九年级英语全册 Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious同步作文指导课件 （新版）人教新目标版.ppt

unit2ithinkthatmooncakesaredelicious 写作题目 myfavoritechinesefestival learningaim writeaboutyourfavoritechinesefestival what sthestoryabout lookatthepicturesandsaywhatfestivalstheyare 探究1 brainstorm 头脑风暴 whatchinesefestivalsdoyouknow 你知道有哪些中国节日吗 freetalk thedragonboatfestival themid autumnfestival thespringfestival thelanternfestival let smakealist springfestival lanternfestival dragonboatfestival mid autumnfestival injanuaryorfebruary onthe15thofthefirstlunarmonth onthe5thofthefifthlunarmonth inseptemberoroctober whenwetalkaboutafestival wecantalkabout drawanoutlineforwriting beginning nameofthefestival whenisitcelebrated everyyearthereisaspringfestivalinchina itiscelebratedonthefifteenthdayofthefirstlunarmonthoftheyear itiscelebratedin on itisatraditionalchinesefestivalcalled mid autumnfestivalisoneofthemostpopularfestivalsinchina body howdopeoplecelebrateit thingstoeat thingstodo dumplings zongzi tangyuan mooncakes noodles cleanthehouses makezongzi havedragonboatraces admirethemoon makelanterns guessriddles gettogether givebestwishes sharemooncakeswithrelatives whatdoesitcelebrate itcelebratesthebeginningofnewyear thisfestivalisinmemoryofquyuan oneofthegreatestchinesepoets ending whatdoyouthinkofthefestival whydoyoulikeitsomuch ithinkitisfunandexciting iusuallyhaveagreattimeduringthisfestivalbecauseitmakesmerelaxed ilikethefestivalverymuchbecauseicangettogetherandsharehappinesswithmyfamilies notonlycanispendmoretimewithmyfamilies butigetmuchluckymoney myfavoritechinesefestivalmyfavoritechinesefestivalisthemid autumnfestival themid autumnfestivalisoneofthetraditionalchinesefestivals itisoftencelebratedinseptemberoroctober duringthefestival familymembersgettogetherandeatmooncakes therearemanykindsofdeliciousmooncakes ontheeveningofthemid autumnfestival peoplecanenjoythefullmooninthedarksky ilikemid autumnfestivalbecauseitmakesmehappy writing 在这么多的中国传统节日当中 你最喜欢哪一个 请你从中选取你最喜爱的一个节日 以 myfavoritechinesetraditionalfestival 为题写一篇80词左右的说明文 myfavoritechinesefestivalis itiscelebratedin on duringthisfestival people it smyfavoritefestivalbecause itmakesmefeel thefollowingexpressionscanhelpyou myfavoritechinesefestival writing 开声朗读自己的文章 并从结构 人称 时态 字数 拼写 大小写 标点符号等方面进行自我修正 task1 自我欣赏与修正 同伴互赏 欣赏角度 写作基本要求 人称 时态 2 要点齐全 3 结构 开头 正文 结尾 4 好词好句 task2 欣赏与修正请交换习作欣赏 用红笔划出对方的亮点词 句 并运用改错符号找出不足 进行适当修改 评分以满分15分为标准 给同伴的习作打分 点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正 篇章结构分析 细节点评 集体赏析 共同进步 task3 wearechi