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概要写作summary Whatisasummary Asummaryisabriefstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsomething notthedetails 牛津高阶英汉双解词典 2 1 考纲要求 1 考纲要求 概要写作 提供一篇350词以内的短文 要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右 少于40或多于80词扣两分 的内容概要 阅卷时主要考虑以下内容 1 对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 2 应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 3 上下文的连贯性 4 对各要点表达的独立性情况 2 写作特点 2 写作特点 bethorough bebrief restate ownwords beobjective 3写作步骤 分段 阅读 找要点 改写 修改 Readtwoorthreetimestofindthestructure Dividethewholepassageintoseveralpartsandfindthekeypointofeachpart Rewritethekeypointsbyusingyourownwords Polishthewholepassage 阅读下面短文 根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要 Weshouldn tjudgeapersonbytheirappearancebutwedo Infact theexpertssaythatwhenwemeetsomeoneforthefirsttimewemakeadecisionaboutwhatthatpersonislikeinthreeseconds Butwhatdowelookat Oneofthemostimportantthingsisclothes butitisn tthebrandofclothesthatpeoplewearthatisimportant Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion Schoolshavealwaysunderstoodthisandalotofthemasktheirstudentstowearauniform Why Alotofteachersthinkauniformmakesstudentsfeelthattheyarepartoftheirschoolandthattheiruniformhelpsthemtobeseriousabouttheirstudies Teacherssaythatuniformscanhelpinotherwaystoo Ifallthestudentswearuniforms theycan tjudgeeachotherbecauseoftheirclothes Italsoavoidsargumentsaboutwhoorwhatisfashionable However itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway Weallhavefixedideasaboutwhatthepeopleinacertainprofessionshouldwear Ifwevisitadoctor weexpecttoseerespectableclothesunderthedoctor swhitecoat Whenwegointoabankweexpectthestafftowearsuitsordresses Policeofficerswearuniformstodetercrimebyestablishingavisiblepresencewhileonpatrol tomakethemselveseasilyidentifiabletonon policeofficersortheircolleagueswhorequireassistance andtoquicklyidentifyeachotheratcrimescenesforeaseofcoordination Infact alotofcompanieshavedresscodesfortheirstaffbecausetheyknowthatthecustomersexpecttoseethemdressedincertaintypesofclothes Butcanourclothesreallytellpeoplewhatwearelike Maybenot buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemoment Whenpeopleseeusintherightclothes theythinkweareseriousaboutwhatwearedoing Furthermore ifweareclean smartandpolite peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus Para 1 Para 3 Para 2 Para 4 8 Beforewriting Read forstructureandkeypoints 9 ReadingforStructure Howmanypartscanwedividethepassage Para1 Part1 topicpara2 evidence examplepara3 evidence example Part2supportingdetails para4 Part3 conclusion 10 HowtoGetKeyPoints topicsentenceforeachparagraph Find thefirst lastsentence jointhemtogether Summarizeinyourownwords 11 ReadforKeyPoints Para 1Weshouldn tjudgeapersonbytheirappearancebutwedo Infact theexpertssaythatwhenwemeetsomeoneforthefirsttimewemakeadecisionaboutwhatthatpersonislikeinthreeseconds Butwhatdowelookat Oneofthemostimportantthingsisclothes butitisn tthebrandofclothesthatpeoplewearthatisimportant Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion Point1 12 ReadforKeyPoints Para 2Schoolshavealwaysunderstoodthisandalotofthemasktheirstudentstowearauniform Why Alotofteachersthinkauniformmakesstudentsfeelthattheyarepartoftheirschoolandthattheiruniformhelpsthemtobeseriousabouttheirstudies Teacherssaythatuniformscanhelpinotherwaystoo Ifallthestudentswearuniforms theycan tjudgeeachotherbecauseoftheirclothes Italsoavoidsargumentsaboutwhoorwhatisfashionable 1 2 Point2 3 4 benefits 13 ReadforKeyPoints Para 3However itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway Weallhavefixedideasaboutwhatthepeopleinacertainprofessionshouldwear Ifwevisitadoctor weexpecttoseerespectableclothesunderthedoctor swhitecoat Whenwegointoabankweexpectthestafftowearsuitsordresses Policeofficerswearuniformstodetercrimebyestablishingavisiblepresencewhileonpatrol tomakethemselveseasilyidentifiabletonon policeofficersortheircolleagueswhorequireassistance andtoquicklyidentifyeachotheratcrimescenesforeaseofcoordination Infact alotofcompanieshavedresscodesfortheirstaffbecausetheyknowthatthecustomersexpecttoseethemdressedincertaintypesofclothes Point3 14 ReadforKeyPoints Para 4Butcanourclothesreallytellpeoplewhatwearelike Maybenot buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemoment Whenpeopleseeusintherightclothes theythinkweareseriousaboutwhatwearedoing Furthermore ifweareclean smartandpolite peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus Point4 15 ListtheKeyPoints 16 Afterreading restate thekeypointsinyourownwords inadifferentway 17 Howtorestate 2 usesynonyms 同义词的运用 3 summarizeexamples 概括 binesentences 合并句子 4 sometimeschangethevoice 主被动语态转换 1 changethesentencestructure 句型转换 18 Examplesofrestatingthekeypoints Wearingrightclothesforoccasionsissignificant Sincejudgingapersonbytheirappearanceisunavoidable wearingproperclothesfordifferentoccasionsismorethanvital Clothesshouldbewornsuitablyfordifferentoccasions 19 Examplesofrestatingthekeypoints Studentsarerequiredtowearuniformsforvariousbenefits Teachersthinkuniformscanmakestudentseriousabouttheirstudyseriouslyandavoidarguments wearinguniformsatschoolcanhelpstudentsbecomeseriousabouttheirstudyandavoidmanyproblems 20 Examplesofrestatingthekeypoints Differentjobsneeddifferentclothesforcustomers expectations Peopleshouldattachimportancetowhattheywearincertainways Differentprofessionsshoulddressthemselvesincertainways 21 Examplesofrestatingthekeypoints Suitableclothescanshowothersweareseriousandconfident Suitableclothescanmakeotherawareofourseriousnessandconfidence Properclothescanpresentourattitudessuchasbeingseriousandconfident 22 Afterwriting Useproperconjunctions 连接词 topolishyourpassage 23 Introduction Thepassage articlefocuseson mainlytellsus 表转折 but however though although表并列 递进 aswellas inadditionto notonly butalso besides what smore furthermore 表对比 meanwhile ontheotherhand onthecontrary contrast 表列举 firstly secondly finally 表原因 because of dueto onaccountof for 表举例 forexample instance suchas andsoonEnding therefore 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