高考英语 书面表达系列及参考范文（23）.doc

2014高考英语书面表达系列系列（23）及参考范文第四部分：书面表达(满分35分)(2012广西老牌高中一调)假定你是李华，广西某老牌高中的一名高三学生因为某种原因无法参加本周日上午你班外教mr jackson组织的户外郊游活动。请就下列要点用英语给mr.jackson写一份请假条。要点：1.请假原因：昨天下午踢球扭伤了脚，医生建议你静养一段时间； 2.恳请准假； 3.表示感谢； 4.表达良好祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.请假条的标题、开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 4.参考词汇：郊游，outinga sick notedear mr. jackson，_yours，li hua范文借鉴a sick notedear mr. jackson， im very sorry to say that i will be unable to attend the outing you have organized for us on sunday morning. i broke my foot yesterday afternoon while playing football with my classmates. the doctor advised me not to take any outdoor activity and stay in bed for some time until my foot recovers. its a great pity for me to miss such a good chance to spend time with you and my fellow classmates. i would be very thankful if you could give me your kind understanding. in the end, i hope the trip goes well and all of you have a lot of fun.yours，li hua*结束(2)(25 min.)(2012师大附中月考)请你简要概述图中所述新闻事件，并针对路人的反应发表自己的看法，如果你是在场的路人之一，你会怎么做？ _参考范文one possible version：since 13th oct., 2011, china has been captivated by the distressing case of twoyearold girl xiao yueyue, who was coldly ignored by passersby as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van. video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail, including at least 18 people walking past xiao yueyues body without so much as a glance. in my eyes, those 18 people have shamed the whole of china. owing to the new complexities of chinese social life, people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death.any one of us might become the passerby at the side of xiao yueyue. if i were one of them, i would stop, move her out of the center of the road, or extend a hand of comfort, carrying her away from danger. everybody should examine his own conscience: if we were in the same situation next time, how could we help ourselves? only by lifting a hand to help others, we save ourselves.*结束锦囊妙计1.文字、图画或图表同等重视，不可厚此薄彼，粗心大意。2.确定中心，围绕中心确定内容要点，凡是对说明文章中心来讲必不可少的内容切不可遗漏，而与中心无关的的细枝末节都可以省略;3.可将内容要点写在草稿纸上，然后依据要点写出提纲，成文后再根据草稿纸上的要点逐一查对。歼灭难点训练1.（）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留，请你帮他安排一天的活动。要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并对各地点加以简单的介绍。注意：（1）包括示意图中主要内容；（2）词数100左右；（3）信的开头已为你写好。（4）生词：图书城book towndear mike，im glad to hear you are coming soonive planned a one-day trip for you in beijing best wishes， ours li hua*结束2.（）你和李明参加了一次野外生存训练。以下5幅图画表现了野外训练活动的过程，请根据图示写一篇英文日记。注意：（1）词数100左右。（2）日记的开头已为你写好。生词：指南针：compass n. 手电筒:flashlight n.急救包：first-aid kit 宿营地：campsite n. saturday,may 4,2002cloudyli ming and i took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday,and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school*结束3.（）假如你是李华，下面四幅图画反映你家乡的自然环境的变化情况。请你向报社写一封信反映此情况并提出加强环保的建议。词数100左右，开头已写出（不计入总词数）。参考词语：wasteland 荒地 sandstorm 沙尘暴dear editor,in the past,my hometown*结束 高考英语书面表达要求学生通过审查文字提示、图画、表格等后进行有一定控制性的写作。学生在这种题型上常犯的错误之一就是：遗漏要点。难点磁场6月9日，星期天，你和朋友本来约好去看球赛，但未看成。请你根据下列六幅图画写一篇日记。注意：（1）日记必须包括所有图画内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；（2）词数100左右。（3）开头已给出。june 9,sundayfineit is sudnay today.案例探究10月23日（星期五）中午在你上学途中发生了一件事情。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。注意：（1）日记须包括所有图画的内容，可适当增减细节，使日记连贯。（2）词数100左右。命题意图：本题考查学生的读图能力和运用逻辑讲述故事、传达主旨的能力。错解分析：（1）人称、时态运用不准确；（2）主要内容遗漏。解题技巧与方法：（1）细读文字说明部分，弄清人称、时间、事件背景；（2）仔细观察每一幅图，确定文章中心，确定内容要点：a.听见喊救命，下水救女孩 b.好心人相助 c.送女孩去医院 d.上课迟到 e.感谢信 f.受表扬；（3）依据要点写出提纲，然后拓展成文；（4）检查要点、格式、人称、时态、动词变化形式、标点符号等。【参考答案：】october 23rd fridayfineon my way to school at noon i heard loud shouts from the lake.i found a girl struggling in the water.i quickly jumped into the lake,swam towards the drowning girl and carried her to the bank.a kind woman also came to help.we immediately sent the girl to the nearest hospital.when i hurried to school,i was late for class.however,i didnt explain to my teacher what had happened.but to my surprise,a letter of thanks to me was put up on the bulletin board in our school in the afternoon.so my teacher and classmates knew the whole thing and they praised me a lot.i felt a little shy but proud.*结束第四部分：书面表达(满分35分)(2012沈阳四校协作体月考)假定你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上， 你看到一个名叫grownup的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助，请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。grownuppost at 20112011 21:181#hi, everyone， im a senior grade three student, and i am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should i do? toplast topic/next topic reply new写作要点： 1告诉grownup心理压力不可避免；2告诉grownup心理压力的危害； 3建议grownup应正确面对心理压力；4介绍你面对心理压力时所采取的措施。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。hi, grownup，its a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life._hope my ideas will work.范文借鉴hi, grownup，its a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. in my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. but if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.whenever i meet pressure, i try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. sometimes it is very effective. when im stressed out, i listen to music