高考英语二轮限时高效训练 短文改错6.doc

2014高考英语二轮限时高效训练：短文改错61.短文改错dear diana, thank you for the lovely day we have with you. it was so kind for you to let us bring annes friend, gina. unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. there had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. in the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. in the car park here gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. they finally dropped gina off at her parents and made our own way to home. much love, fiona2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。last sunday i witnessed a traffic accident on our way home. i was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash. two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. i went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. as was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. it reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。the winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. i have been looking forward at relaxing myself. id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. i think i can play the basketball with my classmates. how a wonderful time ill have during the winter holiday! however, my parents think different. they dont want me go out. they are afraid ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. beside, they are afraid i will lose my way. i hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. to get more freedom, i will try to persuade them.4.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分the day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. can you guess that what we did there? not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer task. they reached the park at nine oclock. the whole class divided into three groups. group one planted trees and water flowers. group two picked up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. the group which i was in wiped all the equipments in the childrens playground. all of us worked hardly. before noon we finished working. each of us fell a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.5.短文改错i was real sad when i found my bicycle went wrong again. tired of repairing it again and again, i decided buy a new one. after school, i went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called jack. the black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. it looked so cool that i could hardly wait to ride it. the shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle. he wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. i just couldnt afford such an expensive one. then i choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. it was not so it was much better than the old one.6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 when i was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. i hoped i could also have it. one day i saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. i asked my father the money. but he said he could only give me half of the money. he should find the other half myself. so i went to sell newspapers after the school. my father was pleased if i showed him the money a month after. he gives me the other fifty. you can imagine how much happy i was when i rode to school on my own bicycle.试卷答案1.第一句：have-had 第二句：for-of 第三句：unfortunate-unfortunately第四句：第一个for-as; mile-miles 第五句：unless-until/till第六句：here-there; as 后加a 第七句：they-we; 去掉to2.last sunday i witnessed a traffic accident on our way home. i was wandering down the sidewalkmywhile there went loud crash. two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away.when ai went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. luckily, they were badly trappedrescued on time for people came to help them and called an ambulance. as was clear that the taxi in itdrivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. it reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them. safety themselves3.the winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. i have been looking forward at makes torelaxing myself. id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. i think imoviescan play the basketball with my classmates. how a wonderful time ill have during the the whatwinter holiday! however, my parents think different. they dont want me go out. they differently toare afraid ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. beside, fall besidesthey are afraid i will lose my way. i hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. tokept get more freedom, i will try to persuade them.4.the day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. can you iguess that what we did there? 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