新目标九年级英语中考复习之写作课件

AWRITINGCLASS 吉水三中梁霞 Ifyou rehappyandyouknowitIfyou rehappyandyouknowit clapyourhands clap clap Ifyou rehappyandyouknowit clapyourhands clap clap Ifyou rehappyandyouknowit ThenyourfacewillsurelyshowitIfyou rehappyandyouknowit clapyourhands clap clap 1 Clapyourhands clap clap 2 Stampyourfeet step step 3 Shout Hurray Shout Hurray play stop Tasktwo brainstormandcollectmaterials Taskone talkaboutsomerules Taskfour writingstrategyandwrite Taskfive findouterrorsandcorrect Taskthree makeanoutline Tasksix summarizeandhomework haveapart timejob drive Shouldteenagersbeallowedto arrivelateforclass Sorry I mlate gettheirearspiercedwearanearringgettheirhaircolored Ithinkteenagersshouldbeallowedto Iagree Idon tagree Why What sthereason Doyouthinkteenagersshouldbeallowedto Yes Ithinkso No Idon t Ithink Schoolrules1 Studentsaren tallowedtowatchTVonschoolnights 2 Studentsaren tallowedtotakemobilephonestoschool 3 Studentsshouldwearschooluniforms 4 Studentsshouldnotgettheirhaircolored 5 Studentsaren tallowedtohaveapart timejob Whatdoyouthinkaboutourschoolrules Whatschoolrulesshouldateenagerobeyatschool Freetalk Writing 虽然手机的普及给我们的生活带来了极大的方便 但是中学生在校究竟能不能使用手机 对我们的校规 Studentsaren tallowedtotakemobilephonestoschool你有什么看法 请填写下列表格 并从下面表格中所给两个题目中选择其中一个题目 写一篇议论文 简述你的观点 字数80字左右 短文开头已给出 不计入总词数 Themobilephoneismoreandmorepopular manyteenagershavetheirownphones Shouldstudentsbeallowedtotakemobilephonestoschool 1 Mobilephonesaregettingcheaperandmostpeoplecanbuyone 2 convenientforstudentstousemobilephonestocommunicatewithparentsandteachers 3 Cankeepintouchwithfriendsandtalkaboutsomeproblemstogether helpthefriendshiplastlonger 4 Whenindanger wecanaskforhelponthemobilephone 5 Somemobilephonescanhelpusrecordsomethingvaluableorinteresting 1 It saburdenforparentstosupportthecostoftheirchildren smobilephones 2 Somestudentsliketocomparewithothers theychangetheirmobilephonestoooftentofollowthefashion 3 badmessagescanmisleadorcheatthestudents theycanbeharmfulfortheirgrowth 4 Somestudentsarecrazyaboutsendingmessagestotheirfriendsorplayinggamesonit 5 haveradiation it sbadforthestudents health 6 usemobilephonestocheatinexams it sadishonestact Groupwork 理由型议论文1 TopicThesis Myattitude2 Thesis morespecific Reason1SupportingdetailReason2SupportingdetailReason3Supportingdetail3 Conclusion Outline 说服型议论文Topicshowthetopic2 Concedeit sadvantages123Retortit spointsandshowit sdisadvantages1233 Conclusion 议论文议论文是通过摆事实 讲道理来说服读者同意自己的观点或接受自己建议的文章 在平时的学习生活中较为实用 议论文常用的表达方式如下 1 表达观点 1 表达自己的观点 Ibelievethat Thefirstthingthatwehavetoconsider Thereisnodoubtthat 2 表示同意别人的观点 Iagreewithsbwho sbiscertainlycorrectwhenhesaysthat 3 表示部分赞同 sbmaybecorrectwhenhesays insayingthat 4 表示不太同意 but however ontheotherhand 5 表示不同意 Idisagreewithsbwhenhesaysthat 2 引述别人的观点somepeoplesay believe claimthat It swidelyaccepted argued believedthat 3 概括和总结tosumup inshort inaword inbrief onthewhole inall therefore finally itcanbesaidthat Sequencing firstofall tobeginwith first second third next then lateron atlast Exemplifying thus forexample suchas Focusing generallyspeaking inmyopinion asforme Ithink IagreeSummarizing tosumup inshort inaword inbriefAdditive besides also what smore moreover furthermore ontheotherhand Adversative but yet though however onthecontrary Causal so therefore because forthisreason inthatcase Keywords 英语写作要诀Theme 文章一定要切题 主题突出 Development 主题的发挥充分合理 词汇 句子 段落分配使用得当 内容要符合逻辑 Coherence 文理通顺 前后连贯 Key 用适当的关键词突出主题 每段都应有主题句 Brief 文章 简为贵 要抓住要点 简明扼要 合理删除多余的不必要部分 Straight 开门见山 直来直去 Sentencepattern 句型要尽量多样化 Punctuation 正确适时使用标点符号 Style 文体恰切 适合内容要求 Agreement 主语和谓语在人称 数上的一致 关系代词与先行词的一致 动词时态要正确 一致 变化合理 Themobilephoneismoreandmorepopular manyteenagershavetheirownphones Writing Youcandoit Correcting查错改错Exchangeyourwritingsandcorrecttheerrorsyoufind文体正确吗 主谓一致吗 时态正确吗 有 汉语式 英语吗 有 半截话 吗 PresentationChooseonecorrectedcompositiontopresent 如何写好英语作文 审题 明确写作目的 收集材料 处理信息 开始写作 组织材料 适当发挥 修改 发现问题 纠正错误 誊写 字迹干净整洁 TheotherdayIdidasurveyaboutsomeschoolrulesinourschoolandherearetheresults moststudentsthinkourschoolrulesarereasonableandweshouldfollowit butsomestudentsthinkourrulesaretoostrict Forexample Somestudentsthinkhavingamobilephoneisveryfashionable Andsincemobilephonesaregettingcheaper mostpeoplecanbuyone wecanalsohaveone itcanhelpuscommunicatebetterwithothers Othersdisagree theythinkmanystudentsliketocomparetheirthingswithothers Iftheirmobilephonesareold fashioned andoutdated theywillbeashamedandthentrytobuyanewone that sawasteofmoney Iagree Ithinkifstudentstakemobilephonestoschool theycan tconcentrateontheirstudyandmobilephonescanharmourphysicalhealth Soit snotnecessaryforstudentstohavemobilephones Inaword asastudent it sourdutytoobeytheschoolrulesevenifyoudon tlikesomeofthem Andwemustknowalltherulesaregoodforus that senough Onepossiblevesion Homework 随着人们的生活水平的提高 越来越多的人拥有私家汽车 请从下面表格中所给两个题目中选择其中一个题目 写一篇议论文 简述你的观点 字数100字左右 Asthestandardoflivingi