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揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（5）附参考范文短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i was born in a farmer family in suizhong county, liaoning province in june, in 1965 when i was a child, i dreamed of flyingin the sky i joined the army in june, 1983 in 1992, i was sent tothe air force base in august, 1996, i was one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination i worked hardly, because i was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998. 20090318i was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronautslateron oct15, 2003, i successfully fly to space, circledaround the earth about 14 circle and then returned i was honoredto have given the chance to be the first chinese to travel in space 参考答案短文改错1farmer改为farmer,s2 去掉1965前面的in 3 an air force base。4 把hardly改为hard5把because改为so6在chosen后加as7 manned8 flew 9 把circle改为circles 10 在have后面加been *结束假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人学中文,唱中文歌才艺大赛。你的美国朋友peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。比赛时间:7月18日报名时间:截止到6月30日报名地点:北京电视台注意:1.词数:100左右2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯3.参考词汇:才艺大赛-talentshowdearpeter,_ yours, lihuaguidedwriting:dearpeter,ireadinanewspapertodaythatalearnchinese,singchinesesongstalentshowwillbeheldinbeijingtelevisionstationonjuly18.itisintendedforforeignerswhoaregoodatchinese.iknowyoulikesinging,andyouareinbeijingduringthatperiod.nowthatyouhavestudiedchineseforseveralyearsatauniversityinbeijing,ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyouvelearnedchinese.ifyouwouldliketotry,youllhavetogotothetvstationtosignupbeforetheendofjune.ifthereisanythingicandoforyou,iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.yours,lihu*结束1.（201*陕西卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改的词。 注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 last sunday morning, when i was having a walk in the park near my home, i came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor. making actorsi didnt have my camera with me at that time, but i rushed back home to get . unfortunately, so/and itby the time i got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldnt hadbe seen everywhere. i was really disappointing and about to leave when anywhere disappointedhe walked out a building. he was right there in front of me! i of couldnt believe my luck-not only did i had my photo taken wuth him, but havehe signed his name on my shirt!2.（2011全国ii）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分） 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（j）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 dear george,its been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._back home. thank you very much for showing them around 77._your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. after 78._we said goodbye to you, we went to washington d.c., 79._where we stayed for three days. my brother was so much fond 80._of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81_another couple of day. however, my father had to return to 82._work on monday so we fly back last saturday afternoon. it 83_was really a nice experience. if youd like to make trip to 84._our city some day, i will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._yours,mike【参考答案】76.after-since 77.them-us 78.for-with 79.正确 80.去掉much 81.staying-stay 82.day-days 83.fly-flew 84.trip前a 85.better-more*结束高考英语作文精选范文-应用文类3. 假设你的英文名为jack，是英国诺丁汉大学的中国留学生。你负责为在该校就读的32名中国学生筹划圣诞节期间的苏格兰之行，为期7天，请你给诺丁汉的sta（studentstravel agency）经理phil发一封电子邮件，联系有关事宜。要点如下： （1）希望能够派车接送； （2）需要一名说标准英语，并非常熟悉苏格兰的导游； （3）请求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅馆、费用等情况； （4）你的联系方式：电子邮箱地址：j或电话号码：07747745007 注意：（1）词数：100词左右；（2）开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数； （3）参考词汇：旅馆住宿accommodation；旅行日程安排itinerary；长途客车coachhi, phil,id like you to organize a trip to scotland for us. i have here a group of 32 chinese students studying in nottingham university, who want to go on a seven-day tour during the christmas days. i hope we can have a coach which will take us to scotland and then bring us back to nottingham. we also need a guide who speaks standard english and knows scotland well. i would be very grateful if you can work out an itinerary as soon as possible and tell me about our accommodation, meals as well as how much each of us has to pay. if you have any information, please either email me to j or call me at 07747745007. looking forward to your early reply. yours truly. jack*结束高考英语作文精选范文-应用文类4. 加拿大高中生david在互联网上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是重庆实验中学的李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给david发出一封电子邮件。主要内容包括： . 你怎样得知他的愿望 . 你愿意成为他的朋友 . 你打算如何帮助他 . 你盼望他的回复 注意：词数：100词左右dear david， i am lihua. i am glad to read your notice on the internet and i know you want to make friends with a chinese in order to learn the chinese language and culture. i want to be your friend. now id like to introduce myself to you. i was born in chongqing in 1990，i study in the experimental middle school of chongqing and i am good at english. i think i can help you to know about china by sending e-mails.whats more， we can have chats on the internet in chinese or english and ill tell you the customs，the festivals，the foods，etc. of the chinese. i hope we can keep in touch with each other. i am looking forward to your reply.yours,lihua*结束高考英语：写作综合训练集【写作书信篇】 假设你叫李明。2010年4月14日，我国青海玉树自治州发生强烈地震，造成严重人员伤亡和财产损失。你校组织赈灾活动，希望每人献出一份爱心，捐献一件学习用品。假如你捐献了一副心爱的圆规（或书包、铅笔盒、图书等），请根据下列提示写一封短信给这位不知名的灾区同学。1. 了解灾区情况，表示同情；2. 你珍爱这件学习用品的原因3. 鼓励灾区同学重建家园并提出自己的建议。注意：1.词数：不少于120个; (信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息；4生词提示：一副圆规： a pair of compasses；玉树自治州：the autonomous prefecture of yushu。dear friend,_hoping to get your early reply. yours truly li ming【参考范文】-one possible version:dear friend,when we learned over the radio and in the newspapers that the autonomous prefecture of yushu was struck by a terrible earthquake on april 14th,2010, making more than 2,000 people killed and even more injured .we became very worried. it is said that many houses were ruined, so you cant have your classes as usual. i wonder if things have improved by now.id like to send you a pair of compasses, which were a present given to me by my sister on my last birthday. i hope it will be of some help to your study.as for yourself, dont lose heart and do be strong-minded when facing the great difficulties for the people all over the country are standing by you. and please keep in touch with me and i will try my best to help you , in addition, the government is trying to help the people in the disaster-hit areas rebuild their homes. i believe the day will soon come when you overcome all the difficulties and live a new life.hoping to get your early reply. yours truly, li ming书信类书面表达是高考常用的一种形式。本文通过玉树地震这一事实，让学生给灾区的学生写一封信，文章素材真实，贴近学生生活，容易激发学生情感，使他们有话可说。文章用第一、二人称叙述；时态用现在时。文章要点：1. 了解灾区情况，表示同情；2. 你珍爱这件学习用品的原因；3. 鼓励灾区同学重建家园并提出自己的建议。*结束第一节 短文改错（10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。last sunday i saw a worst storm in yearsit came sudden and went on for over three hoursafter lunch, i went into my room to have a restthe air was hot, but all was quietthen a strong wind started to blow into my roompieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open windowas i ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fallwhen i come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harderthen i heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the housewhen i ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom【参考答案】76a 改为the 77sudden改为suddenly 78but改为and79out后加of 80it改为them 81drop改为drops82come改为came 83more改为much或去掉 84that改为what85broke改为broken*结束短文改错dear mr. li,im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. i got up early as usually in the morning, but when i was ready to leave i find my bicycles front tyre（轮胎）flat. i wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and i didnt have any money with me. i had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing. unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. so i had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. thats how i was late for school.please dont worry with my lessons, mr. li. i will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.yours,wang hui 参考答案：dear mr. li,im very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. i got up early as usually in lessons usualthe morning, but when i was ready to leave i find my bicycles front tyre (轮胎) flat. i wanted to foundtake bus or taxi to school, and i didnt have any money with me. i had to look for a place a but along the street to get my bicycle repairing. unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops repaired that / which were open in the early morning. so i had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. thats how i was late for school. whyplease dont worry with my lessons, mr. li. i will make up for it and turn to teachers for helpabout / over themif necessary. yours,wang hui*结束高考英语：写作综合训练集写作话题议论篇 诚信是处世之本。但是在中学生当中，考试作弊、抄袭作业、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。请你对以上种种现象作简要描述，并以how to guarantee honesty为题，从三个方面，谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。注意：1词数：120左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。how to guarantee honestyas we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. much to our regret, however, _ honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.【参考范文】-one possible version:as we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school stu