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建议信 (Letter of suggestion)u Tips1、简介(1) 建议信写作注意事项 写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。(2) 写作方法 首段：a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；b. 说明目的，注意语气。 主体：a. 提出具体建议；b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信；c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。 尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。说明写信的目的介绍详情、说明原因提出建议提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复(3) 写作流程图 2、结构第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：(1) 来信收到，得知你下个月要对中国进行一次为期十天的访问，我建议 I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that(2) 写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议建立我们自己的网站来吸引更多的客户。 I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients.第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议套语：我建议Id like to suggest that May I suggest thatIn my opinion I would like to make a recommendation that I am writing to advise you of If I were you, I would 第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复套语：(1) 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。 Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.3、建议信模板Dear , I am very _ to know that . 写信的原因 Im looking forward to . 表示欢迎 Im afraid that . 表述建议理由 Id like to suggest that firstthen _ . 提出建议 I believe this kind of arrangement will_ 有说服力 Moreover，if _ , 补充建议 It is necessary for you to . 提出建议 With_you will . 建议理由 Wish_ 祝愿u Samples（1）Writing task 1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1、表示欢迎。 2、提出对度假安排的建议。 3、祝愿 Dear Xiao Wang,I am very glad to know that you are soon coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday. 第一段表示欢迎I m looking forward to your arrival.If you can stay in Beijing only for a week, 表明建议的原因I am afraid that you will have a tight schedule 语气亲切，符合说话人身份关系for visiting a number of places of historic interest. Id like to suggest that you first visit some famous 叙述词和副词places that you have the greatest interest in, such as 一目了然the Palace Museum, the Summer Place（颐和园）, the GreatWall; then you can visit those places you think less then使文章结构important. I believe this kind of arrangement will make you have enough time to appreciate（欣赏） 使自己的安排具有说服力what you really want to see.Moreover if you really want to be a good traveler,It is necessary for you to read some 建议有理有据books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing. 表达良好的祝愿，符合文体要求 Best wishes!Yours ever,Zhang Ying（2） Writing task 2 Directions:Your friend Wang Li wants to get some advice from you about what to study in university,computer science or history. Write a letter to him, which includes:1) what do you think about the two subjects,2) give your advice to him, and3) encourage him in his future study。Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points)【范文】Dear Wang Li,I am glad to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with. As you said in your last letter, you couldnt make a decision about which to study in your college, computer science or history。In my opinion, nowadays, with the development of science and technology, computer plays an increasing role in our work and daily lives. As it turns out, one who wants to find a good job must be an expert at computer first. Referring to history, I dont think it is a subject that could contribute to your capacity of finding a satisfactory job. You could take it into account that you may regard history as one of your hobbies。On the whole, I hope that you should pursue your study in computer science. Remember it is up to you. No matter what you would choose, after making the decision, you should make every effort to master it。Please write to me if you need other help。Best wishesLi Ming(168 words)（3）Writing task 3Directions:假设你叫李华，得知你校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。3. 尽量不要收费。4. 【范文】Dear Mr. President, Its come to my attention that our school is going to build a new leisure center. Im writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions. First, Id like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. Second, could the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use of it. Third, we will be more than happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense. Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. If the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus. Yours sincerely, Li Hua（4）Writing task 4Directions:A hotel you stayed in recently asked guests to write to the manager and suggest ways in which they could improve their service. Write a letter to the manager, explainwho you are, say what you liked about the hotel, and suggest ways in which they could be improved.【范文】Dear Manager,Im writing in response to your invitationto guests who have recently stayed at your hotel to suggest ways in which you could further improve your service.亲爱的经理：我是看过你们给最近落脚贵宾馆的客人的邀请函后写此信的，你们在信中邀请客人做些提议，以便你们可以进一步改善服务。I was a guest at your hotel last month and I found that the level of customer service was excellent. Indeed, every member of your staff, from the manager to the room-cleaning maid, was, without exception, extremelypolite and helpful. The standard of the rooms was far beyond what I had expected.我上个月曾入住贵宾馆，发现你们的客户服务非常好。事实上，你们的每一名员工，从经理到房间清洁工都彬彬有礼、乐于助人，无一例外。房间的标准远远超过了我的期盼。However, I found that the hotel restaurant stopped serving breakfast at 8:30am. As I was on holiday, I would have liked to take my breakfast at around 9:30, thus I was unable to do so. I also spoke to several other guests who expressed the same disappointment. In addition, I feel that if you could supply newspapers in Chinese, the quality of stay for Chinese speakers, of whom the number has been on a steady rise in the past few years, would be considerablyenhanced.然而，我发现宾馆的餐厅早上八点半便停止供应早餐了。因为我是在度假，很希望能够在九点半左右吃早餐，这样情况下就做不到了。我也跟其他几位客人谈过，他们也表达了同样的失望。还有，我感到如果你们能够提供中文报纸，那中国客人的住宿质量将大幅提升，要知道：过去的几年里，中国住客的人数一直处于上升中。I would be happy to know if my suggestions have turned out to be useful in your constant improvementof your overall service.我很希望知道自己的建议是否在你们不断提升整体服务的过程中派上了用场。Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Kenny Gao 期盼受到您的回复。您真诚的：Kenny Gao（5）Writing task 5Directions: Some international students are coming to your university. Write them an email in the name of the Students Union to 1) extend your welcome and 2) provide some suggestions for their campus life here.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address. (10 points)【范文】Dear friends,On behalf of the Students Union, I am writing to extend my warm welcome to all the international students that are coming to our university. I firmly believe that your entering our university will bring us new ideas from different cultures and promote communication.Also, we have some suggestions before you come to our university. As you all know, we have a great much free time in college and the teachers dont oversee（监管） us strictly. Therefore, it is recommended that you can arrange your time properly and avoid being indulged in computer games. Moreover, in order to make yourselves quickly adjusted to our campus life, it would be of great help if you can learn Chinese as well as you can. Last but not the least, it is necessary to take part in some activities so that you can improve your communication abilities and expand horizon.We are looking forward to seeing you soon and wish everything goes well. Yours sincerely， Li Ming u 常用句型（1）建议信开头常用句式 I am writing to express my views concerning You have asked me for my advice with regard to and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.（2）表达建议常用句式 I hope you will not find it too forward for me to suggest that you In my experience, it seems th