山东省泰安市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达浏览（4）.doc

山东泰安市2016高考英语二轮书面表达浏览（4）基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇中国载人宇宙飞船“神舟号”的简介。【写作内容】 请根据以下信息，写一篇关于“中国载人宇宙飞船辉煌10年”的简讯。时间成功发射航天员标志性成就与突破2003年10月1 5日神州五号杨利伟世界第三个载人进太空的国 家中国第一艘载人飞船2003-2013年三艘载人飞船7男1女中国航天科技迅速发展各自圆满完成任务2013年6月11日神州十号聂海胜、张晓光、王亚平（中国第二位女航天员）王亚平完成多项科学实验，进行了中国首次太空授课目 的为将来探索月球、火星做好准备【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 (one possible version)the last decade has witnessed the rapid development and splendid achievements in chinas manned spacecrafts to prepare for the exploration of the moon and mars in the future. on october 15, 2003, shenzhou v, chinas first manned spacecraft was launched into space with chinas first astronaut yang liwei, which made china the third country to send man to space independently. since then, another three manned spacecrafts have sent 7 men and 1 woman astronauts into space, accomplishing their own tasks successfully with rapid development in science and technology. most proudly, shenzhou x took off carrying a crew of three astronauts: nie haisheng, zhang xiaoguang and wang yaping on 11 june, 2013. during this voyage, wang yaping, chinas second female astronaut, successfully conducted some scientific experiments and delivered chinas first space lecture to chinese students by live television broadcasts. 【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（1）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。benefits of honestysarah darling met a homeless man called billy ray harris and gave him her purse, with all her change in it. it was not until the next morning she realized that she had left her diamond ring in the purse. to her surprise, when she and her husband bill krejci found billy, billy immediately returned the ring. the grateful couple paid him back for his honesty by emptying out their pockets. however, bill krejci, a web designer, felt that he needed to do something more for this honest man. he set up a special page for him on money- raising site give forward with a goal of raising $1,000 in 90 days. in just four days, the donations rose to over $85,000. that was not all. because of all the media coverage, billy reunited with his elder brother, edwin harris who he had not met for 27 years. the two talked for 45 minutes on the phone and edwin was planning to take billy to his home in lubbock, texas. all this good fortune came just because billy did the right thing - he returned something that did not belong to him. honesty is surely the best policy!【写作内容】 1以约30个词概括短文的内容； 2以约120个词就“因诚实而得到的收获”发表你的看法。内容包括： (1)简述你对billy ray harris事例的理解或看法： (2)记述一次你（或你的朋友）“诚实待友”的经历： (3)你对“诚实待友”的建议或方法。【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。_ 【参考范文】读写任务 (one possible version)the passage is a story about honesty. billy ray harris was given many donations after he honestly returned a diamond ring to sarah darling. moreover, he got the opportunity to reunite with his long-lost brother. i appreciate billy ray harris very much. his honesty touched sarah darling and her husband as well as the whole society. the donations offered to him have proved that “one good turn deserves another”.as far as honesty is concerned, i have had an unforgettable story to tell. about ten years ago, my friend susan brought a beautiful pen, which i loved so much that i stole it. that night, i was filled with regrets. after struggling for the whole night, i decided to tell her the truth. i was much surprised that susan was not angry at me. so i have understood that honesty can clear misunderstanding and promote friendship. as a matter of fact, we should be honest with our friends, because only in this way can we win their trust. 【河北省石家庄市2014高考英语质量检测】书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，你校外教mrbrown邀请你周日上午去听关于英国文学的讲座，但你因故不能参加。请根据以下提示，写封邮件向mrbrown说明。 1表示歉意； 2说明理由：去火车站接一位来访的老同学； 3表示遗憾：对英国文学很感兴趣，遗憾失去这次机会； 4希望得到讲座录像或课件，以便课下学习。 注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；dear mrbrown best wishes to youyours sincerely, li hua【参考范文】书面表达（满分25分）：one possible version：dear mr. brown, im so sorry that i wont be able to attend the lecture on the british literature this sunday morning. but an old classmate of mine will come to see me that day. we havent seen each other for quite a long time and i have promised to meet him at the railway station, for he is not familiar with this city.as you know, im deeply interested in the british literature, so its really a pity to miss the lecture. but i wonder if i could borrow the record or have a copy of the ppt. it would mean so much to me to watch the record or ppt and learn whats covered in your lecture. (116 words)best wishes to you. yours sincerely, li hua书面表达评分细则1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于90和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。4、评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性，根据表达内容的层次适当分段及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。各档次的给分范围和要求0分：信息未能传达给读者。第一档：（15分）：未完成试题规定的任务。第二档：（610分）：能表达观点，但不够充分，很少句子可读，未恰当完成试题规定的任务。第三档：（1115分）：能表达观点，但欠充分，语言错误较多，基本完成了试题规定的任务。第四档：（1620分）：观点观确，陈述合理，有部分语言错误，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。第五档：（2125分）：观点观确，陈述合理，极少语言错误，很好地完成了试题规定的任务【河北省唐山市2014高考英语一模试题】书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华。你的两位朋友tom与peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是peter生日，tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给tom回一封邮件：1礼物选择：2你的理由；3其它和解建议。注意： 1词数100左右： 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。dear tom,im glad to hear that you are considering making up with peter best wishes,li hua【参考范文】one possible versiondear tom,im glad to hear that you are considering making up with peter. if i were you, i would consider a bike as a birthday present f