读写任务 ------ 如何论证观点 写作教案 16

Teaching Plan on English Writing (16)TOPIC: 读写任务 - 如何论证观点TEACHING GOAL:1. Help Students know how to demonstrate the target opinion2. Make Students practice the writing skills in writing assignmentsTEACHING PROCEDURES:Step 1: GreetingStep 2: Lead-inAsk students opinions on money and time. And then ask tell to prove their own opinions. Later, Discuss in groups and then share in front of the class.主题：时间比金钱重要 论点 People often say time is money, but in fact time is more valuable than money. (用论据)论证 When money is spent, we can earn it back, but when time is lost, it will never return. The time we have in all our life is limited, and it is even more precious for us senior students. Time is easily lost because of the fact that it is not scarce though it is limited, so it should be valued most. 结论 In a word, we should get into the habit of saving time and never leave what can be done today until tomorrow. Step 3: Writing templatePart 1: Get students familiar with the templates 一、句式模板1.提出论点： In my opinion, no lesson is more important than one on personal safety.(2011揭阳一模) It is, of course, not right for children not to take on any responsibility in the household.(2011广州四校联考)3. In my opinion, detention(留堂)has its advantages in educating misbehaved students.2.得出结论： And only with a good sense of self-protection can we live a safe and happy life.(2011揭阳一模) So if possible, Ill certainly choose to get up late.(2011珠海一模) All in all, the students should be taught to relieve stress in a more gentle, peaceful and reasonable way rather than hitting a wall.(2011华附三模)(Tips: 观点论证也就是议论文体, 作者提出某个观点, 然后通过摆事实、讲道理等方式阐明理由, 证明自己的观点, 然后得出结论。即:论点 论证 结论。观点论证常用一般现在时, 但述说过去的事实时, 可用过去时态; 预测将来时, 要用将来时态；也经常使用被动语态; 有时假设一种虚拟情况时, 还需要用虚拟语气。)Part 2: Practice with templates.Ask students write within 10 minutes and then pick up some of their works to illustrate in front of the class.建设绿色校园的重要性。论点 It is of great importance to build a green campus.论证Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do the job, since the concept of a green world has become the focus of the society.Not only is green campus environmentally-friendly, but also it has a great influence on students health.结论 Therefore, creating a green campus is of great benefit to us.Step 4: Homework阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。If you got 100, 000 dollars by chance, how would you spend it? Here are some answers of our readers:Elizabeth Stahl: I would donate it to an arts program for young boys and girls. The decrease in the creative arts programs such as music, art and drama in the schools have left many young artists out in the cold in academics. Much like sports, art in any form, can and does make a difference in young peoples lives.Marjorie C.: Although I agree with Elizabeth Stahl 100%, Id give my money to each of my children to ensure the very best of educations for my two granddaughters. Clark: With one hundred thousand dollars . I would distribute it among those whom I know that are in need and ask that they in turn then share half of what theyve received with others that they personally know are in need.Carol Wilson: First, I would take care of all my debts and gain good credit again, and then I would spend the rest on a new car. After all said and done, take a nice long vacation.写作内容美国某网站的论坛就“How Would You Spend 100, 000 Dollars”为主题进行调查。上文是一些网友的回复, 你阅读了上文后, 准备就该主题发表自己的观点, 内容要点包括： 1.以约30个词概括上述网友的观点；2.然后以约120个词谈谈你的观点, 并包括以下要点： 如果你有1百万, 你想做的一件或几件事情 说明你这样做的理由 你的结论写作要求可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子。评分标准概括准确, 语言规范, 内容合适, 篇章连贯。Keys People would spend 100, 000 dollars in different ways if they got it by chance. Some would donate it to charity for various purposes while some others would take care of their own business with the money. If I had the chance to get that money, I would first set aside 20, 000 dollars for my university education and then donate the rest to the children who suffered from a devastating earthquake last May. 论点 There is no doubt that a good education is of vital importance to a person.论据It is through education that knowledge and information are received and spread throughout the world. An uneducated person is shut off from the outside world because he is closed to all the knowledge he c