高中英语 高考写作分类掌握 13概括记叙文要点复习课件 新人教版.ppt

13 概括记叙文的要点 主题 诚实才是上策 好人有好报1 theauthortellsastoryabout 某人 achinesestudentwithanexcellentacademicachievementwho 做某事 couldn tfindajobingermany 原因 becauseofhisstealingridesatthesubway 启示 whichshowshonestyisthebestpolicy 2011广州一模 晨读狂背语篇模板 2 某人做了某事 theauthorhappenedtopickanumbrellaonabusandtriedtofinditsowner 结果 shewaspleasedtofindtheownerandalsogotajobofferedbytheowneroftheumbrella 一 概括方法对于故事类记叙文 我们应首先找出故事的主角 然后找出该主角 何时何地因何原因或出于何种目的 做了何事 再弄清结果如何 以及该故事说明了一个什么道理或给人有什么启示 其中 某人做了某事 是最主要的 灵活运用超级模仿 在写作过程中还注意以下几点 时态应与原文时态一致 一般以第三人称的形式来表述 如i要变成thewriter he she等 3 可选用以下句式开头 thepassage storyisabout theauthortellsusastoryabouta thepassageisastoryabout 注 由于字数限制为大约30个词 我们也不一定要使用thestorytellsus之类的开头语 二 超级模板 不一定都适合 仅作参考 1 inorderto sb didsth sthhappened asaresult therefore 2 sb didsth sthhappened whichshows dueto thanksto because of whichshows 1 someyearsago leavingthefarmtoworkinthecity threebrotherswereemployedbythesamecompanyandonthesamepay butthreeyearslater theyreceiveddifferentwages sotheirfatherwasconfusedanddecidedtopayavisittotheboss whotoldhimthathewouldlethissonsexplainforthemselves 三 超级仿写1 概要写作 thethreebrotherswereaskedbythesupervisortogototheairporttogetacargoinventoryatdifferenttimes jim whoreceived500dollarsamonth gottheinformationonthephoneinsteadofgoingtotheairporthimself frank the1000dollarsamonthbrotherwithalistofmorecargoes george the1500dollarsamonthbrothercamebackwithdetailedinformationandalsodidsomethingextrawithoutbeingtold 参考答案 某人做了某事 threebrothers whoworkedforthesamecompany receiveddifferentwages 原因 duetotheirdifferentattitudestowardstheirwork 意义 whichshowsarightattitudeisofgreathelptoone slife 2 ihiredacarpentertohelpmerepairanoldfarmhouse afterhejustfinishedatiringdayonthejob aflattiremadehimloseanhourofwork worsestill hisancienttruckrefusedtostart whenidrovehimhome hesatinstonysilence onarriving heinvitedmeintomeethisfamily aswewalkedtowardthefrontdoor hestoppedforashorttimeatasmalltree touchingthebrancheswithbothhands whenopeningthedoor hisbrownfacewascoveredwithsmilesandhehuggedhistwosmallchildrenandgavehiswifeakiss aftersupper hewalkedmetothecar whenwepassedthetreeandmycuriositydrovemetoaskhim beforewewentin whydidyoustopbythetree oh that smytroubletree hereplied iknowican thelphavingtroublesonthejobandinmylife butthosetroublesdon tbelonginthehousewithmywifeandchildren icanhangthemuponthetreeeverynightbeforeicomehome butitturnedoutthatthenextmorningthereweren tasmanytroublesasirememberedthenightbefore putdownourworriesforamomentandwewillberelievedforever 参考答案 inordernottoworryhisfamily 某人做了某事 hedid