【创新设计】（人教通用版）高考英语大二轮总复习 写作专题一 短文改错.doc

专题一短文改错 .体验高考(2014浙江卷)i was taking a train to londons victoria station.i had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.a passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.the person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.no one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before.yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.if we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.答案i was taking a train to londons victoria station.i noticed that the carriage was and filled with people.before long，a train inspector to check our tickets.a passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket became quite upset.then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from owner.the person who found ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.no one in the carriage had spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before.yet they had so quickly offered the their help.if we could show concern to others need，the world would be a better place to live in.仿真、模拟passage 1what does a credit card bring us is written by eillton henley.its a brief or excellent article about credit cards.the author explains what credit cards work.and he also points out the positive and negative aspect for having it.american consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards.however，the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in world.the key point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company.this protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.答案what does a credit card bring us is written by eillton henley.its a brief excellent article about credit cards.the author explains credit cards work.and he also points out the positive and negative for having .american consumers are likely to use credit cards.however，the use of credit cards expanding into almost every country in world.the key point by the author is that users should pay the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company.this all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.passage 2after watch “english tv” last sunday morning，i phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon.before the film was over，we returned to school to do our lessons.while we are having a rest in the corridor，i saw mr liu，my china teacher.he told me that we had made some progresses in english，but my chinese lagged behind，especially my chinese composition.he suggested i should read more and keeping a diary every day.in the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing.that was really good idea! what they said was quite right，and i should follow their advice.答案after “english tv” last sunday morning，i phoned my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon. the film was over，we returned to school to do our lessons.while we having a rest in the corridor，i saw mr liu，my teacher.he told me that w had made some in english，but my chinese lagged behind，especially my chinese composition.he suggested i should read more and a diary every day.in the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me for improving composition writing.that was really good idea! what they said was quite right，and i should follow their advice.passage 3im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two week ago.i have been thinking about a question you asked me.in my opinion，you should come back after finish your studies abroad.for one reason，that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in our country.it will be quite easy for you find a good job.in fact，i knew a few big companies in our city hope to hire people like you.for another one reason，i think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents but they are getting old.but this is only my point of view.it is up for you to make a right choice.答案im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two ago.i have been thinking about question you asked me.in my opinion，you should come back after your studies abroad.for one reason， you are studying is needed nowadays in our country.it will be quite easy for you find a good job.in fact，i a few big companies in our city hope to hire people like you.for another reason，i think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents they are getting old.but this is only my point of view.it is up you to make a right choice.passage 4this morning i found red wallet on the campus.girls usual like red，so i believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student.i opened it，try to find out whose it was.therefore，i found nothing but 300 yuan in it.i was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates chen yang passed by.she suggested she put up a lost and found notice and i did so.i wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it.later，a girl came to claim it on 3 oclock this afternoon.答案this morning i found red wallet on the campus.girls like red，so i believed the wallet belonged to a girl student.i opened it， to find out whose it was. ，i found nothing but 300 yuan in it.i was wondering what to do with it suddenly my chen yang passed by.she suggested put up a lost and found notice and i did so.i wrote down my telephone number and the owner to call me after she saw it.later，a girl came to claim it 3 oclock this afternoon.passage 5last saturday，our school had organized all of the senior 1 students to visit the children at a local orphanage.we took many books that was popular among children，as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys，to children.they were delighted to receive these gift.we played some games together and give performances.before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.that day，each one of us had an enjoyable time.we gave the children their care and help；for return，they gave us their smiles and love.these voluntary activities made a deeply impression on us.答案last saturday，our school organized all of the senior 1 students to visit the children at a local orphanage.we took many books that popular among children，as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys，to children.they were delighted to receive these .we played some games together and performances.before the orphanage we took photos with them and gave them our contact details we could keep in touch with one another.that day，each one of us had an enjoyable time.we gave the children care and help； return，they gave us their smiles and love.these voluntary activities made a impression on us.passage 6i as well as my family are going to new york city this weekend.i had been looking forward to go there for a long time.it is one of the modernest city in the world.there have also a lot of museums where you can learn someth