高中英语Module4CarnivalSectionⅤWriting_介绍节日教学案外研版.docx

Module 4 Carnival Section Writing-介绍节日本模块的写作任务要求以电子邮件的形式介绍节日。介绍节日时要注意讲明其日期及参与庆祝的人员。描述节日的气氛要具有感染力，有时还需阐发自己的感受，以让读者感同身受。一、基本内容因不同的节日具有不同的风俗及特点，介绍节日时一般应包括以下内容：1节日的名称和日期；2节日的起源；3节日的习俗，一般包括节日饮食、人们的活动等；4节日的意义，可包括节日的传统地位及其现实意义等。二、注意事项1对节日进行介绍时，一般采用说明文的体裁，要说明所要介绍的节日的日期、主题、起源、庆祝方式、活动内容、文化内涵等，常用一般现在时态。2文章结构要清晰，逻辑性要强；句式结构不宜过于复杂，要吸引读者的注意。3语言方面以说明性文字为主，写作时，可适当地多选用形容词和副词来丰富语言，并以描写的手法来做具体说明，可使描写更加生动、说明更加形象、节日的特征及活动更加鲜明。三、增分佳句1The Chinese Duanwu Festival, also known as the Dragon Boat Festival, is one of the most significant traditional Chinese festivals.端午节，也叫做龙舟节，是中国最重要的传统节日之一。2Although Christmas is a western holiday, truly, I love it.虽然圣诞节是一个西方的节日，但是我真的很喜欢它。3The festival is said to be in honour of Qu Yuan, a great poet, who gave his life for his country by drowning himself in a river.这个节日据说是为了纪念伟大的诗人屈原而设立的，他为了他的祖国而投河自尽。4It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar calendar, when people of a family gettogether and enjoy the dinner together.它定在中国阴历的8月15日，这是一个全家人团聚共进晚餐的时刻。5The whole family sit around a table to have a big dinner in the evening.全家人围桌而坐，共进晚餐。6There are lots of dishes on the table, which are all tasty.餐桌上有许多菜，都很美味。7Its a day when the whole family reunite.这是一个举家团圆的日子。8Today is fifteenth, August of lunar calendar. Its the MidAutumn Festival, a mostimportant Chinese festival.今天是农历八月十五中秋节，一个非常重要的中国节日。题目要求假如你叫李林，你的笔友 Mike 发邮件想要了解一下中国的端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)。请你根据以下要点给他回一封邮件：节日名称端午节时间农历五月初五典型食物粽子主要活动赛龙舟意义纪念伟大诗人屈原注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：糯米glutinous rice芦苇reed金字塔形状的pyramidshapedDear Mike，How are you doing? Im glad to have received your email. I will tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival._Yours，Li Lin第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题 1确定体裁：本文要求写一篇介绍节日的说明文；2确定人称：以第三人称为主；3确定时态：以一般现在时为主。二、构思1节日的名称和日期；2节日的起源；3节日的习俗，一般包括节日所吃的食物、人的活动等；4表达愿望。第二步：核心词汇想周全1ancient古代的2wrap包裹3celebrate庆祝4be_made_of由制成5in_memory_of为了纪念6be_known/famous_for因而出名第三步：由词扩句雏形现1龙舟节又称为端午节。(被动语态)The_Dragon_Boat_Festival_is_also_called_the_Duanwu_Festival.2端午节在每年农历第五个月的第五天。(fall on)The_Duanwu_Festival_falls_on_the_fifth_day_of_the_fifth_lunar_month_every_year.3大多数人说庆祝它是为了纪念屈原中国古代一个伟大的诗人。(宾语从句；同位语)Most_people_say_that_it_is_celebrated_in_memory_of_Qu_Yuan,_a_great_poet_in_ancient_China.4在那天，中国人民制作和吃粽子由糯米、肉等制成的金字塔形状的包在芦苇叶里的饺子。(过去分词作后置定语)On that day, Chinese people prepare and eat zongzi, a pyramidshaped dumpling made of glutinous rice, meat and so on wrapped in reed leaves.5这个节日因赛龙舟而最出名，尤其是在河流和湖泊众多的中国南方。(where引导的定语从句)The_festival_is_best_known_for_its_dragon_boat_races,_especially_in_southern_China_where_there_are_many_rivers_and_lakes.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用过去分词作定语连接句1和句2The_Dragon_Boat_Festival,_also_called_the_Duanwu_Festival,_falls_on_the_fifth_day_of_the_fifth_lunar_month_every_year.2用when引导的定语从句升级句4It_is_a_day_when_Chinese_people_prepare_and_eat_zongzi,_a_pyramidshaped_dumpling_made_of_glutinous_rice,_meat_and_so_on_wrapped_in_reed_leaves.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear Mike，How are you doing? Im glad to have received your email. I will tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival.The_Dragon_Boat_Festival,_also_called_the_Duanwu_Festival,_falls_on_the_fifth_day_of_the_fifth_lunar_month_every_year._Most_people_say_that_it_is_celebrated_in_memory_of_Qu_Yuan,_a_great_poet_in_ancient_China._It_is_a_day_when_Chinese_people_prepare_and_eat_zongzi,_a_pyramidshaped_dumpling_made_of_glutinous_rice,_meat_and_so_on_wrapped_in_reed_leaves._The_festival_is_best_known_for_its_d