广西防城港市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达学生观摩篇（5）.doc

书面表达学生观摩篇（5）（满分30分）请以the persons helping me most”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个字的短文。要求如下：1. 简要谈谈他们对你的帮助。2. 你从他们那里得到的启示。【参考范文】书面表达（满分30分）the persons helping me mostin the process of my growing up, parents play the most important role. not only do i depend on them for money, food, clothes etc, but they are also the safe havens that always shelter me whenever im hurt. they help me to distinguish between right and wrong, and give me the solid values around which to build up my life. they teach me how to make decisions at the crossroads.when im faced with difficulties, i also turn to my friends for help. they will always give me advice, and back me up when i deal with challenges. the faith and love between us remain here in my heart. i have met many setbacks and challenges, but i always manage to get through them, owing to my parents and my friends help. i thank them for the warmness and support they gave me in the process of growing up.【天津市蓟县2014高考英语第一次模拟】书面表达（满分25分） 61在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。适当放慢进度，留出思考时间反复训练重要、易错知识点指导方法减少作业量以保证质量给予更多鼓励注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。dear mr. wang,were so pleased that you are willing to share our views.in the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _【参考范文】写作 (1题;30分)范文 (one possible version)dear mr. wang,were so pleased that you are willing to share our views.in the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. as you know, we didnt learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. as for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural english. i still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.by the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. we would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time. 【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学一模试题】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50 (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关写作内容 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：1采访的时间、对象和主题；2中小学生近视的发生率及人数；3专家解读。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作：last weekend, i had an interview with an eye-doctor, professor wang, about the primary and middle students short-sightedness in our country. it is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks no. 1 in the world, are short-sighted. professor wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for short-sightedness. he suggested that we should avoid overusing our eyes and do more outdoor exercise. whats more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学一模试题】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。the “clean your plate” campaign was started by nongovernmental organizations and activists, which urged people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table. the campaign, launched on weibo, was soon joined by millions of netizens across china to fight against food waste.the estimated annual waste of grain in china reaches 50 million tons, enough to feed about 200 million people for a year.people from across china support the campaign. the central government has promised to take measures to reduce food waste, take the lead in saving food and follow a simple working style.more and more chinese are saying “no” to food waste. staff members of a restaurant set off a campaign encouraging customers to stop food waste in qingdao, shandong province, jan. 24. “did you empty the dishes today?” has become the most popular question in china. showing an empty dish also turns a new fashion among chinese netizens.in some restaurants there are signs reminding the diners not to waste food. some even offer awards to the customers who eat all their food, as part of the campaign to reduce waste. more and more restaurants kindly remind and encourage customers to take their leftovers away.写作内容1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就“光盘行动”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) “光盘行动”产生的背景；(2) “光盘行动”的作用；(3) 你对“光盘行动”的看法和诉求。写作要求 1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 【参考范文】读写任务： when some people started the “clean your plate” campaign in an effort to reduce food waste, millions of netizens joined in it and more and more people are taking real action to stop food waste.as many people are still living in poverty around us, im quite delighted by this campaign. as far as i know, while people in advanced countries dont have to worry about their meals, millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day. though most chinese have enough food to eat, there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach. unfortunately, i can always see people leave a large part of their food on their plate and throw it as waste. it is reported that every year the chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food, which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year. what an alarming waste it is! we should feel guilty to waste so much food.it is high time that we took action to stop such waste without delay. there is every reason for us to clean our plates at our meals. if all people cut down food waste, a large quantity of food can be saved and more people will be fed.the “clean your plate” campaign is really good and useful. lets join in and eat up our meals instead of wasting any food. 【天津市2014高考英语六校第三次联考试题】书面表达（满分25分）61. 假定你是来自澳大利亚的高三学生tom，爱好广泛，性格开朗，到中国某高中学习中文。该校流行音乐俱乐部正在招聘新成员，要求会某种乐器、嗓音好且有团队意识。你希望加入该俱乐部。请用英文写一封申请信，要点如下：1. 个人基本情况；2. 加入俱乐部的目的及满足加入俱乐部的条件;3. 自己的联系方式（电话：12345678；邮箱: ）。注意：1. 词数：不少于100； 2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。dear sir/ madam,pop club attracts me deeply. _yours sincerely,tom【参考范文】书面表达：dea