英语人教版八年级下册Unit4 Writing建议信.doc

Training GuideUnit4 Training of Writing a Suggestion Letterv Training Goals.(训练目标)通过本节课的训练，同学们要达到以下目标：1、明确一篇高分作文须具备哪些条件。2、明确完成一篇命题作文的步骤。3、根据Unit 4的话题，学会写建议信。v Task Compare the following letters and tell what a good composition is like.作文要求：请同学们针对Amy的烦恼写一封回信，给她提出建议，帮她解决烦恼。字数60-80词。Dear students, I am not happy these days. I have some problems. Firstly, Im angry with my husband and argue with him a lot because he doesnt help with housework. Secondly, I cant sleep very well at night, so I feel tired in the day time and I make a lot of mistakes in class. I think Im too stressed out. What should I do? Could you give me some advice, my dear students? Yours Amy评价下列两篇范文 Which one do you think is better? Why? Dear Amy, Let me gave you some advice. You should talk with your husband and tell him share housework with you. You shouldnt argue with him. You should do some sports or listen some music to relax yourself. Yours Sam Dear Amy, Dont worry about your problem. Heres some advice to share with you. Firstly, youd better not argue with your husband. Instead, you should talk with him nicely and let him know that youre very tired of the housework and you need his help. As for your sleeping, maybe listening to some relaxing music will help a lot. Whats more, reading or doing some sports is also a good way to relax. I hope everything will be fine soon. Yours AliceGroup work.1. 四人合作，找出并纠正文中错误。2. 参照评分标准，分别确定两篇短文得分，并说明理由。评分标准：一档 9-10分二档 7-8分三档 5-6分四档 4分以下内容、要点是否符合命题要求符合要求并有适当拓展符合要求并有适当拓展内容要点有部分缺失内容要点严重缺失段落结构是否清晰，是否使用合适的连词段落清晰连词适合段落较清晰连词较适合段落不清晰无合适连词段落不清晰无合适连词语言是否丰富准确语言丰富准确较丰富准确不丰富有个别错误错误较严重字数是否符合要求符合要求符合要求字数略有不足字数严重不足v Task Write a suggestion letter.“建议信”的基本模式Dear .,Heading(To tell why you write this letter)After I read your letter, Im sorry to know that.Im writing to share my advice with you.I would like to share .Dont worry, I think I can help you.I know you have trouble.and I would like to.Body(To give your advice)Firstly.Secondly.Then.Next.Finally.After that. As for. Besides.Whats more.Because, so that, if.Youd better. Why dont you. I think you could.Maybe you should. Its better for you to. Its important for you to.is helpful. .may help a lot.Ending(To tell your expects,wishes or hopes)I hope that everything will be fine.I hope these suggestions may help you out.I hope youll find these suggestions helpful.Please write to me if you need more help.I can help you whatever you want. Yours 五步骤完成书面表达第一步：审清题意。命题：假如你是Mary的好友Jane， Mary来信向你诉说了她的苦恼，请你针对信中内容给Mary提出至少两条建议，帮助她解决烦恼。要求：1、所提建议合理可行，包含所有要点。2、语言通顺，上下文连贯，字迹工整，字数60-80词。Dear Jane, Help me! I think Im crazy! Last week I fought with my desk mate, because I really cant stand that he always borrows my things without asking. And next Saturday hell hold a birthday party. Everyone was invited except me. I feel really sad about that. I dont want to lose this friend. But I do