高考英语 短文改错预演优生训练（5）(1).doc

2014高考英语短文改错预演优生训练（5）及答案短文改错 （共10处，每处1分，共10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； （2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。last saturday, mom and i went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. when we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. there were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. finally, under the help of the shop assistant, he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. immediately, we returned back home to show itto my grandpa. seeing it, he was very happy and couldnt wait to put on. but we were annoyingto find something was wrong with the zipper. hurriedly, i took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem to my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling contently. how delighted i was! 【参考答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。my mother is a village woman, who is already in fifties. she has very little education, and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people. she often asked me how i get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. my mother does everything she can for me so that i can spend more time on my study. once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed for several days. when i got home, i found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! i was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes. so is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.【参考答案】1. in fifties in her fifties 2. and but 3. very importance great importance 4.asked-asks 5.me study me to study 6. bad ill badly ill 7. still off still on 8. made me making me 9. tear tears 10. so is such is短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）im a senior school student, so i like english very much. besides attending to english lessons at school, i often go to the english corner in the park near my home in sunday mornings. i know that this english corner is set up five years ago. many high school students usual gather there, and sometimes, some college students and even foreign friends are present there. we practice our speaking english, talk about that we are interested in and so on. since i began to visit it three months ago, i greatly improved myself in english, which encourage me to visit it constantly and regularly. i believe it will be the wise decision.【参考答案】2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。it is good to see that today more people have realized the importance exercising and areplaying sports regular. but the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet thepublic growing demand. i love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. it seems that all courts in the city were always full. weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. but on rainy days or in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. there are not much in my city, and the charge is expensive. the government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will encourage more people to participate in sports.【参考答案】 it is good to see that today more people have realized the importanceexercising and areofplaying sports regular. but the problem is that there are not enough sports facilities to meet theregularlypublic growing demand. i love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends. publicstherefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a free one. it seems that allhowevercourts in the city were always full. weather permitted, we can play in outdoors. but on rainy days are permittingor in winter we have to turn to indoor courts. there are not much in my city, and the charge is manyexpensive. the government should build more public sports facilities, so easier accesses will high accessencourage more people to participate in sports.im a senior three studenti often do bad in my 66 exams，so i have been trying to catch up the others 67 but im such concerned about my marks that sometimes 68 l cannot eat or sleep well at a nightim afraid that 69 i may get low marks in the tests again even if i work 70 hard than before i have no courage to face low marks 71 i cannot fix my mind to my study, whenever i think of 72 this. it is obvious that the worry had a bad effect on 73 my school works. im feeling very sad. would you 74 please tell me what i should deal with my worry? 75 【参考答案】66. bad改为badly 67. 在up后加with 68. such改为so 69. 去掉a 70. 正确 71. hard改为harder 72. to改为on/upon 73.had改为has 74. works改为work 75. what改为how此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误）则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在右边横线上写出所加的词。该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。注意：原行没错的不要改。a married couple were in a car while the wife turned to 76_her husband and asked, “would you like to stop for coffee?” “no, 77_thanks” he answered truthfullybut they didnt stophowever, 78_the wife, who has indeed wanted to stop, became angry, because 79_she felt her preference had not consideredthe husband, seeing that 80_his wife was angry, became frustratedwhy didnt she just say that 81_she wanted? unfortunately, he failed in to see that his wife was 82_asking the question, in order not to get an immediately decision,83_but rather to begin discussionand the women didnt realize that 84_when her husband said no, he was just express his preference, not 85_giving an order【参考答案】76while when。连词的错误。从语境看，这里用when引导状语从句表示“就在这时，这时突然。”7778but so。连词的错误。语境表示顺接的关系，用so：于是他们就没停车。79has had。时态的错误。这里叙述过去的事情，用过去完成时。80not后加been。语态的错误。这里显然应该用被动语态表示被考虑。81thatwhat。连词的错误。这里连词引导宾语从句并在从句中做want的宾语，用what。82去掉in。动词搭配的错误。fail直接接不定式做宾语。83immediately immediate。词类的错误。用形容词而不是副词作定语。84womenwoman。名词的数的错误。这里应该用单数名词与语境保持一致。85expressexpressing。非谓语动词的错误。用过去进行时的was doing表示当时发生的动作。此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（）;如有错误（每行只有一个错误）则按下列情况改正： 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行少一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在右边横线上写出所加的词。 该行错一个词：在错词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正的词。注意：原行没错的不要改。dear sir,i am university studenti once thought life at the76_university must be excellent, but now i had changed my mind 77_i have three roommates, and i was the last one tomove78_into the dormitorylast term, i got alon