高考英语总复习（第01期）选择题百题精练 专题17 书面表达（含解析）(1).doc

2014年高考英语总复习（第01期）选择题百题精练 专题17 书面表达（含解析）一、提纲类1.【2014届福建省福州市第八中学第四次质检】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友helen正在写一篇关于各国中学生课外阅读情况的调查报告。她给你发了一封邮件，想了解相关情况。请你根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件：你校学生课外阅读的现状；原因分析；你的看法。注意：根据所给提示，适当发挥，要求内容充实，语意连贯；词数120左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；邮件中不得提及考生所在的学校和本人姓名。参考词汇：课外阅读extra-curricular readingdear helenthank you for your email. now i would like to tell you something _best wishes! yours, li hua【答案】 dear helen,thank you for your email. now i would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school. im sorry to say that most of the students in our school havent realized the importance of reading, especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited. besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.i think the reasons behind that are various. first of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. still others havent formed a habit of reading. they would rather spend their spare time on tv or on the internet. however, reading has many benefits. through reading we can learn more about the world. reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful. so it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. best wishes!yourslihua2.【2014届安徽省桐城十中第三次月考】假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况。承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。生词：申请 apply（v.）,application (n.);志愿者 volunteerdear sir /madam,my name is lihua. i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian games.【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达是要求写一封申请信，类似于自我介绍，学生应该很容易把握写作要求。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，申请信要求介绍自己情况，所以要用一般现在时，当然也必须用第一人称。写作时不要根据材料逐字翻译，应该注意细节的补充以及文章结构上的衔接，以提高作文的档次。【亮点说明】文章格式正确，要点全面。不仅as a college student; with the great fluency in english and passion for sports，be familiar with， participates in ，apply for， 等短语使句子更为简洁生动，而且keen，qualified，等高级词汇的使用也使文章锦上添花，好的句子有：i promise i will offer the best service to whoever participates in the games.此外besides ，whats more 等插入语也让上下文衔接更为紧凑，读起来朗朗上口。考点：考查提纲类作文。3.【2014届山东菏泽市3月模拟】写作 (满分30分) 假如你是红星中学学生会主席李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师jack推荐一名学生助手（assistant）。请根据所给提示给jack写封推荐信。1. 欢迎jack的到来；2. 推荐刘佳做学生助手；3. 刘佳的基本情况（18岁，高三学生，学校十佳学生）；4. 刘佳的特点与特长（活泼、乐观；电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等）。注意：词数：120150；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【解析】试题分析：本文是书信类作文，要求根据所给提示给jack写封推荐信，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：first，second， besides, whats more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：look forward to盼望，have a gift for有天赋， its great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.这句话用了it做形式主语， she is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. 这句话用了定语从句，还有文章还使用了whats more, 这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。考点：考查书信类书面表达4.【2014届福建省漳州七校第二次联考】当今许多家长不仅要求孩子刻苦学习功课，而且还要求他们学习诸如音乐、舞蹈、书法、美术、棋类等各种特长，希望孩子未来能更成功。对此现象的利弊、得失众说纷纭。请你根据下面提示要点写一篇短文并阐述自己的观点。益处：发展多种技能,培养多种爱好, 丰富生活；开阔视野，完善自我；增加就业机会弊端：孩子自我支配时间少； 压力更大； 加重家庭经济负担等你的观点： 注意：1.词数120左右；短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。2.参考词汇： horizon视野many parents are trying to find tutors to teach their children special skills such as music, dancing, calligraphy, painting, chess and so on, _【答案】one possible version many parents are trying to find tutors to teach their children special skills such as music, dancing, calligraphy, painting, chess and so on, hoping theyll become more successful in the future. learning special skills can help children develop both different skills and many interests，which can enrich their lives. meanwhile, they can broaden their horizons and improve themselves. besides, they will be more likely to get good jobs in the future.however, life is hard for these children, who have to spend much time practicing the skills. they hardly have their own time to do what they want. also, they have to suffer more pressure. whats worse , their families have to pay more money for their learning.different children have different interests and they do need time to relax. so i think parents should let children do what theyre interested in. only in this way can they enjoy a happy life.5.【2014届山东省潍坊市3月模拟】假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你周末滑冰时不慎将胳膊摔折，因而未能参加英语考试。请根据以下要点给你的外籍教师mrsclemens写一封电子邮件：1表达歉意并解释缺考原因；2询问补考时间及课外作业(如阅读书目、作业要求等)。注意：1词数：l20150；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear mrsclemens，【答案】one possible version:dear mrs.clemens, im writing to make an apology to you .much as i like your english class , i was absent from your test .last weekend , i was happily skating when suddenly i fell by accident and had my left arm broken. id like to ask you to give me a chance to take a make-up test .please let me know when it is convenient for you after you make the arrangement .in addition , id also like to know your homework for me , such as the reading list for books and the essay to write .finally , id appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for homework. im sorry to have to put you to so much trouble .wish you all the best ! looking forward to your early reply . your. li hua6.【2014湖北省怀化市一模】 directions: write an english composition according to the instructions given below in chinese. 假设你的笔友tony因上期高三期末数学考试未及格而倍受打击，情绪低落。请你 (王华)写一封信给他，鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。注意：1、词数不少于120个；2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【解析】试题分析：这是一封书信，但是只给了一个话题，没有具体的内容，属于开放性作文，给出了一个话题：让你写一封信给tony，鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：as well as 不但而且，as for 至于，turn our dream into reality把梦想变成现实， but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.这句话用了主语从句和表语从句， there is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks.这句话用了固定句型， we should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study. 这句话用了倒装句， i think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learning energetically and efficiently.这句话用了so that引导的结果状语从句。考点：考查开放式作文7.【2014上海市高三3月考】directions: write an english composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese. 1现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3我的建议【亮点说明】文章有两个方面的亮点我们应该学习，一是文章的连贯性很强，浑然天成，这充分的体现在一些连贯词to begin with, besides, however, moreover的使用上，第二方面是文章巧妙的使用了一些固定短语和句型：undoubtedly speaking毋庸置疑, as for至于， work out制定出， compared with traditional shopping, its very convenient. 这是过去分词做状语， its common that articles arent so good as they are described online that customers sometimes buy fake goods. 这句话用了it做形式主语，its troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.这句话也用了it做形式主语，而且还有宾语从句。i like online shopping but i expect that effective measures should be taken to make it better. 这句话用了被动语态。 考点：考查提纲类书面表达8.【2014四川苍溪中学月考】书面表达（共35分）假如你是李明，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：焦虑症状：头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等建议：1考前制定好合适的复习计划2考试期间正常作息3睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠其他建议： (内容由考生自己拟定2点) 注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3.词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。参考词汇：头晕dizzy(adj.)deareditor,imlimingofseniorthree,guangmingmiddleschool.imwritingtotellyouaboutsome symptomsofanxietyamongusstudentsbeforeexams._liming 【答案】i am li ming of senior three, guangming middle school. i am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.most of us feel nervous whenever were taking an important exam. some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. in fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.first of all, in my opinion, its important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. they are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. in this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. we can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. they might help us to have a sound sleep.(wed better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)考点：考查提纲类短文写作9.【2014四川成都七中二诊】书面表达（共35分） 假设你是李华。最近，你校学生会组织开展了“构建低碳校园”活动。请你围绕“节约资源，低碳生活”的主题，根据以下提示，用英语写一封倡议书, 呼吁大家行动起来。日常出行时怎样减少碳排放；在餐厅就餐时怎样节约粮食；在寝室和教室如何节约水、电。注意：词数：不少于120词；倡议书的开头已给出，但不计入总词数；可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。dear fellow students,our school advocates that we should build a low-carbon campus in order to protect the earth. _ li hua【解析】试题分析：这是一篇围绕“节约资源，低碳生活”的主题英语倡议书。倡议对象的称呼已写好。接着是写节约资源的具体措施。主要包括：日常出行时怎样减少碳排放；在餐厅就餐时怎样节约粮食；在寝室和教室如何节约水、电三部分内容。结尾要表示发出号召和希望。最后也可以写上发倡议者的名称。倡议书的写作，先写对发出倡议对象的称呼。2、正文：（1）写清楚发出此倡议的原因或目的。只有交代清楚倡议活动的目的、意义即重要性，倡议对象才能理解、才能采取自觉的行动来响应，否则就很难响应，起不到倡议应有的作用。（2）重点是写倡议的具体内容和要求及要求做到的具体事项。这部分一般是分条开列，以求清晰、明确。（3）结尾要表示倡议者的决心和希望。（4）最后要写上发倡议者的名称。【亮点说明】范文使用一些如first of all,secondly,thirdly,in a word等承接词进行连接,使文章层次清晰。多变的高级句式如宾语从句的使用our school advocates that，表语从句here is what i think we should do及it作形式主语的句型it is everyones duty to work hard to achieve this goal等高级词汇和短语的灵活运用，如build a low-carbon campus，achieve this goal，sum up，in a word， make a big difference 等考点：考查应用文倡议书的写作。10.【2014四川省南充高中第八次月考】书面表达（满分35分）假如你在学校举行的英语演讲比赛中获得了好成绩，将在颁奖仪式上发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿，要点如下：参赛目标是否实现取得好成绩的两点主要原因演讲中发现的自己的不足之处及改进办法注意：1.字数120左右 2发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。good afternoon,everyone! it is an honour for me to speak here. thank you !【解析】试题分析：这是一篇发言稿，所以在语言的使用上要大众化，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容，需要注意不要偏离文章中心。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，11.【2014届福建省莆田市3月质检】第二节书面表达(满分25分) 前不久，你校举行了一场以“my dream”为主题的班会活动。请你根据以下所提供的信息写一篇英语短文。内容要点： 1简述两位同学的梦想及理由； 2你的未来“梦想”是什么； 3谈谈你的想法。注意： 1词数120左右； 2可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3开头部分已为你写好，不计入总词数。 my dream as is shown in the table, my classmates dreams vary considerably._【答案】my dream as is shown in the table, my classmates dream vary considerably. li long, whose mother is a music teacher, has a gift for music and is fond of singing and dancing. as a devoted fan of singer song zuying, she wants to be a singer when growing up. as for wu dong , he is not only strong but also good at sports. he likes playing basketball, running and so on. his dream is to become a national athlete. personally , i dream of becoming a doctor in the future. its a virtue to cure the wounded and rescue the dying. doctors are always respected and admired by people. furthermore, im good at biology , chemistry and so on ,which will lay a solid foundation for becoming a qualified doctor. in my opinion, people may gain what they dream of after hard work.12.【2014届吉林省白山市一中二模】书面表达（满分25分） 高三年级是高中生活的最后一年，在这一年中，学生们要面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生下课后也坐在教室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们：适当的休息很有必要。现在就请你以“a ten - minute break”为主题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。短文的要点如下： 1十分钟的课间休息很有必要。 2要注意适当的休息方式。 3你是怎样利用这十分钟的。 注意：开头已经给出，不计入总词数；字数120字左右。a ten - minute break as a senior three student, time seems much limited. _【答案】a ten minute break as a senior three students, time seems much limited. as a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. in my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary. otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally. during the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. what we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. so doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us. my ten-minute break is always pleasing. sometimes i do some simple exercises. sometimes i have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. when the next class begins, i feel fresh again. experience tells me that making progress needs a thorough and persevering process, but we all know people who cant find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to fail.考点：话题类作文13.【2014届福建省福州八中第六次质检】书面表达 （满分25分）在你的人生成长道路上有很多帮助过你的人。请用英语写一篇短文描写其中一位给你帮助最大的人，并说说你将如何回报他/她。要求：词数120左右。【亮点说明】on the journey of my growth, there are many people who have cared about me and helped me when im in trouble.这里含有一个定语从句。during those days, it was my grandma who looked after me.这里含有一个强调句。she also taught me a lot of useful knowledge which will contribute to my success in life.这里含有一个定语从句。考点：话题类书面表达14.【2014届泉州区惠华中学期中】书面表达（满分：25分）假如你是李华，某校高三年级学生，你想给曾经教过你的外教alan写一封邮件请教在英语学习上遇到的一些问题。主要内容包括：英语成绩不理想； 2。恐难进心仪大学；3。花时多，收效少要求：1. 不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，行文通畅；2. 词数：120左右dear alan,-best wishes。【解析】试题分析：本文是书信类作文，你的外教alan写一封邮件请教在英语学习上遇到的一些问题。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但是不是很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。而且要适当拓展，丰富内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：first，second， besides, whats more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。【亮点说明】所给范文语言流畅，句式变化多样：recently im faced with some difficulty in learning english which has been bothering me continuously. 这句话用了定语从句。hardly have i seen any progress in my english study even though i h