江苏省高考英语 第三部分 写作层级训练 第二步 通览全局写作分类突破 第三讲 如何写议论文的主体课件.ppt

第三讲如何写议论文的主体 李仕才 一 题型特点二 写作技巧 议论性读写任务型作文指的是根据阅读材料所描述的某一事件 现象 观点或话题发表个人观点 意见和建议的一类读写任务 其实质就是要求考生根据题目要求写议论文 英语议论文有其独特的框架结构 能让读者迅速捕捉作者的观点和思路 值得考生模仿 写作时应注意以下几点 1 运用过渡语进行衔接过渡 2 采用多种论证方式进行分析 议论文在写作手法上以议论为主 如通过对比观点 阐述原因 列举例子等 但有时也要运用说明 叙述 描写等手法 议论中的说明常为议论的开展创造条件或为议论作补充 叙述和描写应是为论点提供依据 因此 叙述应该是概括的 描写应该是简要的 常用的句式有 3 结尾总结升华 重申观点 在文中或文末 考生可以用不同的语言重申主题或提出解决问题的建议 从而使文章结构严谨 主题鲜明 常用的句式有 1 tosumup inshort inconclusion onthewhole allinall 2 takingallthefactorsintoaccount wecandrawaconclusionthat 3 fromthediscussionabove itcanbesafelyconcludedthat 4 therefore itisnecessaryforusto 5 tobebrief weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceof 6 onlywhenwe onlyby canwe 典例示范 请阅读下面短文 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章 2016 江苏卷 inrecentyears internetvotinghasbecomeincreasingpopularinchina peoplenotonlycaston linevotesthemselves butalsourgeotherstovoteforcompetitionslikethe mostbeautifulteacher andthe cutestbaby lijiang ahighschoolstudent isinvitedtovoteinthe bestpoliceofficer competition organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficers dailywork lijiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds heisalreadythinkingofbecomingapolicemanhimselfinthefuture suhuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe futuresinger competition hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthecompetition thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree suhualikeshiscousinverymuch buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter tovote ornottovote thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch 写作内容 1 用约30个单词写出上文概要 2 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法 并用2 3个理由或论据支撑你的看法 写作要求 1 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 3 不必写标题 评分标准 内容完整 语言规范 语篇连贯 词数适当 参考范文 onlinevotingbecomesincreasinglypopular andmanycompetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit itisbeneficialtosomepeople whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot inmyopinion onlinevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbewelcomed sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports inaddition theinternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient regardlessoftimeandspace furthermore votingontheinternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible tobehonest voterssometimesfeelannoyed notbecausetheyhatevoting butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey therefore iholdapositiveattitudetowardsonlinevoting 能力提升练1请阅读下面短文 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章 2018 江苏镇江高三调研 the18 year oldgirlfromlinyi shandongprovincescored568pointsonhercollegeentranceexamthisyearandwasadmittedtonanjinguniversityofpostsandtelecommunications onaug19 xureceivedaphonecallfromanunknownpersontellingherthatshewasduetoreceivestudentfunding followingthecall xutransferreda9 900 yuan activationfee intotheman sbankaccount hopingthemoneywouldappearinherstudentaccount butitneverdid afterdiscoveringtheyhadbeencheated thefamilyimmediatelyreportedtheincidenttothepolice butxuwassaidtobefrustrated ontheirwayhome shesuddenlyfaintedanddespitedoctors besteffortstorescueher shepassedaway thedeathofxuyuyuimmediatelycausedanoutcryoverthesociety andonceagain itfiredapublicangertowardsthosewhocommitheartlessfraud 欺诈 sohowwasxu sprivateinformationleakedout reportershavediscoveredthattherearemanypeoplewhoopenlyselltheexaminee sinformationonline theinformationincludestheexaminee sname school phonenumber andaddress thepersonalinformationofexamineehasbecomethetargetoftheonlinefraudindustry 写作内容 1 用约30个单词写出上文概要 2 用约120个词就 personalinformationleakage 谈谈你的看法和感受 内容包括 1 简述个人信息泄露的危害及保护个人信息的重要性 2 就如何保护个人信息提几点建议 至少两点 写作要求 1 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 3 不必写标题 评分标准 内容完整 语言规范 语篇连贯 词数适当 参考范文 agirlfromshandong whowouldsoonbeginheruniversitylife wascheatedoutof9 900yuanduetopersonalinformationleakage theheavyblowclaimedherlife whicharousedangerinsociety theleakageofpersonalinformationisofgreatharm notonlywillpeoplebefrequentlytroubledbyunwantedshortmessagesorcalls butalsopeoplemaybecheatedoutofmoneyorbeputindanger thus theprotectionofpersonalinformationisofvitalimportanceinorderforcommonpeopletomaintainapeacefulandsafelife aswellastoprotectone sownfortune herearethetipsonhowtoprotectone spersonalinformation neverclickanylinkonphonesorcomputersunlessitcanbeutterlytrusted also avoidconnectingsmartphonestoanyuntrustedwifiinpublicplaces apartfromtheeffortsofcommonpeople thegovernmentmustsparenoefforttofightagainstcriminalssellingothers personalinformation 能力提升练2请阅读下面短文 并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章 2018 江苏海安高级中学期中考试 florencechadwickwasbornincaliforniain1918 shegrewuponthebeachandbegancompetingasaswimmerattheageofsix whenheruncleenteredherinarace forthenext19years shecontinuedasacompetitiveswimmer onjuly4 1952 attheageof34 chadwickattemptedtobecomethefirstwomantoswim21milesacrossthecatalinachannel fromaportonthecaliforniacoast thatdaytheoceanwasicecold thefogwassothickthatshecouldhardlyseethesupportboatsthatfollowedher andsharksswamaroundher severaltimes hersupportcrewusedgunstodriveawaythesharks whileamericanswatchedontelevisions hermotherandhertrainer whowereinoneofthesupportboats encouragedhertokeepgoing however after15hoursand55minutes withonlyahalfmiletogo shefeltthatshecouldn tgoon andbeggedtobetakenoutofthewater later chadwicktoldareporter look i mnotexcusingmyself butifihadseenlandiknow icouldhavemadeit thefoghadmadeherunabletoseeherswimminggoal anditmadeherfeelshewasgettingnowhere twomonthslater shetriedagain althoughthefogwasstillheavy yetthistimeshemadeitwiththegoalrootedinhermind sheknewbehindthefogwasthelandshepursued 写作内容 以约120个词就 goalandsuccess 的主题谈谈你的看法 内容包括 1 分析chadwick第一次失败和第二次成功的原因 2 chadwick的故事对你有什么启发 3 结合实际谈谈如何实现自己的目标 写作要求 1 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 3 不必写标题 评分标准 内容完整 语言规范 语篇连贯 词数适当 参考范文 goalandsuccessanamericanwomanswimmerchadwicksucceededincrossingthecatalinac