2014届厦门十中高三(1,2)书面表达集.doc

2014届厦门十中高三（1,2）班书面表达集2013年9月份 写作(一) Application题目要求： 假定你叫李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，到美国哥伦比亚大学上大学，现在要写一封信申请留学。姓名李华，女，1993年6月出生。毕业学校：北京新华中学，学业：各门优秀。申请院校：美国哥伦比亚大学。申请专业：计算机科学。兴趣爱好：网络，英语。电子邮箱：. 写作指导：第一段：点明写信目的-直接表明要申请的专业Dear sir or madamI am writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. 第二段：个人情况介绍Please allow me to make a brief introduction of myself .Im Li Hua,a girl born in June,1993. Im graduating from Beijing University this coming June with each course excellent. During the past few years, I have been studying hard, achieving excellent academic grades with a superior grade of above 80 in every subject which is also considered A level. Meanwhile, I keep a balance between study and extra activities. What is the most important for me is that I participate in all kinds of activities including community affairs, ,from which I got some valuable experience.第三段：写明申请该校的原因I take great interest in the Internet as well as English and have won a good number of prizes in various English and computer competitions. So I hope I can have a chance to study further overseas. And I choose your school because the university has a long history and enjoy a good reputation in this field. 结尾：表示诚恳的请求I hope my solid academic background will meet satisfy your entrance requirements. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is Lihua93 . I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.亮点词组：获得一个机会：obtain a chance简短的介绍；make a brief introduction of保持平衡：keep a balance between参加：participate in对。感兴趣：take great interest in享有盛誉：enjoy a good reputation学术背景：academic background提供某人某物：provide sb with亮点句型：主语从句：What is the most important for me is that_定语从句：，_, from which I got some valuable experience.条件状语从句： I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. 2013年9月29日微写作【写作素材】1.要想拥有朋友,首先最好加入些俱乐部并多参加活动以结识陌生人。2.一旦你有了朋友,要学会去关心他们。3.要和他们好好相处,并经常和他们交流。1.要想拥有朋友,首先最好加入些俱乐部并多参加活动以结识陌生人。（范文）In order to have friends, first, youd better join some clubs and join in some activities to meet new people. If you want to have a great many friends, you had better join in some clubs as well as participate in a number of activities so as to make the acquaintance of strangers.(咏琪） In my opinion, if you want to have friends, you will take the follow tips. Above all, you can join some clubs where you can participate in some activities to make acquaintance with others.(艳花）2.一旦你有了朋友,要学会去关心他们。 （范文）Second, once you have friends, try to be concerned about them and get along well with them. （万里） Once having friends, you should try to care about them. Above all, you get along well with them, communicating with them from time to time. (T)3. 要和他们好好相处,并经常和他们交流。 （范文）.Last but not least, often communicate with them. （万里）Whatever you do, a true friend will be in favor of you all the time.(T)4. 亮点句子：连雅莹表达自然流畅，准确。I am firmly believed that where there is a friend, there is a way.The reason why I associate frequently with them was that I really want to get along well with them without hesitation.-繁迪Only in this way will we have a chance to touch the world of strangers.-钟瑜5. 亮点词组：结识某人 make acquaintance with sb在。起着非常重要的作用 play an extremely significant role in 强烈建议 It is strongly recommended that与。相处好get along well with与。交流 communicate with不时，偶尔 from time to time= every now and then 我坚信 I am firmly believed that 优秀习作：高三（一）班 田鹏程 It is universally acknowledged that friends play an extremely significant role in our social life. To have a friend, first of all, you had better participate in some clubs and take part in some beneficial activities,from which you will get some valuable experience. It is a good chance for you to make acquaintance with others. It is strongly recommended that once having friends, you sho