2015届高考英语二轮复习书面表达专题卷7.doc

2015届高考英语二轮复习 书面表达专题卷71Nowadays, doing part-time jobs has become a fashion to us students. Whats your opinion?2.写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节：基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）下面是一个学生的个人情况登记表，请用英语全面地介绍一下表中所列情况。【写作内容】姓 名李 华性 别 男出生年月1988.9籍贯广 东现就读学校中山大学英语系职务校团支部书记兴趣、爱好及特长爱好体育运动、唱歌、跳舞，英语口语流利志向当一名好翻译学校鉴定该生多才多艺，出类拔萃主要家庭成员情况简介父母：教师，工作认真，教学成绩优秀，受人尊敬姐姐：医生，在一家医院工作，远近闻名【写作要求】1. 请用5个句子表达全部所给的内容；2. 将5个句子组织成一篇连贯的短文。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。参考词汇：校团支部书记the secretary of the Youth League Branch of the university3以下是你校最近一次主题活动的主要内容：主 题：如何做一名受欢迎的学生对 象：全体高一学生时 间：上星期三下午地 点：学校图书馆程 序：实例分析（ analyze ） 小组讨论 老师指导结 论：行为端正；学习认真；为人着想；讲礼貌；与人融洽相处影 响：认识了自我, 决心做个受欢迎的学生 写作内容 请根据以上信息为你校的英语小报写一篇英文报道,并包括以下内容： 1. 活动的主题、对象、时间、地点和程序； 2. 如何做受欢迎的学生； 3. 活动产生的影响。写作要求 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。4写作（共1小题，满分25分）【写作内容】假如你是Lucy, 你的好友Tom想要来广州观看亚运会，你要向他介绍亚运会的一些相关知识以及广州的变化和值得他来的地方。请你以书信的形式根据题目要求写一篇120字左右的英语作文。【提示信息】、2010年广州亚运会暨第16届亚运会于2010年11月12日至27日在中国广州进行，广州是中国第二个取得亚运会主办权的城市。、本届亚运理念“激情盛会，和谐亚洲”。（Thrilling Games, Harmonious Asia）【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。5你最好的朋友Jack最近迷上电脑，因此常常熬夜，疏忽课业，并受到父母的指责。你打算写一封信给他,适当地给予劝告。注意： 词数120-150之间（开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；Dear Jack,How have you been recently?_6富人做慈善事业近年来越来越受到社会的关注。有的人认为理所当然，有的人认为他们应当受到称颂。针对这种现象，你校英语俱乐部组织了一次英语辩论赛，请根据以下要点写一篇不少于120词的英语短文，陈述以下两种不同观点并发表自己的意见。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 富人做慈善事业是否理所当然正方观点反方观点你的观点1. 富人财富来自社会；2. 富人应该回报社会，做慈善事业理所应当。1、 富人的财富是靠合法经营和辛苦劳动得来的；2、富人做慈善应该受到称颂。 Nowadays, many rich people are enthusiastic about charities. 试卷第2页，总2页参考答案1There are many advantages in doing part-time jobs while you are in school. It can offer you a chance to make money. You can also gain some working experience from it. Therefore, you will be able to prepare yourself for the future.However, part-time jobs also have some disadvantages. On one hand, it might occupy some of your time. On the other hand, if you dont know how to deal with the money, it can have a bad influence on you.Because of the advantages and disadvantages, you should maintain a correct attitude and choose jobs properly. Then you can benefit from it.【解析】2 Li Hua, a 21-year-old boy student from Guangong Province, now studying in the English Department of Zhongshan University, likes sports and games, singing and dancing ,and can speak English fluently. As the secretary of the Youth League Branch of the university, he is highly spoken of by the teachers and students and regarded as an outstanding student with great abilities. His parents are both teachers, who are dearly loved and respected by the students for their wonderful teaching work. Li Huas elder sister, a famous doctor, works in a big hospital. Li Hua has made up his mind to be a good translator after graduation.【解析】3不唯一 Last Wednesday afternoon, an activity on “how to become a popular student” was held for the students of Senior One in the school library. After analyzing some examples, the students had a discussion in groups and some teachers were invited to give us instructions. Finally, we came to a conclusion that a student should be well-behaved and study hard to become popular. Whats more, popular students are supposed to be thoughtful and polite and get along well with others as well. As a result, we have learned more about ourselves and everyone is determined to be a popular student.【解析】试题分析：本作文主要以报道的形式，注意其格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。考点：考查综合分析能力点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。4Guangzhou is the place with millions of friendly people who are really looking forward to meeting gusts from other parts of Asia. With its various cultural treasures and modern facilities, there is no doubt that the metropolis, Guangzhou, will draw the worlds attentionwhen the 2010 Asian games unfold its curtain in November(November 12th-27th, 2010). Guangzhou is the second city to host the Asian Gamesthe first one, the capital hosted the event in 1990. As we all know, the theme of the 16th Asian Games is “Thrilling Games, Harmonious Asia”. Trying our best to show the harmonious idea to the entire Asia is also one of the main guiding principles of preparation works. In order to create a “Green Asian Games”, we are trying our best to make the city not only beautiful but also energy-saving. I believe that Guangzhou will prove to be a city of wonders to the athletes, spectators and all of you. Come on and join in the big ceremony. Guangzhou is right here waiting for you!【解析】略5Dear Jack,How have you been recently? I know that you have gotten so addicted to video games that you often stay up late and ignore your studies. As your best friend, I believe that I have the responsibility to give you some advice.As you might have discovered, video games can have quite a few negative impacts on your life. First, lacking sleep, you may often nod off in class. Therefore, you may not be able to concentrate on what the teacher is saying. You may have found yourself falling behind and having a hard time catching up in your studies. In addition, it seems that you have become a mouse potato and forgotten the benefits of playing sports.I really miss the happy times with you on the basketball court, and you do need some exercise. Please do not bury yourself in video games anymore. How about meeting in the park this Sunday? I look forward to your reply!Sincerely Yours,xxx【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文。写好本篇书面表达要过好下列几关：1.准确表达题干中所明确的要点(迷上电脑, 常常熬夜，疏忽课业, 父母的指责，给予劝告)；2.怎么劝告：要围绕上述明确的要点去展开：迷上电脑对生活的负面影响；熬夜的影响(课上打瞌睡，注意力不集中)；参加体育锻炼，不要再沉迷于电脑等等。3.注意表达的时态是现在范畴的时态，不要涉及过去时，以免造成表达上时间的混乱。【亮点说明】范文第一段紧紧围绕题干中所明确的要点展开：用“I know that you have gotten so addicted to video games that you often stay up late and ignore your studies.” 一句话几乎囊括了要表达的要点。要是在该句后面再加上一句“And because of this you have been scolded by your parents.”就更好了。然后用了非常得体的话“As your best friend, I believe that I have the responsibility to give you some advice.”自然而然地过渡下一段，使得段落之间联系紧密。范文第二段用“First，Therefore，In addition”三个关联词语把作者的意思表达得非常清楚，很有层次感。“a mouse potato(网虫，网迷)”让读者读来忍俊不禁。第三段作者将自己的建议又推向了一个新的高度。本篇范文实属上乘之作。考点： 提纲类作文6Nowadays, many rich people are enthusiastic about charities. Some people take it for granted that the rich have the responsibility to contribute to charities. However, others maintain those wealthy people deserve praise for their selfless honored behaviors. Those people who hold the first opinion believe the rich can not get rich without others in the society and that they should give back to society. However, others think differently. In their opinions, the wealthy peoples success is the result of their hard work. They also argued that charity is not only the duty of rich people but every citizens duty. Personally, I agree with the latter. After all, the rich people are successful because they have worked hard and have a legal business. I think we should praise and respect those who have made or are making contributions to charities.【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达为对比型议论文。论题为：富人做慈善事业是否理所当然。文章结构为：现象（富人做慈善事业近年来越来越受到社会的关注）引入句（有的人认为理所当然，有的人认为他们应当受到称颂正方观点阐述反方观点阐述自己的观点，本文章要求论述两种不同观点并给出自己的看法。引入句已写好，可以直接写支持者