江苏省宜兴市第二高级中学高三英语一轮复习《读写作文书面表达》专题课件.ppt

writtenwork don tworryifyouhaveproblems ifyou rebreathing youhavedifficulties it sthewayoflife andbelieveitornot mostofyourproblemsmayactuallybegoodforyou thelagoon 环礁湖 sideofthegreatbarrierreeflookspaleandlifeless whiletheoceansideislivelyandcolorful thereasonisthatthecoral 珊瑚 aroundthelagoonsideisinstillwater withnochallengeforitssurvival itdiesearly thecoralontheoceansideisconstantlybeingtestedbywind wavesandstorms ithastofightforsurvivaleverydayofitslife asitischallengedandtesteditchangesandadapts itgrowshealthy itgrowsstrong anditreproduces that showitiswithpeople challengedandtested wecomealive likecoralstruckbythewaves wegrow physicaldemandscancauseustogrowstronger mentalandemotionalstresscanproducestrengthandpatience spiritualtestingcanproducestrengthofcharacterandfaithfulness so youhaveproblems noproblem justtellyourself thereigrowagain 写作内容 1 用约30个单词写出上文概要 2 用约120个单词发表你的观点 内容包括 1 你在生活中遇到的2 3个问题 2 就如何对待或解决你的问题 谈谈你的理解和想法 问题 狗咬的 汪汪汪 2分 一 问题作文 问题 你老师没跟你说不分段会迷了阅卷老师的眼吗 2分 问题 第一段未写内容概要 2分 问题 只写了内容概要 未提升主题 2分 问题 第二段没有主题句 而且词数偏多 共只要120字 切记 每部分务必先 singal 问题 陈述问题含糊不清 连词意义不明 段不达意 果断下降等级 问题 第三段从主题句看出 只写了做法 未有理解 5分 二 优秀书面表达 优秀之处 第一段内容概要齐全 升华到位 言简意赅 优秀之处 除到位外 一个句型 aistobwhatcistod妙不可言 优秀之处 第二段导入自然 优秀之处 导入自然 例子不错 优秀之处 第三段主题句 高级句型到位难得 优秀之处 高级表达不少 但可惜 你能发现问题所在吗 优秀书面表达选集 可惜啊 注意第一段 大家来找茬 尤其第二段 新材料作文 如何概括 howtowriteasummary 1 概括内容要点要 精 准 全 写概括时应满足的5个条件 4 一般以第三人称来表述 2 不得直接引用原文的句子 同义词组替换法 正话反说法 虚拟法 语态变换 简单句变复合句 3 词数 约30词 小于20词或大于40词 扣2分 5 与原文时态一致 正文和结尾除外 记叙文概括的方法 串联要素法 第一步 先通读全文 找出几个要素who 谁what 何事when 何时where 何地why 原因asaresult consequence finally 结果 whichledto 第二步 用自己的话串联起来万能公式 thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb who didsth atsomeplaceatsometime becauseof asaresultof dueto whichledto finally eventually 开头套用句式 thestory passagemainlytellsusthat thepassagedescribes whatisrevealedinthepassageisthat whatthepassageconveystousis lastsundayiwentfishing aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait isatdownonthebankofthelake buttwohourslater ididn tcatchanyfish igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff preparingtogobackhome justthen isawanoldmansittingnearme tomysurprise hisbasketwasfulloffish soiwentovertohim wantingtoknowwhy excuseme buthowlonghaveyousathere iasked aboutfourhours heanswered fourhours icouldn tbelievemyears yes it sveryimportanttobepatient theoldmansaid don tconsiderfishingatiringsport justenjoyit suddenly iunderstoodwhathesaid imustlearntobepatient thenisatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently ifeltafishtouchthebait butididn tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin atlast icaughtit thismademeveryhappy inthefollowingsixhours icaughtover10fish onmywayhome ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience hadnopatience 第一步 请找出这篇短文的几个要素 who 谁 what 何事 when 何时where 何地why 原因 asaresult 结果 i thewriter didn tcatchanyfish anoldman hisbasketwasfulloffish gotveryangry it sveryimportanttobepatient learntobepatient caughtit 第二步 用自己的话串联起来 onepossibleversion thepassagemainlytellsusthatthewriterwhohadnopatienceatfirstcaughtalotoffishafterbecomingpatientbecauseofbeinginfluencedbyanoldman finally herealizedpatienceisthekeytosuccess hadintendedtogiveupintendedtohavegivenup groupwork 阅读下面的短文 然后以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容 hi iammike ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme butatthecollegeineedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills suchasbalancingacheck book laundry andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatineverthoughtofinthehighschool itwasreallytoughformeatfirstandigotbadlyhomesick oncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandigotusedtothecollegelife iloveit goodfacilities helpfulinstructors andagoodlibrary thestudent sunionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek ialsogotocinemasandconcerts andoftenspendsaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs onethingithinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground groupwork 阅读下面的短文 然后以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容 hi iammike ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme butatthecollegeineedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills suchasbalancingacheck book laundry andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatineverthoughtofinthehighschool itwasreallytoughformeatfirstandigotbadlyhomesick oncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandigotusedtothecollegelife iloveit goodfacilities helpfulinstructors andagoodlibrary thestudent sunionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek ialsogotocinemasandconcerts andoftenspendsaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs onethingithinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings iwasondanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground 第一步 请找出这篇短文的几个要素 who 谁 when 何时 what where 何地why 原因 asaresult 结果 第二步 用自己的话串联起来 根据万能公式 万能公式 thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb who didsth atsomeplaceatsometime becauseof asaresultof dueto whichledto finally eventually onepossibleversion groupwork1范文 thepassagemainlytellsusthatmike whohaddifficultyinadjustingtothefirst yearcollegelife gotaccustomedtoitonesemesterlaterbecauseofthecolurfulactivitiesandenjoyedhimself sb didsth when becauseof reviewthestepsofwritingasummary 第一步 先通读全文 找出几个要素who 谁what 什么when 何时where 何地why 原因asaresult consequence finally 结果 whichleadsto 第二步 用自己的话串联起来万能公式 thepassagemainlytellsusthatsb who didsth atsomeplaceatsometime becauseof asaresultof dueto whichledto finally eventually goodmorning ladiesandgentlemen thisislihuafromseniorthree i mheretodaytosharewithyouagoodlessonfromanoverseaschinesestudentlivingingermany itisatruestory afteryearsofhardwork thischinesestudentgraduatedwithamazingacademicachievements everyonethoughthewasgoingtogetagoodjobeasilyandhaveabrightfuture buttohisdisappointment hewasnotevenallowedthechanceforaninterview thethirdtimehewasturneddown hecouldn thelptelephoningthecompanytoaskwhytheydidn twanthim theanswerwassimple wedon thiredishonestpeopleingermany whatwaswrongyoumightwonder thetruthis shortlyafterhearrivedingermany thiscleverstudentfoundthatitwaseasytoskipbuyingsubwaytickets so tosavemoney heoftenwentwithoutaticket asaresult hehadbeencaughtwithoutaticketinthesubwaythreetimes fromthisstory welearnthatwemaygetshort termbenefitsbydishonestmeans butthetruthwillcomeoutsoonerorlaterandthecostishigh soremember honestyisthebestpolicy that sallformyspeech thankyou 举例说明你对 thereismoretolifethanincreasingitsspeed 的理解 duringthecourseofpreparationforgaokao i vegotabetterunderstandingofthesaying thereismoretolifethanincreasingitsspeed 请谈谈 parentalinvolvement 对孩子及及家长各自的意义 individualwork goodmorning ladiesandgentlemen thisislihuafromseniorthree i mheretodaytosharewithyouagoodlessonfromanoverseaschinesestudentlivingingermany itisatruestory afteryearsofhardwork thischinesestudentgraduatedwithamazingacademicachievements everyonethoughthewasgoingtogetagoodjobeasilyandhaveabrightfuture buttohisdisappointment hewasnotevenallowedthechanceforaninterview thethirdtimehewasturneddown hecouldn thelptelephoningthecompanytoaskwhytheydidn twanthim theanswerwassimple wedon thiredishonestpeopleingermany whatwaswrongyoumightwonder thetruthis shortlyafterhearrivedingermany thiscleverstudentfoundthatitwaseasytoskipbuyingsubwaytickets so tosavemoney heoftenwentwithoutaticket asaresult hehadbeencaughtwithoutaticketinthesubwaythreetimes fromthisstory welearnthatwemaygetshort termbenefitsbydishonestmeans