2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习(6).doc

2014高考英语短文改错抓分练习（6）及答案【海口市2013高考英语模拟题】短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。3必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.【参考答案】短文改错I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate that/which或happening classmatesbought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. theUnluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are their werequickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They and were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the after 去掉toseriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention strongly payto food safety.短文改错(2010唐山联考)When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard，1._hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience2._pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected3._because I didnt want to let her off. I was born to a poor4._peasant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the5._things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6._lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “No pains7._no gains.”I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8._have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mothers push and the 9._pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.10._答案与解析：1去掉第二个was此处不用被动语态，故was多余。2experienceexperienced此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态保持一致。3thatwhat这里用what引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语，that没有这种用法。4offdown结合上下文可知此处意为“我不想让她失望”，故应用let sb. down表示“让某人失望”。5butand或so此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and或so。6waswere此处主语为all the things，故应用were。7better前加alead a better life表示“过一种更好的生活”。8mothermothers此处表示“达到了妈妈的期望”，故应用其所有格形式。910goodbad根据上文可知此处是指“我不再认为压力是一件坏事”，故应将good改为bad。短文改错 (2010保定调研)Last Sunday I went to the Birds Nest Stadium. At gate1._I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2._to them in English and then we began to chat. From the chat3._I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4._but most of them were fond of Chinese culture. They were5._busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6._the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7._After come out of the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8._and had a good time there. We exchanged our email address so that9._we could write to each other later. They thanked us again and again.10._I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.答案与解析：1gate前加the此处表示特指，指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。2AmericaAmerican应该用形容词来修饰名词。3去掉第一个togreet是及物动词，可直接加宾语，不必加to。45butand来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折，应用and表示并列。6seemseemed根据事情发生的时间last Sunday和全文的时态可知，此处也应用一般过去时。7去掉beentake place无被动语态。8comecoming介词after后要用动名词形式。9addressaddresses交换的是双方的邮箱地址，故此处应用复数形式。10usme是“我”帮助了他们，因此用me。【海口市2013高考英语模拟题】短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。3必须按答题要求做题。否则不给分。I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.【参考答案】短文改错I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate that/which或happening classmatesbought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. theUnluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are their werequickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They and were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the after 去掉toseriousness of the food safety problem. I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention strongly payto food safety.短文改错(2010重庆调研)Today is Sunday. We had not lessons. After breakfast1._I wanted to do with my homework when Li Lei rang me.2._He asked me to go to the cinema with he. I agreed, but3._I have to finish my homework first. About an hour later，4._we went out. In the way we saw Kate; she was mending5._her bike. She looked very worry.“Let us help you.” Li Lei6._and I all said. “All right.” And we stopped to help her.7._There was nothing much wrong with the bike, so it cost8._us only several minutes time to finish it. Kate was very 9._thankful. When we hurried to the cinema, the film had10._been on for ten minutes. But we felt happy.答案与解析：1notno“没有课”应是have no lessons或dont have any lessons。2去掉withdo是及物动词，直接跟名词作宾语。3hehim介词后跟代词时要用宾格。4havehad本文是叙述过去发生的事情。5InOn“在途中”是on the way。6worryworried“她看上去很着急”，应该用形容词作表语。7allboth因为只有我和李蕾两人。8costtook“花费时间做什么”要用It takes some time to do something。9去掉time有具体的时间名词minutes，无须再用time。10 短文改错(2010成都检测)My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1._and August. We will travel for about two months but2._will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3._have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4._as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5._think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6._we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7._and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8._medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9._some food for picnics. Im sure that we will have fun.10._答案与解析：1amare本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。2butand此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。3删去第二个the一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。4spendcost本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。5hadhave短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。6whatthat/which或删去what“that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。7themus根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。8possiblypossibleas.as possible表示“尽可能”。9prevent前加to此处是不定式短语作目的状语。10 短文改错(2010绵阳诊断)Tom is a little boy, but he is only seven years old. One day he1._went to the cinema. It was the first time for him to do that. He2._bought a ticket and then went out. But after two