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I. 短句变长句1. Lies do harm to those who are being told lies. Lies also do harm to those who tell them.Lies not only do harm to those who are being told lies, but also do harm to those who tell them. 2. Usually, a fact is defined as a truth. The truth can be tested by observation or experimentation. Usually, a fact is defined as a truth, something that can be tested by observation or experimentation. 3. Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes. 4. The captain was a tall, thin man with a big mustache. He was pacing the bridge with a look of importance. The captain, a tall, thin man with a big mustache, was pacing the bridge with a look of importance. 5. The grading system at our college should be abolished. The students dont like getting grades. The instructors dont enjoy giving grades. The grading system at our college should be abolished, because neither the students nor the instructors like it. 6. Some students dont like having roommates. They think every person has his or her own way. And several people living together causes some unpleasantness. Those who dont like having roommates argue that several people living together causes some unpleasantness because every person has his or her own way. III长句变短句1. His father, who is a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. His father, a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. 2. He didnt have enough experience, which is the reason why he didnt do the work well. He didnt do the work well for lack of experience. 3. Because people are living in an age when much time has to be taken up by work and other activities, they are unable to find enough time to read extensively even if they intend to do so. Living in a age when much time have to be taken up by work and other activities, people are unable to find enough time to read extensively even if they intend to. 4. Now many automobile parts that are made of plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long. Now many automobile parts made of plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long. III. 综合训练(1)将1，2 句合成一句，将1变成with 独立主格结构。Chinas seven-day holiday for the National day now is entering its twelfth. (2)The possibility of cancelling the holidays, usually called “Golden Week”, has become a widely discussed topic. (3)Some people believe that “Golden Week” brings a lot of benefits. (4)将4，5 合成一句，将5变成介词+动名词短语的形式。 They argue that “Golden Week” is very effective. (5) It introduces the idea of vacation travel to Chinese. (6)Furthermore, it has greatly boosted Chinas travel industry. (7)However, other people suggest that “Golden Week” be cancelled. (8)将8，9 合成，将8变为名词短语充当9的主语。Firstly, a lot of visitors swarm into scenic spots suddenly at the same time. (9) It causes damage and environmental stress. (10)Secondly, “Golden Week” also puts unprecedented pressure on the countrys transportation system and service industry. (11)将11，12，13合并，并通过instead of 将12， 13 合并。Thirdly, after “Golden Week”, the number of tourists declines greatly. (12)It results in the serious imbalance in travel industry. (13)It does not really boost travel industry in a long run. (14)将14，15 合成， 将15变成不定式短语作目的状语。In my opinion, “Golden Week” should be canceled. (15)That we do this can avoid the growing pressure on domestic tourism, scenic spots and transportation systems during the “Golden Week”. (16)将16，17，18合成，并将17，18变为不定式并列结构作目的状语。We need more flexible holidays. (17)Thus we can satisfy the traveling desire of Chinese people. (18)At the same time, we can avoid huge consumption imbalance between the “Golden Week” and usual times. Reference:1. With Chinas seven-day holiday for the National Day now entering its twelfth, 2. The argue that “Golden Week” is very effective in introducing the idea3. Firstly, the sudden rush of visitors swarming into scenic spots at the same time causes damage and environmental stress.4. Thirdly, after “Golden Week”, the number of tourists declines greatly, which results in the serious imbalance in travel industry instea