六级真题写作讲义.doc

一、考纲要求写作能力测试部分比例为15%，时间为30分钟，体裁包括议论文、说明文、应用文等。六级作文范文档的要求是：切题；表达思想清楚、文字通顺，连贯性较好；基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。该要求蕴涵着大学英语写作的四个基本考点： 1、切题所谓切题是指在形式上诸如段落、字数、文体、格式等方面满足题目要求，并在内容上没有偏差。2、表达清楚、条理清晰要求考查学生对文章结构的掌握，要求文章主题观点明确，有头有尾，论证说明安排有主次，有轻重。3、文字通顺，连贯性较好要求考查学生对过渡句和连接词或词组的掌握和运用，要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀。4、基本无语言错误本要求考查学生语言基本功的掌握，包括语法与拼写两部分。一篇好的作文应基本达到：有较好的写作基础，文章流畅，遣词造句恰当，文章结构完整，内容符合要求；语法基本正确；句法基本准确，句子与句子，段落与段落之间过渡连贯；有一定词汇量，字数符合要求；说理清楚，内容充实。一篇较差的作文表现为：文章不通顺，无段落，无结构，无明显主题；出现很多基本语法错误，拼写错误；词汇量很小，词不达意，缺乏英语表达能力；不像一篇文章，仅是把一些不连贯的词语拼凑到一起。因此，要想写出一篇高分作文必须具备两个条件：一是扎实的英语语言基础，二是掌握一定的写作技巧。二、应试瓶颈 无从下笔 结构杂糅 错误连篇 逻辑混乱 文不切题 用语平淡三、四大对策 卷面设计 写作内容 行文逻辑 遣词造句四、真题回顾 2006年12月1、阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要； 2、现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是；3、我们大学生应该怎么做。 2007年6月 1、有人做好事期望得到回报；2、有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报；3、我的观点。 2007年12月1、如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，举例说明；2、数字化产品的使用对人类工作、学习和生活的影响； 2008年6月1、随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；2、有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是；3、作为大学生我的看法。 2008年12月1、大学生的心理健康十分重要；2、因此，学校可以；3、我们自己应当。 2009年6月1、有人说名字或名称很重要；2、也有人觉得名字或名称无关紧要； 3、我认为。 2009年12月现在不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班1、对这种做法有人表示支持；2、有人并不赞成； 3、我认为。 2010年6月1、近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象；2、出现这种现象的原因和结果； 3、为改变这种状况，我认为。 2010年12月1、当今社会，搞笑排名很流行；2、个人看法不同。3、我自己的观点。五、命题模式（主流：提纲式；冷门：图表式） 2006年12月1、阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要；2、现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是；3、我们大学生应该怎么做。The Importance (significance) of Reading ClassicsUndoubtedly (there is no doubt that), classics, which range (ranging) from novels, speeches to poems and autobiographies. , play an important (换) role in the development of ones personality and taste by broadening peoples vision and enlarging their knowledge. So to get access to(接触) those great minds is undoubtedly a wise choice（option） .However (nevertheless), nowadays fewer people (a decreasing number of people) (反之:increasing/mounting/growing number) feel like reading these master pieces. There are many factors (which) contributing to (which are responsible /accountable for) this new phenomenon (change /trend /issue). (列举法)Firstly（in the first place）, people in growing number are in the shadow of practical minds whereas these classics can hardly meet peoples such needs as possessing a professional skill and finding a promising(brilliant splendid) job. Secondly (besides/ in addition / whats more), the advanced media technologies such as cable television, DVD players and the Internet to provide people more fun than classics. And finally (in the end/last but not the least important), people of these days are too busy to read or think.As college students, we should fully realize the great importance of reading classics. We should read these enlightening(发人深省的) books as many as possible, so that we can be more reasonable and responsible, which helps us be more useful to the society and more successful in our future life. . 2007年6月 1、有人做好事期望得到回报； 2、有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报； 3、我的观点。Should One Expect a Reward When doing a Good Deed?Some insist on an old saying “one good turn deserves another” which means that a good deed should ( ought to) bring about a reward. Otherwise , such kind of deed may not (may fail to) stimulate the public to do the same, and end up producing little positive effect.Others (, however,) hold very(换) view, for they regard Lei Feng as a model, The idol of the social morality. who always help others without asking for any rewards. . They maintain that they can get happiness through what they have done without any payment and the peace in their heart is the best return.When it comes to me, it is not critical whether we have got rewards or not, but we have tried to help those in trouble. If all of us can help each other, our society will be more civilized and harmonious(和谐的). 2007年12月1、如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，举例说明； 2、数字化产品的使用对人类工作、学习和生活的影响； Digital AgeNowadays, the digital products, are widely used, ranging from mobile in hands of young college student to various kinds of devices/ facilities in the modern office building and family house. which have been of great value for people from all walks(各行各业) of life. Obviously , these digital equipment have exerted（发挥着） profound，(realistic and thought-provoking meanings ) influence on all aspects around us. For one thing (on the other hand), digital products do perform significant functions (=play a role in/on) in peoples lives. For example (instance), we learn our lessons, read interesting (entertaining) books, play various games, and all this things cannot be done efficiently and effectively (高效且有效用的) without the help of computers 。 For another, some people may be too dependent on such facilities and even get addicted to them. Take some adolescents ,for example, they have been wasting too much time and energy playing computer games because (as a result of / owing to) of lack of self-control/self-discipline In my opinion, digital products, like everything else, have both favorable and unfavorable (beneficial and unbeneficial) aspects. We should（are supposed to） make the most use of them and try to avoid the possible side-effects副作用). 2008年6月1、随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；2、有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是；3、作为大学生我的看法。Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?With the development of information and technology, E-books, which have become increasingly/ extraordinarily popular among youngsters , have been populated with our daily life.Some people hold the viewpoint that it will not take long for E-books to replace traditional books. There are several (main) reasons accountable (responsible) for this point of view. In the first place, E-books are more accessible to readers, because the readers just need to log onto internet and read online . In addition, the cost of E-books is so low that it takes readers far less money to buy them . Moreover, environmentalists advocate the benefit of E-books on the ground of(以为理由)（owing to/as a result of） forests protection .As for me, it is not likely for E-books to replace traditional books. For example, long time of reading E-books will do more harm to our eyes, and as to note-taking, scanning and skimming, traditional books have their own advantages. 2008年12月1、大学生的心理健康十分重要；2、因此，学校可以；3、我们自己应当。How to Improve Students Mental HealthUndoubtedly (it/here is no doubt that), mental health is of extremely crucial to (lay/place an emphasis on) college students. Nowadays, a number of students in college suffer from mental illness, which severely affect both their study and life .In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures（solutions/methods/strategies） must be taken in advance. (万能) In the beginning, schools, such as colleges or universities can provide chances for the students to ease their tension . Furthermore, lectures on (regarding) psychological health should be frequently given to students to prevent problem from happening . In the end, psychological clinics should be set up to provide troubled students help timely .As to students, we should keep the channel of communication open among ourselves and between our friends, teachers and parents . Besides, we should learn how to identify unhealthy behaviors or thoughts and make changes accordingly. Only with these measures taken can we expect sound (=good) growth of college students. 2009年6月1、有人说名字或名称很重要；2、也有人觉得名字或名称无关紧要； 3、我认为。On the Importance of a NameSome people hold the standpoint that name is of great importance (significance) and even responsible for a persons fate . Therefore, they would take all the trouble, trying various ways, to search wonderful names for themselves or for their children, who expect these names would work magic for a promising (glorious) future .To others, however, the answer is “No”. According to them, names are nothing more than (=only反义：anything but) arbitrary symbols（主观的，随意的代号）, which mean that here is no necessary connection between ones name and his future . For example, a man named Bruiser, whose meaning is a strong man who argues with a lot of force, （whose）making others feel rather afraid, may turn out to be a short man(主句) who is mild, silent and patient.When it comes to me, a name is relatively important in a sense because the first thing that people learn about a person is usually his or her name, and a name that sounds beautiful may give and leave people a great first impression. However, it is not that crucial or powerful as to guarantee one person a wonderful future. 2009年12月现在不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班1、对这种做法有人表示支持； 2、有人并不赞成； 3、我认为。Should Parents Send Their Kids to Arts Classes?Nowadays, hoping their children can become elite/cream of the crop , parents in increasing number send their children to art classes of every variety. To this prevailing trend (流行趋势) (this social practice), some people hold the supportive （positive/favorable/supportive）view. They argue that attending art classes can help expand childrens interests to a great extent and broaden (enrich fulfill) their minds, which contribute to childrens all-round development Others, however, hold the opposite view that children should be given more time to enjoy their childhood and do what they are interested in. Rather (contrarily/ instead), forcing these children to art classes will inevitably take up kids time eliminate their nature and even make them doll. As far as I am concerned, art classes should be attended within a certain limit so that we can help our children keep a proper balance with study and recreations which is conductive to their sound development . 2010年6月1、近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象； 2、出现这种现象的原因和结果； 3、为改变这种状况，我认为。Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of ChineseIn recent years, there has been a worrying trend in our country that a large (huge) number of students neglect the study of our native language, Chinese. Rather (on the contrary) , many youngsters are learning foreign languages, especially English , with great zeal .There are several factors which can be accountable for this situation. In first place, the increasingly great pressure of job-hunting leads directly to focusing on “practical subjects” and neglecting the study of Chinese regarded as a useless art . Whats more important, most students take it for granted(把视作理所当然) that Chinese is their mother tongue and they have master it quite well . Apart from that, universities in decreasing number stimulate Chinese study in advance In order to change this situation, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. For one thing, it is essential that the schools attach more significance to the teaching of Chinese . For another, students themselves should enhance their awareness of the importance of mastering their native language and give up viewing Chinese from a perspective of utility . 2010年12月1、当今社会，高校排名很流行； 2、个人看法不同。3、我自己的观点。My View on University RankingIn recent years, it