九年级英语全册 Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry同步作文指导课件 （新版）人教新目标版.ppt

unit11sadmoviesmakemecry 写作题目 thehappiestlife youmakemecrymakemesmilemakemefeeltheloveistrueyoualwaysstandbymysideidon twanttosaygoodbyeyoumakemecrymakemesmilemakemefeelthejoyofloverkissingyouthankyouforalltheloveyoualwaysgavetomeohiloveyou whatmakesyoucry whatmakesyourelax revision whatmakesyounervous whatmakesyouhappy learninggoals totalkabouthowthingsaffectyou tolearntowriteanarticleabout thehappiestlife brainstorming wordsaboutfeeling positivewords negativewords happy relaxed easy comfortable excited interested nervous worried angry uneasy mad scared thrilled bored makingsentences describeoneofyourexperiencesthatimpressedyoumost eg missingtheimportantsoccergamemakesme areyouhappy a 信息归纳 请阅读下面有关幸福的文章 根据所提供的信息 完成下面表格 informationcard apositivemoodandapleasantstateofmind oneintwentypersons theidealsituation peoplewithcollegeeducation love b 书面表达 你在学校过的快乐吗 生活中的你幸福吗 你心目中的快乐生活是什么样子的 请你以 thehappiestlife 为题 写一篇80词左右的短文来描述一下你认为的最快乐的生活 内容包括 1 你现在的快乐和烦恼是什么 2 你追求的最快乐 最幸福的生活是什么样子的 3 你会为此做出怎样的努力 连 写 想 列 查 writingsteps tips step1 think 想一想 审题人称 时态 体裁 第一人称 一般现在时态 议论文 step2 list 列一列 1 和 相处融洽 2 希望做某事 3 努力学习 4 使梦想实现 5 相互学习 getonwellwith hopetodo studyhard makethedreamcometrue learnfromeachother 以 thehappiestlife 为题1 我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼2 我想象中最快乐 最幸福的生活3 我要付出的努力 beginning body ending step3 add 连一连 writingtime step4 write 写一写 以 thehappiestlife 为题1 我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼2 我想象中最快乐 最幸福的生活3 我要付出的努力 beginning body ending writingtime 用词方面 代词主格 宾格 名词单复数 动词搭配 副词位置 句子方面 篇章方面 细节方面 句子完整 主谓一致 动词时态 连词使用 内容完整 要点齐全 布局合理 单词拼写 标点符号 大小写 step5 check 查一查 appreciating evaluating欣赏与评价 afterwriting 请交换习作互相欣赏 用红笔划出对方的亮点 并对不足的地方进行适当修改 你能给同学什么建议 使得对方的习作更好呢 根据worksheet上的评分标准 给同伴的习作打分 showtime summary howtowriteanarticleabouthappiness 2 learnsomeofthewritingskills 连 写 想 列 查 happinesscomesfromyourheart notfromyoursurroundings 幸福来自于你的内心世界 而不是你周围的事物 rewritethearticle homework thankyou 优秀作文分享 thehappiestlifeeveryonewantstobehappyeveryday butlifeisnotfair therearealwayslotsofchallengesandtroubleinourlifeandwecant alwaysgetwhatwewant wecanjustdreamaboutthelifewewant thelifeiwantishappy richandfree ilikemoneyandfreedom butithinkhappinessisthemostimportantthing nowiamnotrichandialwaysfeeltiredbecauseihavetoomuchhomeworktodoeverydayandmysleepingtimeisnotenough ifyouthinkiammadatmylife youwillbewrong iwilltrymybesttochangemylifeandmakeitbetter ibelievethatiamabletomakemydreamcometruebecauseiwon tbealoser thehappiestlifeasastudent lifeissimplebutboringtome everyday i mbusygettingreadyformyfinalexam ihaveendlessworktodoandidon thavetimeformyhobby i mreallytiredofsuchbusydays ialwaysdreamaboutstudyinginaniceschoolwhichhascolorfulactivitiesforusstudentstorelax insuchaniceschool icannotonlylearnknowledgefromteachers butalsoenjoyallkindsofinterestingactivatesliketakingpartinsummercampsorhavingbarbecuewithfriends ialsodreamaboutlivinginabighousewithabeautifulgardenandaswimmingpoolwithmyfamilyinthefuture wecanoftentravelaroundtheworld inordertolivethehappiestlifeiwant iwillworkhardandreadmorebooksaboutgreatmen ssuccess thehappiestlifeasweknow bothhappinessandsadnessarepartofourlife asforme studying playingandsharingsomethingwithmyfriendsishappiness buti mworriedaboutmystudybecausei mlazy ihopeicangetalongwellwithmyfriendsandparents wecansharenotonlyhappinessbutalsosadness that smyhappiestlife andihopeiwillpassthefinalexaminordertostudyinagoodhighschool soimustworkharderthanbefore now whatineedtodoistobekind activeandhelpfulinmydailylife thehappiestlifeiamamiddleschoolstudent iamveryhappybecausemyparents teachersandfriendsalllovemeandtheyalwaysgivemeahand however lifeisnotalwayslucky asamatteroffact inordertoenteragoodhighschool ihavetospendalotoftimeindoingmyhomework ihopeineedn tspendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkandicanlistentomusic watchtvandplaywithmyfriendsonweekends that smyhappiestlife ofcourse iknowifiwishmydreamtocometrue imuststudyhardsothaticandomoreinterestingthings happinessconsistsincontentment 知足常乐 happyisthemanwhoislivingbyhishobby 以爱好为生的人是幸福的 3 happinessisformcourage h jackson britishwriter 幸福是勇气的一种形式 英国作家杰克逊 h 4 happinessliesnotinthemerepossessionofmoney itliesinthejoyofachievement inthethrillofcreativeeffort franklinroosev