广东省揭阳市高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（7）.doc

揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（7）附参考范文第八套短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful67_if the school could be decorated. we students thought the school68_looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in69_a rainy day. we would be much happier and are able to study70_better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons72_and enrich our lives. original art work are too expensive, but 73_unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. using only a74_little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_参考答案、短文改错66. happilyhappy 67. we后加are 68. thoughtthink69. inon 70 去are或arebe 71.正确 72.thatwhich73.workworks 74. unlessif 75. itwe*结束高考英语书面表达常用词汇句型集锦举例：for example，for instance，takefor example，such as，like，and so on，so on and so forth，and so on and on and on， etc.等。说明：thats to say，in other words，namely，等。因果： therefore，as a result，thus，because，because of，thanks to，owing to，due to 等递进：then，besides，in addition， furthermore，moreover， whats more等。顺序：firstly， secondly，thirdly， finally；in the first place，in the second place， in the third place， to begin with，then，furthermore，finally；to start with， next， in addition，finally；first and foremost，besides， last but not least；most important of all，moreover，finally（以上为时间顺序）in the front of，in front of ，before， behind， at the back of， on the right/left（of），to the right /left of，on the other side of ，in the center of ，in the middle of ，at the beginning of ， at the end of ，by the side of ，on the top of ，at the foot of ，on the bottom of， inside，outside， upstairs， downstairs（以上为空间顺序）转折：nevertheless，however，although， though， but，on the country，after all， oppositely等。总结： in short， in a word， in general， generally speaking， finally，at last，as far as i know，in brief， briefly speaking， in the end， as a matter of fact， in reality， in fact， on the whole， in conclusion， on account of this， therefore等。强调： really， indeed，certainly，surely，for sure， above all等。对比： in the same way，just as，in common with， compared with， on the one hand，on the other hand， for one thing ，for another，similarly等。平行：and，bothand，as well as，as well，neithernoror，eitheror，not onlybut also 正确使用时间状语从句的复合句、带宾语从句的复合句、强调句型、带定语从句的复合句、带主语从句的复合句、 条件句、让步或转折的句式等1. 带时间状语从句的复合句its also possible a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping. （2004北京卷） 这类时间状语从句不仅考得频繁，而且连词when， while， as， before， after甚至by the time都考到了，时态上现在时、过去时、过去进行时和过去完成时等都出现了。而且有些年份带时间状语从句的复合句还同时出现多次。因此我们建议广大考生应加强训练这类复合句，在高考中尽量少犯错误，注意时态。2. 带宾语从句的复合句i think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent， and how well youve learned chinese. （nmet2004， i）i am so sorry that i wont be able to attend the lecture on american history tomorrow afternoon. （nmet2004， iii）i would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in future. （2004江苏卷）3. 带定语从句的复合句if there is anything i can do for you， i would be more than glad to help. （nmet2004， i）as is shown on chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. （2004北京卷）4. 其他 强调句型 it was our brave ah fu who had saved my little sister. （nmet1993） 带主语从句的复合句 here is how you can find us on the other side， where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.（nmet1999） so that句型： i became so impatient that i had to go to explain my difficulty. （2004广东卷） i am so sorry that i wont be able to tomorrow afternoon. （nmet2004， iii） the noise was so loud that i couldnt go on studying. （2004广东卷） 让步或转折： i dont know about others， but i used to have to work even at weekends doing homework and attending classes as well. （nmet2001） although the city is modern and convenient， there are still some problems， such as air pollution， crowdedness and noise. 条件句： if there is anything i can do for you， i would be more than glad to help. （nmet2004，i）三、书面表达开头和结尾的写作 1.书面表达的开头俗话说万事开头难。其实，一点也不难。高考英语书面表达的开头句一般已为你写好。你要做的是分段缩进重起第二段。注意千万不要接着已写好的首句。一是不美观，二是不便于阅卷老师细览。那么你的起头句实际上是第二段了。开始句根据要求一般可以写的漂亮一点，即要用一些好的套语开始。比如： as is shown on chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.（2004北京卷） 可是很多考生总在开头处写的不尽如人意，总喜欢搞一些生造的句子或词语来开头，这是一大忌。有些开头可以以套语开始，或以俗语开始比较有力，这样就容易被老师看好。档位在开始时就已定得很高了。 2.书面表达的结尾：结尾在书面表达的写作中占有很重要的地位，通常结尾都要算一个内容要求，所以，写好结尾且让阅卷老师有一个完整的印象是十分必要的。好的结尾可以是一段，由一句或几句话组成，能使全文增色。例如： if there is anything i can do for you， i would be more than glad to help.（ 2004全国卷i） it would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. whats more， some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. dont you think it a wonderful program？ （2004福建卷） in short， the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.（2004湖北卷）*结束 中间段落句1 -人-tend to have a favorable attitude toward - 2 using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。3 the harder you work, the more progress you make.你越努力，你越进步。4 many people seem to overlook the basic fact:许多人似乎忽视了这个基本事实：5 listening to music enables us to feel relaxed.听音乐能使我们放松。6 on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。7 there is no one but longs to.-人们都希望-8 so precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们不能浪费它。结尾句from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although indeed bring us many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管-很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。from what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that_.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论 it is difficult to say whether _is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of_. however, from a personal point of view,i find-在总体上很难说是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现个人观点:as for me, im in favor of the opinion that for the following reasons: 就我而言，我同意 观点。as far as i am concerned, i agree with the latter opinion to some extent. i think that _. i fully agree with the statement that _ because_.完全同意这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下： but _and _have their own advantages. for example, _, while_. comparing this with that, however, i prefer to_.但是，和都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，而。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢） 号召：in a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _.only in this way can _in the future. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来随着社会的发展，。因此，迫切需要。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。 with the development of society, _.so its urgent and necessary to _.if every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 严重影响社会秩序seriously disturb social order促进经济和社会发展to promote economic对健康有好处make for good health对健康有危害a hazard to health破坏环境、污染环境poisoning the environment环境保护protect the environment浪费时间、浪费金钱、浪费精力a waste of money,time and energy促进学习facilitating learning影响学习influnce ones study提高自身水平upgrade oneself反对disapproval赞成in favor of 形容词：1. 贫穷的：poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken2. 富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off3. 优秀的：excellent = eminent = top = outstanding4. 积极的，好的：good = conducive = beneficial=advantageous5. 消极的，不良的：bad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable6. 明显的：obvious = apparent = evident =manifest7. 健康的: healthy = robust = sound = wholesome8. 惊人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous9. 美丽的：beautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching10. 有活力的：energetic = dynamic = vigorous =animated11. 流行的： popular = prevailing = prevalent= pervasive 动词： 1. 提高，加强：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize2 减轻: ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten3. 解决：solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with4. 拆除：destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate5. 培养: develop = cultivate = foster = nurture6. 激发，鼓励：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur7. 认为： think = assert= hold = claim = argue8. 完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve9. 保留：keep = preserve = retain = hold10. 有害于：destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize 名词： 1. 影响：influence= impact2. 危险：danger = perils =hazard3. 污染：pollution = contamination4. 人类：human beings= mankind = human race5. 老人： old people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizens6. 幸福：happiness = cheerfulness = well-being7. 老师：teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers8. 教育：education = schooling = family parenting = upbringing9. 青少年：young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents10. 优点：advantage = merits = superiority = virtue11. 责任： responsibility = obligation = duty = liability12. 能力： ability = capacity = power = skill13. 职业： job = career = employment = profession14. 娱乐： enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment15. 孩子： children = offspring = descendant= kid 短语： 1. 充满了：be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with2. 努力：struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for3. 从事： embark on = take up = set about = go in for4. 在当代: in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day and age5. 大量的: a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of*结束高考英语书面表达指导英语书面表达经典句型必背1.英语作文中常用关联词:并列关系:and,as well as,also.递进关系:besides,in addition,moreover,whats more. 转折关系:but,yet,however,although,otherwise,or,in spite of,despite,instead of,in the end. 时间顺序:while,when,soon after,before,afterward,finally,first,then,next,as soon as .比较、对比:like,unlike,on the contrary,on the other hand.总结:in a word,in general,in short,above all,after all,generally speaking.进一步阐述:in other words,that is to say,for example,for instance,such as . 因果关系:as a result,so,thus,therefore.2.常用句式记事at first he didnt hear anything at all.but then a sudden knock on the door woke him up.following that came a mans voice,saying,“come out,or i will break in!”several minutes later,he heard someone leave.finally he got up,opened the door and looked around.写人she is a girl of twelve years old.she is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.being kind and helpful,she always enjoys helping others out.in her spare time,she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.she gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.there is a boy crying outside.介绍某地liaoning province lies in the northeast of china.it is rich in many kinds of natural resources,such as coal and petrol.it has a population of 23 million.it is terribly cold in winter and very hot in summer there.the people there are friendly and hardworking and their hospitality will never fail to give you a deep impression.our school covers 2.5 square miles.it lies in the north of the city.the teaching building stands in the front of the school,on its left is the administrative building,and on its right is a football field.after walking across a small bridge we can see our dining-hall.four students dormitory buildings stand in line with a lot of trees around them and a river running by.通知用语attention,please!/may i have your attention,please!the sports meet to be held tomorrow is canceled due to the bad weather.a meeting is to be held in room 203 at two oclock tomorrow afternoon.please take a pen and notebook with you and be there on time.thats all,thank you!写信dear tom,im very glad to receive your letter.i am fine but very busy recently,learning english.i have been strictly following the advice given by you in your last letter and have made some progress so far.please remember me to your parents.yours truly,li ming.议论和高级句型in my opinion,i prefer traveling by train rather than by plane.for one thing,a train ticket is much cheaper than a plane ticket.for another,you can enjoy