中考英语 书面表达专项复习课件.ppt

englishwriting 2016年和平区一模考试书面表达 假如你是校英文报一名通讯员 最近你针对时下热议的话题 路人摔倒 你会不会扶 对你校200名学生进行了调查 结果如下表所示 请你根据调查结果 给你校英文报写一篇报道 并发表自己的看法 要求 1 词数80 100 开头已给出 但不计入总词数 2 可适当增加一些细节 使行文连贯 参考词汇 美德virtuen recently 200studentstookpartinasurveytoseewhetherhelpapersonwhofelldownonthestreet accordingtothesurvey 20 ofthestudentssaid 2016年和平区一模考试作文 6分 12 5分 clean clear 116 58 2016年和平区一模考试书面表达 comparationoftwocompositions better vs 2016年和平区一模考试书面表达 假如你是校英文报一名通讯员 最近你针对时下热议的话题 路人摔倒 你会不会扶 对你校200名学生进行了调查 结果如下表所示 请你根据调查结果 给你校英文报写一篇报道 并发表自己的看法 要求 1 词数80 100 开头已给出 但不计入总词数 2 可适当增加一些细节 使行文连贯 参考词汇 美德virtuen recently 200studentstookpartinasurveytoseewhetherhelpapersonwhofelldownonthestreet accordingtothesurvey 20 ofthestudentssaid a theywouldhelpthem helpingotherswasatraditionalvirtue b theywouldliketoofferhelp becausehelpingothersintroublewasoneofourchinesetraditionalvirtues whichisbetter 会扶 助人为乐是传统美德 step1 usegoodwords howcanwemakeourwritingbetter 9 like enjoyvery extremelymany plentyofwant feellikeimportant playanimportantroleinshould besupposedto beexpectedto goodwords 1 nowadays englishisveryimportant englishplaysanextremelyimportantroleinnowadays haveatry 2 weshouldprotectourenvironment wearesupposedtoprotectourenvironment weareexpectedtoprotectourenvironment 11 a and30 ofthestudentscouldn tmakedecisions b therestofstudentssaiditwasdifficulttomakeadecision whichisbetter 不好说 视情况而定 step2 differentsentencepatterns howcanwemakeourwritingbetter 13 众所周知 据说3 如此 以至于 4 尽最大努力做 5 做某事对于某人而言 6 那就是为什么 替换so 7 只有用这样的方法 我们才能 goodsentences itiswell knownthat itissaid reported believedthat so that such that weshoulddowhatwecanto v that sthereasonwhy 句子 onlyinthisway canwe 倒装 itis adj forsb todosth 1 我认为学英语很有趣 ithinklearningenglishisinteresting ifinditreallyfuntolearnenglish 2 我们应该保护环境 weshouldprotecttheenvironment it sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment haveatry weshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironment good better best 15 a but50 ofthestudentssaidtheywouldn thelptheperson buttheywouldcall120forhelp b halfofthestudentssaidtheywouldcall120forhelpinsteadofliftingthemupbecausetheywereafraidtogetintotrouble whichisbetter 不会扶 怕陷入麻烦 但会打电话求救 step3 addclauses howcanwemakeourwritingbetter 17 常用从句模板 1 ithink hope 句子 2 if 从句 主句 从句 so主句my nisthat句子 定语从句 weshouldbuildmorelibraries 18 ithinkweshouldbuildmorelibraries 宾语从句 ifwebuildmorelibraries peoplewillenjoyreading 状语从句 myadviceisthatmorelibrariesshouldbebuilt 表语从句 weshouldbuildmorelibraries ithinkweshouldbuildmorelibraries whichcanmakepeoplefullofknowledge 定语从句 howmanyconnectionwordsarethereinstudentb scomposition listthem please task andcomparedwithbecausewhat smorebasedoninmypointofviewinaddition step4 useconnectionwords howcanwemakeourwritingbetter 1 表示并列或递进 and aswellas both and what smore besides inaddition notonly butalso neither nor2 表示选择 or either or3 表示转折 but however although though afterall anyway4 表示因果 because so therefore since for asaresult5 表示条件 if unless6 表示对比 instead not but while inthesameway ononehand ontheotherhand7 表示举例 forexample forinstance suchas like8 表示顺序 tobeginwith firstly first ofall second ly next later sincethen fromthenon finally 9 表示强调 especially actually infact10 表示结论 allinall altogether inaword generallyspeaking inshort inconclusion insummary inmyopinion frommypointofview 关联词 connectionwords dearmary iheardyoudidn tdowellinenglish hereissomeadviceforyou yours ithinkreadingenglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant youcanjointheenglishclubtopracticeenglish talkingwithforeigners itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheenglishradioeverymorning asthesayinggoes practicemakesperfect itcanimproveyourlisteningskill englishisnotdifficulttolearn yourturntogoforit infact inaddition firstofall second suchas dearmary iheardyoudidn tdowellinenglish hereissomeadviceforyou yours ithinkreadingenglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant youcanjointheenglishclubtopracticeenglish talkingwithforeigners itisnecessaryforyoutolisten