广东省揭阳市高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（16）.doc

揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（16）附参考范文短文改错-【重庆南开中学】第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。time is valuable but limit. theres a famous saying, “time is money”,this shows the importance of time. when76 time has gone, it will never return back. it is a pity 77 when many people make poor u se of time. they spend their 78 precious time oversleeping, drinking and traveling. we dont 79 realized wasting time equal to wasting part of their life. 80 they always regret having made a little achievement so far. 81 therefore, we should form the habit of value time. do not 82 put off what can be done today until tomorrow. lazy 83 will not only bring us failure, but also lead us on the road 84 of poverty and even death. 85 *结束高考英语书面表达写作指导-议论文（观点类）1.正反观点式议论文模板导入：第1段：（导入话题）（观点有分歧）正文：第2段：most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）.(列出23个赞成的理由)第3段：however, the others are strongly against it. （反方观点） (列出23个反对的理由)结论：第4段： （个人观点）2.观点论述类议论文模板：导入：第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题as a student, i am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）the reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承上启下）正文：第2段：first of all. secondly. besides.(列出23个赞成或反对的理由)结论：第3段：in conclusion, i believe that. （照应第1段，构成总分总结构）段首句. 导入：1 no one can doubt the essential fact that over the last years has caused wide public concern all over the world. 人 in increasing numbers are beginning to believe that 没有人能否认这一重要事实：最近几年？问题在全世界受到了普遍关注。越来越多的？开始相信这种状况将2 there is a general debate today over the phenomenon of 3 when it comes to education,-说到4 theres no denying the fact that.-.事实不容否认-5 _ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。6 there is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.无可否认，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。7 there is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问，我们的教育制度令人不满意。8 rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. 虽然我们的国家很富有，但是我们的生活质量却令人很不满意。9 .it goes without saying that. 不用说.(意思是：论述的内容是显而易见的）意见分歧：1 no invention has received more praise and abuse than internet.没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。2 _ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。3 many people believe that- produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote-4 people differ in their attitudes towards failure. faced with it, some of them -. others, however,-人们对失败持有不同的态度。面对失败，有人-，。然而，另一些人却-5 to average people, they often tend to live under the illusion that, is this really the case?对于一般人来说，他们常常以为，然而这是真的吗？6 there is a growing tendency for sb to -越来越多的人人seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward 7 an increasing number of experts believe that ？will exert positive effects on however, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more -who complain that have brought many serious problems越来越多的 -相信-起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的-却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨-了许多严重的问题8 what calls for special attention is that.需要引起特别注意的是.科技发展:with the opening and reform policy being carried out, thousands upon thousands of foreign visitors are crowding into our country. they are eager to see this old mysterious land with a splendid culture of more than 5,000years.?i随着改革开放政策的贯彻执行，数以万计的外国游人涌入中国。他们渴望参观这个有着5000多年灿烂文化的神秘古国。in the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.第5套短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)i saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. a girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. the young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. he hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. the girl was badly hurt and couldnt move. the young man didnt know how to do. i ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. soon the police reached. they send her to the nearest hospital at once. one of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. i think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.短文改错参考答案(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)i saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. a girl was crossing the street on a zebrahappen 去掉tocrossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. the young man saw the girl but tried to stop, when andbut he drove too fast to stop. he hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. the girl was badly hurt and couldnt hismove. the young man didnt know how to do. i ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. soon the policewhatreached. they send her to the nearest hospital at once. one of the policeman talked to the young man andarrived sent policemenwrote something down while was talking. i think it is very dangerous to drive very fast. 加he或去掉was*结束【重庆南开中学】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。dear bob,i am pleasant to learn that youre coming to beijing76 to study chinese. ive got some informations about foreigners 77 learning chinese. here id like to recommend you famous 78 language school-elite language school.it reported that such a chinese training course will satisfy 79 your demands. it starts in february 20th and lasts a month till 80 march 19th . it is given in no. 1 lecture hall but its intended 81 for beginners like you. besides, the tuition is reasonable. it cost 82 only 2,000 rmb. i think it suits you and you will enjoy them. 83 if you have more questions, please let me know or just sufing84 www. e. the more you will know, the more eager you will 85 be to come.hope to see you in beijing soon.yours,li hua*结束表格提示类3. 人类已进入了一个崭新的世纪，不同的人有不同的幸福观。某英语杂志正在中学生中进行幸福观讨论，请你根据下表的提示，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一些人的观点及理由，发表对其中某一观点的看法，并表明自己的观点和理由，然后向该刊投稿。students opinion reason some moneybuying and doing anythingsome health for enjoymentsome wealth from parentsfree from worki 注意：1不要照抄表中的原句，否则酌情扣分。2词数：120左右。what is happiness in my mind?happiness means different things to different people. for example, some students, believe that if they have much money or large possessions, they will be happy. they believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money. some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like. many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. in this way they dont have to work hard, and they can own everything .i dont quite agree with the above points. i dont think money means happiness. we cant buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, i value knowledge, which makes me happy, for i can do much for mankind with knowledge. although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.*结束你的家乡是一个依山傍水的小镇。过去，这里人们生活极其贫困。解放以后，人们生活的各个方面都发生了很大变化。请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇120词左右的短文，介绍该镇的变化情况。 人口约20万面积约360平方公里地理概况坐落在大山脚下，面临一条大河，新建有许多工厂、商店、医院、学校教育状况解放前只有一所学校，只有富家子弟可以上学，现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学生活状况丰富多彩，人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等参考范文one possible version my hometown is a small town. it has a population of more than 200 thousand people and an area of 36 square kilometers. it is at the foot of a mountain. in front of the town lies a big river. before liberation, people there lived a hard life. great changes have taken place there since liberation. they have built many factories, shops, hospitals and schools. the school education has also improved. before liberation there was only one school. only the rich children could go to school. now there are 10 schools. every child can go to school. peoples lives are colorful. after work they go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports. they all live a happy life. *结束第7套短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i was born in a farmer family in suizhong county, liaoning province in june, in 1965 when i was a child, i dreamed of flyingin the sky i joined the army in june, 1983 in 1992, i was sent tothe air force base in august, 1996, i was one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination i worked hardly, because i was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998. 20090318i was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronautslateron oct15, 2003, i successfully fly to space, circledaround the earth about 14 circle and then returned i was honoredto have given the chance to be the first chinese to travel in s