广东省揭阳市高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（8）.doc

揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（8）附参考范文短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear li mei, with the mid-term exam come, you must get prepared for them. i think that you need is a right study method. what we all know, there are three stage in studypreview, study in class and review, among which review was the most important. you should first make a review plan, then stick on it. i follow my review plan strictly and have made a progress in my study. it turns out to be good enough. of course, there are more than one way to review. so long as you review regular, im sure you can find more ways to study well. if you have any question about subjects, ask me ill be glad to help you. we may meet in our school library every friday afternoon. yours, li hua答案解析*短文改错dear li mei, with the mid-term exam come, you must get prepared for them. i think thatcoming it whatyou need is a right study method. what we all know, there are three stage in as stagesstudypreview, study in class and review, among which review was the most isimportant. you should first make a review plan, then stick on it. i follow my review plan strictly and have made a progress in my study. it turns out to be good enough. of course, there are more than one way to review. so long as you review regular , im is regularly sure you can find more ways to study well. if you have any question about subjects, ask me ill be glad to help you. we andmay meet in our school library every friday afternoon. yours, li hua*结束(201*绵阳诊断)tom is a little boy, but he is only seven years old. one day he1._went to the cinema. it was the first time for him to do that. he2._bought a ticket and then went out. but after two or three minutes3._he came out and bought the second ticket and went in again. after a4._few minutes he comes out again and bought a third ticket. two5._or three minutes later he came out and asked another ticket.6._then the girl in the ticket office who asked him, “why do you7._buy so many ticket? how many friends do you meet？” tom8._answered，”no, i have not friends here. but a big boy always 9._stops me at the door and tear my ticket to pieces.”10._答案与解析：1but改为and依据语境，这里前后句之间是并列关系而不是转折关系。23out改为in依据语境，男孩买票走进电影院。4the改为a下文bought a third ticket有暗示。序数词前用不定冠词，表示“再一，又一”。5comes改为came结合行文逻辑，这里应用一般过去时。男孩进去又出来了。6asked后加forask for sth.表示“要求得到”。7去掉who这里不是定语从句，假如是定语从句，原句缺少主句。8ticket改为ticketsso many后接复数名词。9not改为nonot是副词，不能修饰名词，应改为no。10tear改为tears这里stop和tear是并列谓语动词，要用第三人称单数的一般现在时。*结束作文（*） 每年高三学生在高考结束后都会有一个近三个月的假期。对于如何度过这个假期，某报社近期进行了一次问卷调查，其结果如下表所示。请根据表格中提示的内容，写一篇100词左右的短文，简要陈述学生的意向，并说明你自己的观点。比例意向45在家充分休息28学习英语，为上大学做准备15到外地旅游12其他注意：为使行文连贯，可适当增加细节。_one possible version： recently a survey has been conducted among the students in grade three about what they will do during the 3-month holiday after the college entrance examstudents have different decisions about 45of the surveyed students intend to rest at homethey want to relaxthoroughly and get ready for college lifewhile 28of them prefer to attend eriglish classes for their future usemeanwhile，15of them choose to travel outside and the rest l2say that theyd like to do other thingsafter allits really difficult to get such a long holiday again after tlley enter the college personally，1 will be a little sad if i get away from my dearest parents and relatives，so id like to stay at home and spend more time witli my families*结束 【例题解析】一 错词1.动词错误：（1） 时态和语态、主谓一致的错误。【1】整体时态： *then i ask him “grandma, how come you have so much lines on your hand”全文为故事，故ask改为asked。*high over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon.the hole became bigger and bigger.全篇使用过去时态，故改discover- -discovered【2】主谓一致*having fun with their friends make them happy.动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数形式makes。*but the most wonderful thing about jack were his musical ability。主语为the most wonderful thing 故此，系词为was*but not all information are good to society.主语不可数，所以动词用is。（2.）动词错误：*in american big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.(buy)根据句子意思，数千人买票去看比赛。故sell改为 buy。（3）非谓语动词【1】动名词错误*i am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future.(seeing)解析：to 为介词，故此see改为seeing* not only play football makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.解析：主语应为动名词，故play football改为playing football【2】现在分词*the air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming down.解析：分词做定语，故keeps 改为keeping*i found a small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.解析：with a light shone 改为with a light shining。a light和shining为主动关系。【3】不定式*i just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.(become)解析：help sb do sth 故改becoming为 become *he did not want share things with others.解析：want to share sth. want后可跟不定式做宾语。【4】过去分词*i have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.解析：have sth done, some records和give是被动关系，故改为given。2连词错误：*i came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.解析：根据句意，“我看到他们中的一个人走进厨房，并且打开灯。”两个分句子之间是并列关系。故改but为and*we would return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day.解析：考查宾语从句，pick up 缺宾语，故改that 为what*the classes helped me understand what the world works 解析：根据句子意思，“这些课程有助于我了解世界是怎么运转的”故改what 为how。*he was silent for a moment. so he answered slowly: “each of these lines stands for a trouble”解析：根据句子意思，so 改为 then/and3.形容词/副词错用：*you always gave me specially attention. 解析：名词应该被形容词special修饰。*it is real a good chance to have met all of you here.解析：副词really修饰系词，故改real为really。*my hometown has taken on a new look.how great it has changed !解析：great修饰动词，故改为：greatly 4.冠词错误：*this is my first visit to a american family.(an)解析：american 第一个音标的音素是元音，故用an.*each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team.解析：有定语修饰，the特指captain.*suddenly, i caught a sight of my english teacher in the crowd.解析：固定搭配catch sight of.故此去掉冠词a。5.代词错误：【1】反身代词*i just smiled to me and thought, 解析：主语和宾语相同，故此memyself 。【2】形容词性物主代词*besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interesting.(his -their)解析：主语是第三人称复数，因此try ones best 【3】it/that/them /us*i thought that was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball to each other.解析：that不可以做形式主语，故改为it。*it was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain.the three of them were very excited.前后人称错误。故此改them为us.6.名词单复数和名词的所有格的错误*she marked strictly on students performance.(students)解析：根据句意，学生们的表演，故改为students performance*physics is one of the most difficult subject for us (subjects )解析：one of说明后面为复数形式。*we practice three times every week and often watch football match on tv together.解析：常常看比赛，故此match改为matches.* i have no papers to write on.解析：纸不可数，所以改为paper7.介词错误*he left shanghai at a cold night.解析：一天的部分被修饰时，介词用on,*i am a new comer of a small town.解析：根据句子意思，来自一个小镇come from a small town.* i was caught by the rain last night 解析：固定短语be caught in the rain 遇上雨。8.语意错误*thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.解析：句子意思：数千人卖掉票去看足球或者篮球比赛。故此错误，sellbuy *not all people like to work and everyone like to play.解析：句子意思：并非所有的人都喜欢工作，并且所有的人喜欢玩。语意错误，应该为转折关系，andbut 。*结束3. 结尾from what has been discussed above (taking into account all these factors / judging from all evidence offered), we may safely draw (reach / come to / arrive at) the conclusion thatall the evidence (analysis) supports (justifies / confirms / warrants / points to) a(n) unshakable (unmistakable / sound / just) conclusion that it is high time that we place (lay / put) great ( special / considerable) emphasis on the improvement (development / increase / promotion) ofit is high time that we put an end to the deep-seated (unhealthy / undesirable / deplorable) situation (tendency / phenomenon) ofwe must look (search / all / cry) for an immediate action (method / measure), because the present (current) situation (phenomenon / tendency / state / attitude) of , if permitted (allowed) to continue (proceed), will surely (certainly) lead to (result in) the end (destruction / heavy cost) ofthere is no easy (immediate / effective) solution ( approach / answer / remedy) to the problem of , but might be useful (helpful / beneficial).no easy method (solution / recipe / remedy) can be at hand (found / guaranteed) to solve (resolve / tackle) the problem of , but the common (general / public) recognition of (realization of / awareness of / commitment to) the necessity (importance / significance) of might be the first step towards change (on the right way / in the right direction).following these methods (suggestions) may not guarantee the success in (solution to), but the pay-off will be worth the effort.obviously (clearly / no doubt), if we ignore (are blind to) the problem, there is every chance thatunless there is a common realization of (general commitment to), it is very likely (the chances are good) thatthere is little doubt (no denying) that serous (special / adequate / immediate /further) attention must be called (paid / devoted) to the problem of it is necessary (essential / fundamental) that effective (quick / proper) action (steps /measures / remedies) should be taken to prevent (correct / check / end / fight) the situation (tendency / phenomenon).it is hoped (suggested / recommended) that great (continuous / persistent / sustained / corporate) efforts should be make to control (check / halt / promote) the growth (increase / rise) of it is hoped that great efforts should be directed to (expended on / focused on) finding (developing / improving)it remains to be seen whether, but the prospect (outlook) is not quite encouraging (that rosy).anyhow, wider (m