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四级作文评分标准1. 一般采用总体评分方法，给出总的印象分。2. 从结构，内容和语言三个方面对作文进行综合评分1） 结构： 结构是否清楚，段落是否明显。2） 内容：作文应表达题目所规定的内容，要考虑作文是否切题，是否包括所有给出的要点3） 语言：是否清楚而贴切地表达了思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否会造成理解上的障碍如何给阅卷老师留个好印象：1. 首先是书写工整干净，有清楚的分段，字数适中，建议140左右，印象分很大程度上是框架和书写决定的。2. 阅卷老师会重点关注这几点1） 每段段首或段尾是否给出了该段的中心句2） 是否有恰当的过渡词和连接词。3） 语法错误。1. 三段式作文，思路清晰。2. 表达清楚，中心突出，句式多样（简单句，从句， 倒装， 非谓语，被动语态和主动语态相结合）。3. 连接词的使用。（however, moreover, furthermore, therefore, in the first place, whats worse, thus, whats more， in contrast to , in contrast with, on the contrary, whereas, instead, conversely）despite,For one thing/ for anotherOn the one hand/ on the other handTo begin with/ in addition First and foremost/ next/ last but not leastFirst/ second/ finally Firstly/secondly/finally4. 副词的使用 Apparently，undoubtedly，Obviously，clearly， fortunately , unfortunately , interestingly, personally, consequently , particularly, naturally , frankly 4. 用词多样（ 善于用同义词，避免过多的重复） （ 一） 提纲式作文四级作文按题型可以分为现象解释型，对比选择型。问题解决型，观点论证型，和应用文五种类型 对比选择型这是四级作文中最常见的一种作文形式，这类作文的基本模式是，：分三个自然段来论述，第一个自然段论述一些人对某一事物或现象的看法，或某一事物的优点。第二个自然段论述另一些人对此事物或现象的看法，或某一事物的缺点，第三自然段表明自己的观点。 在写这类作文时，要特别注意在对比的段落之间使用一些标识转折关系的词汇或句子，如：however, on the other hand, in contrast to /with 句型操练1. 对立观点式凡涉及正反两方面观点的文章都适合本模式第一段交代某些人的观点。is usually an issue of controversy. Some people take no hesitation to claim that .Among their arguments, the major one is that .This phenomenon has exerted heated debates concerning “.” 第二段交代另外一些人的观点As for the same issue, we also hear many different voices, A large number of people oppose the above opinion by saying that They do have their own reasons. In their belief, 第三段阐明自己的看法To be frank , it is very difficult for me to say which one is perfectly right as both opinions make some sense. But I still find myself in favor of the former/ latter idea. I dont take this side for nothing. A strong evidence is that . Eg :1 许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会， 2有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会 3. 在我看来。分析原因和现状：常用表达I think the reasons are as follows.There are .reasons contributing to this phenomenon.We believe that.reasons can account for this phenomenon.In my mind , the reasons why are as follows 2现象解释型这类文章要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释，加以评论，这类作文的基本模式是：第一段解释现象，第二段解释或阐述这种现象产生或存在的原因： 第三算提出建议或者总结观点Eg : 1.各大学为学生开设了多种多样的选修课2 学生处于各种原因选择不同的选修课3 以我自己为例。经典句型：凡是提到某个存在的问题以及需要解决该问题都可适用：第一段介绍一个存在的问题：I want to point out in this passage a problem that calls for prompt solution. No matter whether people have realized it or not ( 阐述问题的内容) 。 I am glad to see that more and more people come to pay attention to the above problem.第二段摆出问题的危害 Nobody can deny that .has brought considerable negative effects and it will continue to do so if nothing is done. Among the harmful things has done to us, one is the worst.“.” 部分指带来的一个危害。是在不行可以用“万能危害”救急。常见万能危害：Waste of time, waste of money, be harmful to human health, do/does great harm to our mental health, be destructive to social morality.第三段分析问题的原因;Why does the situation remain unimproved? If we try to locate the very cause of this problem, we may find many. But among them , the biggest one is that .( 实在是找不出原因，可以用万能原因 most people havent yet realized how serious the problem has become) 第四段 表明要采取措施解决问题的必要性Given the bad effects . has given rise to , we find it compelling to do something to get it into control. Otherwise, nobody knows what it will be like if this problem continues to hang around us . the first priority is to .3. 问题解决型这类作文一般为提纲式作文，多为说明文，通常首先提出一个有待解决的问题，然后要求考试就该问题提出解决方法，途径，有时还要求考生最后谈论适合自己的方法。这类题型的基本模式是：第一段提出问题或阐述某件事情的重要性或者意义；第二段例举说明处理某事的方式或解决某个问题的途径；第三段针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并阐述理由。此题型的写作重点在How， 即解决问题的方法。How to succeed in a job interview（2001.1）1. 面试在求职过程中的作用2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表，举止谈吐，能力，专业知识，自信，实事求是。样文： As we all know, nowadays, many jobs need a job interview. Every day, lots of people are looking for jobs. How can they get a job easily? A job interview is important. First , when we face to face with the interviewer, we have a true communication with them. We can show our experience, education background, and the ability to do the job well. At the same time, we can know the base conditions of the company.范文：、 There has been a discussion recently about the interview. It is true to the present situation that the interview becomes indispensable in seeking a job. For one thing, if a job seeker can make the best use of the interview and leaves a good impression on the mind on the interviewer, he may be lucky enough to get the job competed for by many applicants. For another, if the job hunter gives a poor performance during the interview, he is unlikely to stand a chance. （二） 看图作文1. 理解并描述图片信息读懂题目，图片标题，包括副标题所提供的信息。描述图片，准确了解主题内容， 找出图片中反映的问题或者事实。2分析原因或者现状3. 个人观点的表达，下结论 （三） 图表作文图表作文提示部分包括图表和文字要点提示部分，图表分类型主要有：圆形（饼型）图（pie chart），柱形图（直型图）（graph），曲线图（chart）， 数据统计表（表格）(table).2012年12月真题Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below( Weekly earnings in 2010) . You should give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. (图表见文件)范文一As is shown above, the bar chart clearly demonstrates the relationship between the education level and earning in 2010. It is obvious that well-educated persons such as owning Doctoral degree and Masters degreehave a high salary than those who have relatively low degree. Isolated as the figure seems to be, as a matter of fact, we can observe that the higher level of education you receive, the higher income you get.Peoples opinions about investment in education differ from person to person. Some people say that knowledge could no longer change destiny. To them, it is not only a waste of money, but also a waste of time. Others deem that education is worthy of investment. As for me it is no doubt that education offers favorable working opportunity and handsome income, which enable us to buy what we want , please what we love, and fulfill what we dream, and correspondingly we are able to build an ideal paradise where life can be enjoyed to the uttermost.In conclusion, we should realize significance of education, which plays a crucial role in personal growth of career. In addition, it is convinced that education is the prospect of a nation.范文二From the chart above, we can definitely get a conclusion that the more you learned, the higher your salary would be. The figures in the chart denied the claim that knowledge is useless. However quite a few people still hold the opinion that a higher education does no good to a better job since that there are many university students who can not get an ideal job.What I want to point out is that there is more than one factor that contributes to the failure of finding an ideal job for those who got a higher education. While those who failed to get a better education will hardly succeed in getting a good job because they didnt get the knowledge systematically and scientifically.As the proverb goes like this, Knowledge is power. Education pays, sooner or later. （四） 句子理解作文2011年12月真题Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.范文 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillIt is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. One of the most typical examples is that in present-day society, a growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as follows.For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing ones task. It is of importance for people to stick to their original aim. A great number of dragsters would stop smoking a couple of days after they have made their determination, but only a few of them may succeed in the end. For another, the people who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by his circumstance and surroundings. In that case, people tend to fail to resist various temptations around them.From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future.范文 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will “Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well. Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up. In fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own. A great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible sp