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短文改错（3）短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear editor,i used to be a happy little girl and now im shy and say a few words.when i was eleven, i lost one of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one. no oneknows about it except two of my friend. however, i found it hard to face them because theyknow my secret. when i speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feeluneasy. i am afraid of make new friends as i think they will laugh at me. sometime i even wantto kill me indeed. what should i do?li hua【参考答案】dear editor,i used to be a happy little girl and now im shy and say a few words. butwhen i was eleven, i lost one of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one. no one wasknows about it except two of my friend. however, i found it hard to face them because they friends findknow my secret. when i speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel to whichuneasy. i am afraid of make new friends as i think they will laugh at me. sometime i even want making sometimesto kill me indeed. what should i do?myself二、评分意见 1. 未标注符号或符号标注不规范一律不给分。2. 答题位置（需修改的词下方或需添加位置的下方）不对（如答在上方或相距甚远的位置）一律不给分。【2012浙江省宁波市八校联考】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。例如：it was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. luckily i thewas completely free then, so ill to say “yes”. ill arrive in bristol at around 8 pm in friday.am onnowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. it has serious influenced people daily life and economic development. to solve the problem，some pieces of advice is put forward. some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. by this way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars. some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. this can decrease the traffic flow. but on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.in my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under the control. and at the same time，buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles. 【参考答案】改错（共10分）nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. it has seriously influenced peoples daily life and economic development. to solve the problem，some pieces of advice are put forward. some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. in this way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars. some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. this can decrease the traffic flow. but on the other hand，this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded.in my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. and at the same time，buses should have their own special routes which/that cannot be used by other vehicles. 2012模拟短文改错iusually most divers dont go very deep. mainly they dive to1 a depth of about 20 meter. then they swam around as they slowly2 return to the surface. everyone wants to dive must first have diving 3 lessons. there are few dangers that you have to learn about. for one4 thing, you might have problems with its air bottle. a diver must5 know how the equipment works and is able to recognize possible6 problem. there are also dangerous types of fish that you must look7 out for. you must be familiar to the environment youll be diving8 in. before you go on a dive, make sure you know that what you are 9 getting into. diving may look easily, but if you dont have the 10 necessary training, it can be both difficult and dangerous.【参考答案及解析】1. 正确 经分析本句正确。 2. swam swim 考查动词时态。文章讲述的是通常的惯例，故用一般现在时。 3. wants前加who / that, 或everyone whoever考查句子结构分析。此处must have是谓语动词，wants前加who/that构成定语从句，把everyone whoever构成主语从句。4. few前加a, 或few some 考查句意理解。此处意为：你必须知道有一些危险。故用a few或some。 5. its your 考查代词指代一致。此处your应与有保持一致。 6. is be 考查句意理解及并列关系。此处be与know并列。7. problem problems 考查名词的单复数。根据句意可知可能的问题不止一个。 8. to with 考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握短语“主语（人）be familiar with ”。 9. 去掉that 考查名词性从句的连接词。此处what是宾语从句的连接词，故去掉that。10. easily easy考查形容词的用法。此处look相当于系动词，故用形容词。2012模拟短文改错j my birthday is coming. father asked me how i would 1. want as my birthday present. i told him i need no present but 2. a party. father said ok. when i recited the name of my seven 3. friends i planned to invite, he wondered why his guest list didnt 4. include my new neighbor tom. i told him i didnt like to be with 5. a person whom i didnt know well. and father insisted that i 6. seize the chance to make new friends. in my birthday, tom 7. came besides my seven friends. very quick we became good 8. friends. from this i realized give others a chance means giving 9. myself a chance. it was really unforgettable birthday. 10. 【参考答案及解析】1. how what考查宾语从句的连接词。此处what作want的宾语。 2. need needed 考查动词时态。根据文意此处应用一般过去时。 3. name names 考查名词单复数。根据后文可知应是七个朋友的名字，故用复数形式。 4. his my 考查代词指代一致。5. 正确 经分析本句正确。此处my guest list和my new neighbor tom应一致。6. and but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处表转折。 7. in on 考查介词的用法。此处指在“生日这天”，故用介词on。8. quick quickly考查副词的用法。此处修饰动词become用副词。 9. give giving 考查动名词的用法。此处动名词短语giving others a chance作means的主语。10. unforgettable an unforgettable考查冠词的用法。此处birthday是可数名词，故其前加an。2012模拟短文改错kstudents today should do more reading. indeed, the importance of reading can never be too stressed. first of all, reading, especial1 out-of-class reading, enrich our mind and broadens our horizons. 2 through read, we learn what cannot be learnt in our classrooms.3 besides, reading is also a way of relaxation. this is very refreshing 4 to read a story before going to bed, or after a day of the study.5 there were many famous sayings about reading, like “reading 6 is to the mind that exercise is to the body”. then how can we 7 develop the habit of reading? in the first place, i believe we need begin8 from an early age, and then stick on it and never give up. secondly, we 9 should read what we are interested and also what is proper for us.10 【参考答案及解析】1especialespecially考查副词的用法。此处表强调用副词形式。2enrichenriches考查主谓一致。因为reading作主语，故谓语动词用单数形式。3readreading考查动名词的用法。此处through是介词，其后用动名词。4thisit考查代词的用法。此处it是形式主语，不定式短语to read a story before going to bed是真正的主语。5去掉the 考查冠词的用法。此处study是抽象名词。6wereare 考查动词时态。根据文意用一般现在时。7thatwhat考查固定句型。解题关键：掌握a is to b what c is to d句型。8need后加to考查need的用法。此处need是实意动词，其后接不定式作宾语。9onto 考查动词短语。解题关键：掌握短语stick to “坚持”。10interested后加in考查固定短语的用法。解题关键：掌握短语be interested in； what作in的宾语。2012模拟短文改错lmothers day was around the corner. my good friend 1. _alice, jenny and i get together, discussing what we should do to 2. _our respect for. alice was planning to buy some flowers with 3. _his pocket money in honor of her mother. jenny was going to buy 4. _vegetabl