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09年作文 Emerging from insightfully depicted cartoon is a thought provoking scene that numerous people, of both sexes, at various ages, and from all walks of life, are surfing online in separate cubicles that are woven into a gigantic web. With the caption “Internet, near or far”, the cartoon obviously intends to convey to us this message: Internet may draw us inches near, but could also set us oceans apart. Traditionally, network is supposed to offer us the privilege of getting and staying in touch with others with but a few click, but is that the case anymore? Actually, some acute problems have arisen. The drawing provides us with an opportunity to have a better insight into an undesirable tendency. To be specific, in our daily life, its not uncommon that some people may chat with total strangers online for hours, but may refuse to talk to their families or friends face to face for even a minute. In addition, it is not uncommon that some college students are so indulged in online communication that they can even neglect their school work. Sadly, the Web has made these folks addict to islands isolated from the real world. Considering all these, it is advisable that we take a rational attitude towards the issue and take prompt initiatives to counterbalance the negative effects concerned. The media, for instance, needs to promote t第一段：描述图片，引向主题 As is illustrated in the elaborately painted cartoon, Facing several directions, a man, perplexedly and nervously, is walking back and forth, wondering where to go. Meanwhile, the caption is reminding him, as well as all of us, that what we really suffer from is not adversities, but choices.第二段（版本一）：平铺直叙法 The artist uses this unique metaphor in order to endow us with the concept that when faced with dilemma or predicaments, one is supposed to make a decision, and view the decision as a start leading to success. This doctrine is valuable for not only the general public, but we college students as well. To be specific, it is not surprising to see some white-collars pondering whether to change their jobs when they are dissatisfied with them. Apart from that, it is not uncommon to see college students hesitating: to find a job, to further their education, or to marry a big fish? All they need, if they tend to avoid hesitation and annoyance, is to treat these options as opportunities, and make a final decision.第二段（版本二）：反问辩驳法 Traditionally, every one, no matter he is well educated or normal, is supposed to be decisive when faced with dilemma or predicaments, but is that the case anymore? Actually, some acute problems have arisen. The drawing provides us with an opportunity to have a better insight into students undesirable tendency. To be specific, it is not surprising to see some white-collars pondering whether to change their jobs when they are dissatisfied with them. Apart from that, it is not uncommon to see college students hesitating: to find a job, to further their education, or to marry a big fish? All they need, if they tend to avoid hesitation and annoyance, is to treat these options as opportunities, and make a final decision.第二段（版本三）：哲理阐释法 The scenario seems ridiculous but is actually alarming. The meaning echoed by the drawing can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life: better trying than crying(仿自better late than never)/ decision in yourself is the first step leading to success. / just do it, and the heaven wont fall. / just do it, and anything is possible. There is no denying that we will inevitably run up against alternatives or delicate choices, for some of us which are opportunities, and for the rest, disturbance. Sadly, in face of those options, most young people are bewildered, endlessly pondering upon the possibility of failure. They are so indecisive that we almost can view choices or opportunities as predicaments.第三段：现身说法 As a student, I inevitably hesitate at a sea of matters, because we dont know what or how to do. As a matter of fact, it is the hesitation that brings about painful adversities. Therefore, in face of choices, I would make up my determination and head for my life goal without hesitation.表妹翠花考上北京大学，给翠花的一封祝贺信 Dear Cuihua,It is with the greatest pleasure that I offer you my sincerest congratulations on your enrollment of the prestigious university, which is the result of three years of your struggle and endeavor.At this special moment, I feel really as happy as you do now. Three years ago, when I accompanied you to visit Beijing University for the first time, you, as a kid, were deeply fascinated by this place and determined to be one of the students there. In the past few years, more than one person advised you to give up. However, you persisted in your hard work. Years of effort have been a success, and you have conquered the difficulties and lived up the public expectation. Frankly speaking, I have the confidence that you will lead a fruitful life in the years to come.Again, I join all members of our family in offering the heartiest congratulations and best wishes.Your affectionately Li Ming自己在韦小宝老师的指导下考上研究生，给韦小宝老师的感谢信：Dear Mr. Wei,I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am referring to your whole year of instruction you give me in the National Entrance Test of English for Master.If it had not been for your elaborate assistance (tutorship), I fear that I would never achieve such a success in the test. I am confident that it was your generousness and unselfishness that have led to this satisfactory outcome. I feel deeply indebted to all of you and I really dont know how to thank you enough for your help.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach. If there were more people like you, life would be increasingly harmonious. Yours faithfully Fu Rong写作【大小作文】课堂笔记整理【续】2/4(2009-07-22 )Part B 大作文1Structure:Paragraph 1- describe: cartoon, picture, graphParagraph 2- analyze: implication, cause, consequenceParagraph 3- comment on the phenomenon, topic or changes2Paragraphs and Sentences: Paragraph 11. What the drawing is trying to express is extremely conspicuous: .2. The cartoon reveals / unveils / exhibits an alarming / astonishing / thought-provoking scenario in which .3. The cartoon portrays a . scene in which .4. Apparently, the picture aims to emphasis the importance of .5. The cartoon features the sharp contrast between .6. What is more striking is that .7. The set of pictures present a distinguishable contrast of the .: However, Paragraph 21. The picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that .2. The artist uses this unique metaphor in order to endow us with the concept that.3. It is more than clear on this occasion that the cartoonist wishes to draw more attention to the problem of .4. The cartoon subtly reveals a phenomenon frequently happening in our society 5. Traditional wisdom has it that ., but currently .6. The picture aims at assailing a problem ., for which several factors are responsible.7. Sad / ridiculous as it is, this phenomenon does not occur rarely in todays society, while .are responsible for it.8. The picture mirrors a common social phenomenon from a unique angle . Paragraph 36-7 sentences 12 15 : ASSAttitude:Taking into account of the factors /reasons above, we can safely draw a conclusion that where there is better A, there is more hope, vitality and development.(On the one hand, on the other hand,) Each of us should attach high emphasis on A. When we are benefiting from A, we shall also do our utmost to maintain its vitality to ensure ourselves a brighter future.(积极现象、正面影响)In the aggregate, with the mushrooming digital products, we will have less trouble coping with problems occurring in jobs and lives. We are looking forward to a day when everyone, no matter he is an adult or a kid, well educated or normal, would enjoy the benefits which digital facilities bring us.Each individual has a role in building a brighter future. It is high time that all of us joined in the effort to combat this phenomenon. Everyone, I am confident, could make changes. As for me, I will do my utmost to cultivate the habit of punctuality and be a role model in this respect. （过去的模板）In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse, of which the most urgent one is to make people aware of the harmfulness of this kind of behavior. As long as everyone realizes the significance of , I am fully confident that we can definitely overcome the problem. （推荐的模板唤醒个人意识虚拟语气Part One: 从句主句与现在相反did/werewould(should、could) do与过去相反had done（been）would(should、could) have done(been)与将来相反should do/were to dowould(should、could) do与现在相反的假设 1) If I were any better, I would be twins.（俚） 2) If he were rich, I would buy two bowls of Soya-bean milk, one for drink and one for fun. 3) If I had a pair of wings, I would visit you from the heaven.与过去相反的假设1) If I had started my dinner from the sixth pie, I would have saved five. 2) Had she left earlier last evening, she would have caught the first bus to go home. 与将来相反的假设1) If they were to attack like that again, we should counterattack severely. 2) Should there be a flood, what would we do? Part Two: 建议、请求、决定、命令、需要。 重要、首要、必要、紧要 1) a