高考英语书面表达0103 图画式作文专题指导（1）.doc

2013高考英语书面表达01-03：图画式作文专题指导（1）专题二 图画式作文专题指导2012年全国及各地高考只有4篇（北京卷，上海卷，福建卷，陕西卷）以图画式命题的作文。尽管高考以这种命题形式命题的作文较以往热度已经大大降低，但是这种形式毕竟与开放式作文密切相关，应该是高考改革发展的大势所趋。图画式作文要求考生将画面所包含的信息转换成文字，旨在避免考生汉语思维，要求考生直接用英语思维。它要求通过图画提供的图像信息写一篇短文，包括叙述一个故事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出结论。图画式作文就内容而言，可以写观察到的内容，也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容；就表达方式而言，可以单纯地理解、说明，也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述。图画式作文要求考生不仅具有一定的观察分析能力，还要有较强的语言表达能力、想象力和逻辑思维能力。考生在写图画式作文时，有时难以取得比较理想的成绩，其原因主要有：观察图画不细致，不能准确地对图画内容加以分析概括；分不清内容主次，从而不能层次分明地表达作文主题的意思；无法将图片所要求表达的意思恰到好处地用文字写出来。写好图画式作文的关键是：一定要根据自己掌握的词汇与熟悉的句型结构构思短文内容，并直接用英语表达，千万不要先想好一句句的中文，然后逐句译成英文，那样就往往会超出自己的英语水平，作文中就会出现“生造”的英语句子，难免会出错。另外，对于与图画无关的事要少写，还要注意人称、时态的呼应，整个作文要通篇考虑。写作要领：准确审题。这是看图作文写作的基础。准确审题就是注意文体、人物和时态。把握情境。这是看图作文的关键。要根据图画，合理想象，围绕特定的主题，把握情景，（利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所，以及图中的文字说明和标识来）提炼要点等。发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象，发表自己的联想或感想。实例指导假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于60。saturday, june 2finethis morning,_描述图画一、提炼要点 围绕图中人物的动作和重要的图标来提炼要点。第一幅图图中人物有三个：“我”和两个游客。“我”在街上行走；两位游客正在看地图。图中的图标“？”说明游客很困惑，看上去是迷路了。第二幅图 “我”走上前去主动提供帮助。根据图标我们可以知道：游客告诉“我”他们要到天坛去。第三幅图 “我”带他们到了附近的汽车站。根据图标我们可以知道：“我”建议他们乘20路公共汽车到那儿去。他们对我的帮助表示感谢。第四幅图 汽车来了，游客上车，我和游客挥手告别。看到他们上了车，我感到一种满足感。遣词造句第一幅图图中人物有三个：“我”和两个游客。“我”在街上行走；两位游客正在看地图。图中的图标“？”说明游客很困惑，看上去是迷路了。this morning, i was walking on the street.i saw that two travelers were reading a map.they looked puzzled. it seemed they were lost. this morning, i was wandering on the street. i happened to see two travelers reading a map.they looked puzzled. they couldnt find the way to their destination.this morning, i was hanging out on the street. it happened that i found two travelers could do nothing but read a map of beijing carefully, feeling puzzled.第二幅图 “我”走上前去主动提供帮助。根据图标我们可以知道：游客告诉“我”他们要到天坛去。i went up to them and asked how i could help. they told me they were looking for the temple of heaven.i went up to them and offered to help them. they told me they wanted to go to the temple of heaven. they wondered how to get there.i went up to them and asked what i could do for them. they replied friendly to me that they planned to visit the temple of heaven. they got lost.第三幅图 “我”带他们到了附近的汽车站。根据图标我们可以知道：“我”建议他们乘20路公共汽车到那儿去。他们对我的帮助表示感谢。i led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take bus no. 20. it could take them directly. they appreciated my help greatly.following me, they arrived at the nearby bus stop. i asked them to take bus no. 20. it could take them directly. they thanked me for my offer greatly.i guided them to the nearest bus stop to find the most effective and time-saving method. my suggestion was to take bus no. 20, which could take them to the destination directly. as a consequence, they expressed sincere appreciation to me for my enthusiasm.第四幅图 汽车来了，游客上车，我和游客挥手告别。看到他们上了车，我感到一种满足感。before long, the bus came. we waved good-bye to each other. seeing them on the bus, i felt a kind of satisfaction.very soon, the bus came. we waved and said good-bye to each other with satisfying smile. eventually, the bus came, and it was the time to set off.they were waving goodbye to me with satisfying smile.standing on the station, i saw the bus became smaller and smaller, finally disappear.everything finished, i felt extremely delighted.二、连贯成篇this morning, when i was walking on the street, i saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. it seemed they were lost. i went up to them and asked how i could help them. they told me they were looking for the temple of heaven. i led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take bus no. 20, which could take them there directly. they appreciated my help greatly. before long, the bus came. we waved goodbye to each other. seeing them on the bus, i felt a kind of satisfaction.（范文）发表感想本文是日记，日记中应该有感想而言。但是范文中对于感想几乎没有涉及。如果要想拿到高分，加上几点感想是必须的。what did this morning is not worth mentioning, but i think when it comes to learning from lei feng, we should do some good deeds even if they are the smallest .i was very proud of myself because not only did i offer my help to the ones in need, but also i realized the significance of devotion. offering help is the key word of our time; therefore, it is imperative for us to carry forward and further develop the spirit of lei feng in our daily life.【参考范文】this morning, when i was walking on the street, i saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. it seemed they were lost. i went up to them and asked how i could help them. they told me they were looking for the temple of heaven. i led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take bus no. 20, which could take them there directly. they appreciated my help greatly. before long, the bus came. we waved goodb