一 介绍过程要使用一般现在时 Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica AfricaandIndonesia Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans 开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacaotree 而是通过主题词chocolate引出 否则显得太唐突 流程图特点之二 大量使用定语从句 将有关联的两句话连接 流程图特点之三 大量使用被动语态 Firstly whenthepodsareripe theyareharvested thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes Duringthefermentingprocess thebeansturnbrown 流程图特点之四 使用一些表示顺序的连接词 三个句子的并列 句子A 句子Band句子C 流程图特点之五 要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容 否则可能达不到字数要求 但是一定要把握尺度 千万不要加上自己的主观观点 否则会扣分 Next thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry Afterthis thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius Afterbeingroasted thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisremoved Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate Finally theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced 流程图特点之六 一般不需要写总结 句型积累 开始阶段Firstofall Tobeginwith Atthefirstinitialstage Duringthebeginningphase S1 S2Theprocessstartsfrom NNisthefirststepin 次阶段before until after oncenext second followingThenextstageisThenextstepintheprocessis 表示一段时间 Ittakestendaysforeacheggtobecome Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntil Afteraperiodof Writingtask2 Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask Thediagrambelowshowstheprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustry Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures andmakecomparisonswhererelevant Writeatleast150words Brickmanufacturing Clay typeofstickyearththatisusedformakingbricks pots etc 满分范文 Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps Firsttherawmaterial clay whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay richareashastobedugupbyadigger Thenthelumpsofclayareplacedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick shapedpiecesbymeansofawirecutter Thosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andamaximumof48hours severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso calledkiln anothertypeofhightemperatureoven Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200 1300 Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhavebecomehard theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination beitabuildingsiteorstorage 215words 考官评语 Band9Thisresponsefullysatisfiestherequirementsofthetask Allkeyfeaturesofeachstageoftheprocessareappropriatelyandaccuratelypresented Anexcellentoverviewisgivenatthebeginningoftheresponseandthisskilfullyincorporatespartoftherubric changingthegrammaticalfunction togiveabriefsummaryofthewholeprocess Themessageisveryeasytoread withseamlesscohesionthatattractsnoattention Paragraphing linkingandreferencingareallskilfullymanaged Thelanguageusedisveryfluentandsophisticated Awiderangeofvocabularyandstructuresareusedwithfullflexibilityandaccuracy Onlyrareminor slips canbefoundandthesedonotdetractfromthehighrating 雅思流程图的重点词汇解析 表述时间 in10daysduringtheperiodof10daysTheprocesslastsforupto10daysafter10days10dayspasseduntilsomethinghappened 表示然后 then next inthenextstate followingthat afterthat thenextstepinthestageis 表示过程 process procedure formation Development表示步骤 step stage phase 时间阶段 afteraperiodof months days minutes during 顺序连词 first firstofall inthefirststage initially tobeginwithsecond