高中英语 Unit5 Writing课件 新人教版必修1.ppt

人教课标高一必修1unit5 abiographyissimplythestoryofalife biographiescanbejustafewsentenceslong ortheycanfillanentirebook ortwo shortbiographiestellthebasicfactsofsomeone slifeandimportance biographiesanalyzeandinterprettheeventsinaperson slife biographiesareusuallyaboutfamouspeople whichtellusalotaboutaparticulartimeandplace theyareoftenabouthistoricalfigures buttheycanalsobeaboutpeoplestillliving selectapersonyouareinterestedinfindoutthebasicfactsoftheperson slife startwiththeencyclopediaandalmanac thinkaboutwhatelseyouwouldliketoknowabouttheperson andwhatpartsofthelifeyouwanttowritemostabout somequestionsyoumightwanttothinkaboutinclude whatmakesthispersonspecialorinteresting whatkindofeffectdidheorshehaveontheworld otherpeople whataretheadjectivesyouwouldmostusetodescribetheperson whatexamplesfromtheirlifeillustratethosequalities whateventsshapedorchangedthisperson slife didheorsheovercomeobstacles takerisks getlucky wouldtheworldbebetterorworseifthispersonhadn tlived howandwhy doadditionalresearchatyourlibraryorontheinternettofindinformationthathelpsyouanswerthesequestionsandtellaninterestingstory writeyourbiography 忠实历史 实事求是 再现传主的精神风貌 突出展示人物个性和写出典型事迹 以时间为序 以空间变换为序 以时空转换为序 lookatthelifeofnelsonmandelaandfindoutwhathappenedtohimin1999 inpairsdiscusswhatqualitiesmakemandelaagreatman andwriteasummaryofnelsonmandela slifeusingthefollowingtimeline 18 7 1918bornneartranskei southafrica 1937enteruniversitybutdidnotcompletedegree1940completedlawdegreeattheuniversity 1944formedancyouthleague1952setuplawofficetohelppoorblackpeopleinjohannesburg laterthisyear lawofficeclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti blacklaws1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplesetupinsouthafrica 1962sentencedtofiveyearshardlabourforencouragingviolenceagainstanti blacklaws1963ancbegantoblowupbuildings1964sentencedtoprisonforlifeonrobbenislandforbeingoneoftheancleaders 1982movedtoaprisonincapetown1990releasedfromprison1991becamepresidentoftheanc1993wonthenobelpeaceprizebecamepresidentofsouthafrica1999 第一步认真审题 analyzetherequirements 第二步谋篇布局 drawupanoutline 第三步联句成篇 organizethesentences 第四步锦上添花 getthearticlepolishedup 第五步查漏补缺 checkthemistakes 审主题审体裁审人称审时态 asummaryofnelsonmandela slife abiography thethird thepasttense 按时间顺序列出提纲 nelsonmandelawasbornintranskei southafricaonjuly18 1918 heentereduniversityin1937butdidnotcompletehislawdegreeattheuniversityin1940 heformedancyouthleaguein1944 in1952hesetupalawofficetohelppoorblackpeopleinjohannesburg laterthisyear hislawofficewasclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti blacklaws in1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplewassetupinsouthafrica in1962hewassentencedtofiveyearshardlabourforencouragingviolenceagainstanti blacklaws in1963ancbegantoblowupbuildings in1964hewassentencedtoprisonforlifeonrobbenislandforbeingoneoftheancleaders in1982hewasmovedtoaprisonincapetown in1990hewasreleasedfromprison in1991hebecamepresidentoftheanc in1993hewonthenobelpeaceprize in1994hebecamepresidentofsouthafrica first second then finallyatlast soon immediately suddenly here there ononeside ontheotherside infrontof atthebackof nextto foronething fortheotherthing ononehand ontheotherhand but however while though otherwise because since as thanksto asaresult of aslongas solongas onconditionthat if unless though as evenif though whether who what when where ever what smore besides tomakethematterworse what sworse inaword altogether allinall ingeneral heformedancyouthleaguein1944 formed取代founded governmentclosedhislawofficebecauseheattackedanti blacklaws hislawofficewasclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti blacklaws 被动提色显技巧 in1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplewassetupinsouthafrica in1962hewassentencedtofiveyearshardlaborforencouragingviolenceagainstanti blacklaws in1990hewasreleasedfromprison hislawofficewasclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti blacklaws afterthebanningoftheancin1960 nelsonmandelaarguedforthesettingupofamilitarywingwithintheanc in1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplewassetupinsouthafrica 合理过渡离不了 besurethatyoudidn tmakeanyspelling logicalandgrammaticalmistakes nelsonmandelawasbornintranskei southafricaonjuly18 1918 hisfatherwaschiefhenrymandelaofthetembutribe mandelahimselfentereduniversityin1937butdidnotcompletehislawdegreeattheuniversityin1940 in1944heformedancyouthleagueandwasengagedinresistanceagainsttherulingnationalparty sapartheidpoliciesafter1948 afterthatin1952hesetupalawofficetohelppoorblackpeopleinjohannesburg laterthisyear hislawofficewasclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti blacklaws afterthebanningoftheancin1960 nelsonmandelaarguedforthesettingupofamilitarywingwithintheanc in1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplewassetupinsouthafrica inthatconditionmandelawassentencedtofiveyearshardlaborforencouragingviolenceagainstanti blacklaws in1963forresistingunfairlytreatment ancbegantoblowupbuildings thenextyearmandelawassentencedtoprisonforlifeonrobbenislandforbeingoneoftheancleaders andin1982hewasmovedtoaprisonincapetown duringhisyearsinprison nelsonmandela sreputationgrewsteadily hewaswidelyacceptedasthemostsignificantblackleaderinsouthafricaandbe