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论文返修（response letter)一些很有用的套话2014-09-05李莫愁博士实验万事屋提示：请点击标题下方蓝色“实验万事屋”，添加关注后，发“嗯”可以查看我们之前的文章。总结了一部分万能的套话，足以体现我们对杂志社编辑和审稿人的尊重。1、According to the associate editor and reviewers comments, we have made extensive modifications to our manuscript and supplemented extra data to make our results convincing.2、In this revised version, changes to our manuscript were all highlighted within the document by using red colored text.3、Thank you for your nice comments on our article. According to your suggestions, we have supplemented several data here and corrected several mistakes in our previous draft. Based on your comments, we also attached a point-by-point letter to you and the other two reviewers. We have made extensive revisions to our previous draft. The detailed point-by-point responses are listed below.4、Thanks for your help. We feel really sorry for our carelessness.5、Thank you for your reminding. You and the other two reviewers comments are all of great importance to our article. All of these comments have contributed a lot to improve the quality of our article. After this revision, we have written a point-by-point response letter to you as you can see above. Meanwhile, we also wrote a point-by-point response letter to the other two nice reviewers to acknowledge their helps and denote where we made revisions.6、We feel great thanks for your professional review work on our article. As you are concerned, there are several problems that need to be addressed. According to your nice suggestions, we have made extensive corrections to our previous draft. We have added necessary data to supplement our results and edited our article extensively. The detailed corrections are listed below.7、We feel sorry that we did not provide enough information about XXXX.8、it is really a giant mistake to the whole quality of our article. We feel sorry for our carelessness. We have corrected it and we also feel great thanks for your point out.9、thanks for your suggestions. We feel sorry for our poor writings, however, we do invite a friend of us who is a native English speaker from USA help polish our article. Due to our friends help, the article was edited extensively. And we hope the revised manuscript could be acceptable for you.10、thanks for your careful checks. We are sorry for our carelessness. Based on your comments, we have made the corrections to make the unit harmonized within the whole manuscript.11、your suggestion really means a lot to us. Yes, it would be more understandable if we XXX.12、According to your suggestion, we have corrected the “XXX” into “XXX”.13、 thanks for your correction. It was indeed a serious grammatical error. And we have corrected it according to your suggestion.14、thanks for your suggestions. We feel sorry for the improper wording. We have used “XXXX” as you suggested.15、According to the reviewers comments, we have revised the manuscript extensively. If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. “xxxx” is a journal of great popularity and prestige. We hope that our manuscript could be considered for publication in your journal. Thank you very much for your help.论文返修（response letter)一些很有用的套话II总结了一部分万能的套话，以体现我们对杂志社编辑和审稿人的尊重。1、Firstly, we would like to thank you for your kind letter and for reviewers constructive comments concerning our article (Manuscript No.:XXXXX).These comments are all valuable and helpful for improving our article. All the authors have seriously discussed about all these comments. According to the reviewerscomments, we have tried best to modify our manuscript to meet with the requirements of your journal. In this revised version, changes to our manuscript within the document were all highlighted by using red colored text.Point-by-point responses to the reviewers are listed below this letter.1，首先，感谢您的来信，并感谢您对我们的文章（稿件编号：XXXXX）的评论者的建设性意见。这些意见对于改进我们的文章都很有价值。 所有作者都认真讨论了所有这些意见。 根据审稿人的意见，我们尽力修改我们的稿件以符合您的期刊要求。 在本修订版本中，文件中对我们手稿的更改都使用红色文字突出显示。对于评论者的逐点响应将在本文下面列出。2、If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. Thank you very much for your help.2，如果有其他修改我们可以做，我们非常想修改它们，我们非常感谢您的帮助。 非常感谢您的帮助。3、Thanks. We have corrected these mistakes based on your suggestions.3，谢谢。 我们已经根据您的建议纠正了这些错误。4、Thank you again for your positive comments and valuable suggestions toimprove the quality of our manuscript.4，再次感谢您的积极评价和宝贵意见，以提高我们手稿的质量。5、we were really sorry for your careless mistakes. Thank you for your reminding.5，我们真的很抱歉你的粗心大意的错误。 谢谢你的提醒。6、Thanks for your nice suggestions. We have formatted all the references.6，感谢您的好建议。 我们已经格式化了所有的引用。7、It is with excitement that I resubmit to you a revised version of manuscript （稿号） for the 杂志名. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to revise and resubmit this manuscript. In keeping with my last communication with you, I am resubmitting this revision before the agreed upondeadline. I appreciate the time and detail provided by each reviewer and by you and have incorporated the suggested changes into the manuscript to the best of my ability. The manuscript has certainly benefited from these insightful revision suggestions. I look forward to working with you and the reviewers to move this manuscript closer to publication in the杂志名. （返修有拖延时用）7，令人兴奋的是，我重新提交了“杂志名”手稿修订版。 感谢您给我机会修改并重新提交稿件。 为了符合我最后一次与你的沟通，我在同意的upondeadline之前重新提交这个修订。 我感谢每位评审员和您提供的时间和细节，并将建议的更改纳入手稿中，以尽我最大的能力。 手稿肯定受益于这些有见地的修订建议。 我期待着与您和审稿人合作，将这本手稿更贴近杂志名录。（返修有拖延时用）8、I have responded specifically to each suggestion below, beginning with your own. To make the changes easier to identify where necessary, I have numbered them.8，我已经对你们自己的每个建议做出了回应。 为了使更改更容易识别，必要时，我已经编号了。9、Thank you again for your positive comments on our manuscript. 杂志名 is an influential journal which aims to improve ourunderstanding of cancer prevention/other. From all the papers published in your journal, readers have been learning a lot. Hopefully, we could have our article been considered of publication in your journal. Should there been any other corrections we could make, please feel free to contact us.9，再次感谢您对我们手稿的正面评价。 杂志名是一个有影响力的杂志，旨在提高我们对癌症预防/其他的认识。 从你杂志上发表的所有论文中，读者一直在学习很多。 希望我们的文章可以在您的杂志上被认为是出版物。 如果还有其他更正，请随时与我们联系。10、Thank you for your kind comments on ourmanuscript entitled “文章名”. We have carefully revised the manuscript according to the reviewers comments. Based on the suggestions, we have made an extensive modification on the revised manuscript. Detailed revision was shown as follows. The changes to our manuscript within the document were aslo highlighted by using red colored text.10，感谢您对我们题为“文章名”的手稿的好评。 我们根据审稿人的意见仔细修改了稿件。 根据建议，对修订后的手稿进行了广泛的修改。 详细修改如下。 文件中对我们手稿的更改也通过使用红色文字进行了突出显示。11、We feel great thanks for your professional review work onour article. As you are concerned, there are several problems that need to beaddressed. According to your nice suggestions, we have made extensivecorrections to our previous draft, the detailed corrections are listed below.11，我们非常感谢您的专业评论工作。 正如你所关心的，有几个问题需要解决。 根据您的建议，我们对以前的草案进行了广泛的修改，详细的修正如下。12、According to the reviewers comments, we have revised the manuscript extensively. If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. We hope that our manuscript could be considered for publication in your journal. Thank you very much for your help.12，根据审稿人的意见，我们广泛修改了手稿。 如果还有其他修改，我们非常希望修改它们，我们非常感谢您的帮助。 我们希望我们的手稿可以考虑在您的期刊上发表。 非常感谢您的帮助。13、On behalf of all the contributing authors, I would like to express our sincere appreciations of your letter and reviewers constructive comments concerning our article entitled “XXX文章” (Manuscript No.:XXXX). These comments are all valuable and helpful for improving our article. According to the associate editor and reviewers comments,we have made extensive modifications to our manuscript and supplemented extra data to make our results convincing. In this revised version, changes to ourmanuscript were all highlighted within the document by using red colored text. Point-by-pointresponses to the nice associate editor and two nice reviewers are listed below this letter.13，我谨代表所有作者，衷心感谢你的来信和评论者对我们题为“XXX文章”（手稿编号：XXXX）的文章的建设性意见。 这些评论对于改进我们的文章来说都是有价值的。 根据副编辑和审稿人的意见，我们对我们的手稿进行了大量修改，并补充了额外的数据，使我们的结果令人信服。 在本修订版本中，我们手稿的更改都在文档中通过使用红色文本突出显示。 这个信件下面列出了一个好的副主编和两个不错的评论者的点对点回应。14、We would like to thank you first for all the positive comments of ourmanuscript (No.: XXXX) entitled “XXXXX”. We really appreciate your help and patience. We also think highly of the comment sof both reviewers who kindly provide professional suggestions on our manuscript.we have seriously thought about them and provided our response to reviewers. Forthe detailed response, please see below.14，我们首先要感谢你们题为“XXXXX”的手稿（号：XXXX）的所有积极评价。 我们非常感谢您的帮助和耐心。 我们也高度评价了对这些手稿提供专业意见的审稿人，我们认真考虑了这些意见，并向审查人员提供了回应。 详细回应请参见下文。论文返修（response letter)一些很有用的套话 III2017-05-16万事屋莫莫实验万事屋总结了一部分万能的套话，以体现我们对杂志社编辑和审稿人的尊重。1、Thank you for your email dated xxxxxx1 June 2016 enclosing the reviewers comments. We have carefully reviewed the comments and have revised the manuscript accordingly.Our responses are given in a point-by-point manner below. Changes to the manuscript are shown in underline/red/bold.2、I very much appreciate the time and effort youve put into your comments. Your advice aboutthe formatting, structure and referencing style of my paper is most helpful.3、Further to our correspondence a couple of weeks ago, Im attaching the revised version of my articleentitled “XXXX” I have now completed all of the changes you requested: （改格式）The numerical style of in-text referencinghas been changed to author-date referencing in APA style.The list of references has been arrangedalphabetically by the last names of authors instead of numerically, and otherchanges to conform to APA style have been made to the references.The article has been restructured toinclude separate Limitations and Conclusions sections.All headings and subheadings have beenadjusted to conform to the requirements indicated in the Journal of ChangingWeather author guidelines, including the removal of numbers.All nonstandard abbreviations and acronymsused in the paper have been defined on first use and used consistentlythereafter.Abbreviations used in each table have beendefined in a note at the bottom of the table.The vertical rules/lines have been removedfrom all three tables.The tables are now attached as a separatefile instead of embedded in the paper.3，继几周前我们的通信，我附上了我的文章的修订版本“XXXX”，我现在已经完成了你所要求的所有变更：（改格式）在文本参考的数字风格已经改变为作者日期引用APA风格。引用列表由作者的姓氏而不是数字排列，而其他符合APA风格的变化已经被引用。这篇文章已被重组为包括单独的限制和结论部分。所有标题和小标题都已经过调整，以符合“改变天气”杂志编辑指南的要求，包括删除号码。本文中使用的所有非标准缩写和首字母缩略词都是在首次使用时定义的，并一直使用。每个表中使用的缩写已经在表格底部的注释中被定义。所有三个表中的垂直规则/行已被删除。这些表格现在作为一个单独的文件附加，而不是嵌入在纸张中。4、I hope that the changes Ive made resolve all your concerns about the article. Im more than happy to make any further changes that will improve the paper and/or facilitatesuccessful publication.5、Thank you once again for your time and interest. I look forward to hearing from you.6、We thank reviewers fortheir constructive criticism, and time spent to analyze this manuscript, The responses, and explanations related to their comments are listed below:7、We agree with the reviewers comment concerningthis issue. However, .8、As a response to the reviewers comment we .9、We thank the reviewer for the kind comments.10、we thank the reviewer for pointing this out. We have corrected it to “XXXXX”11、We agree with the reviewer. In respond to thiscomment and to a comment raised by the other reviewer, we have revised the textas follows.12、Based on these comments and suggestions, we have