话题写作一课一研李春艳.ppt

Compositionpractice Topic Howtoguaranteestudents safetyatschool 高中英语写作话题训练 湖北襄阳一中李春艳 如何保障学生在校安全 theadvicetoavoiddangersatschool 1 neverfindfaultswithothers 别找茬2 Neverfightwithyourclassmates 3 Neverbreakthewindows 4 Neverclimbthetalltrees 5 Neverjumpoutofthewindow 6 Nevertouchtheelectricwires 7 Neversetfireintheteachingbuilding 8 Nevercrowdintooroutofthebuilding Schoolisoursecondhome asaresult wemustmakeeveryefforttomakeitasafeplaceforustostudyandlivein Canyoulistthefollowingusefulphrasesthatarerelevanttothetopic Groupdiscussion 1 面对危险 face 2 保持冷静 calm 3 听从老师指导 guidance 4 维护校园安全 maintain 5 安全感 sense 6 负有责任 responsibility 7 实施 carry 8 安全第一 safety 9 采取措施 measures 10 牢记 mind 11 重视安全问题 befacedwithdanger staycalm keepcalm followtheteacher sguidance maintainschoolsafety asenseofsecurity taketheresponsibilitytodosth carryout Safetycomesfirst keep bear inmind attachgreatimportancetothesafety Usefulexpressions adopteffectivemeasurestodosth 12 毋庸置疑的是 deny 13 起作用 play 14 旨在 aim 15 就我个人而言 concern 16 认为 重要 stress 17 避免受伤 avoid 18 陷入 的困境 catch 19 给我们带来精神上和肉体上苦难 bring sufferings mental physical 20 应该遵守学校规章制度 suppose observe regulations Thereisnodenyingthat playanimportantpartin beaimedat asfarasI mconcerned laystresson avoidbeinghurt getcaughtin bringsufferingsandpainstousmentallyandphysically besupposedtoobserveschoolrulesandregulations 常用句式 2 Whatcallsforspecialattentionisthat 需要特别注意的是 4 WheneverImeetwith Icannotbutfeelfrightened 3 Onlywithcombinedefforts canwe 唯有通力合作 我们才能 6 Asisoftenthecase 通常情况下 这是常有的事 8 Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat 通过以上讨论 我们可以得出结论 5 Take forexample 以 为例 7 Onnoaccountcanwe V 我们绝对不能 1 Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat 人们通常认为 每当我遭遇 我就忍不住感到害怕 毋庸置疑安全在日常生活中起着重要的作用 2 只有教育才会产生重大影响 Thereisnodenyingthatsafetyplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife itiseducationthatcanreallymakeagreatdifference 句型操练 连词成句 3 当我们做运动时 应该重视安全避免受伤 4 和同学发生矛盾时 我们应该冷静避免打架 5 我们应该遵守学校规章制度 When weare doingsports weshouldattachimportancetothesafetyandavoidbeinghurt whenwegetintotroublewithourclassmates weshouldremaincalmandavoidanyformoffighting wearesupposedtoobservetheschoolrulesandregulations Recentlyourschoolhascarriedoutanactivityaimedatmakingourcampusasafeplacetostayin whatdoyouthinkoftheactivity howtoguaranteethesafetyofstudentsatschool 注意 1 避免中式英语表达 字迹工整 2 尽可能使用近期学过的词语 常用句式表达 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯 3 词数 120左右 注释 校园安全safetyatschool 课堂探究 即兴写作 作文模版 Para1 Thereisnodenying thefact that来强调文章主题 文章主题isplayinganimportantpartinourdailylife Notonly butalso shouldpayspecialattentionto Therefore Para2 yearsofschoollifehastaughtmemanywaystodealwiththeproblems Tobeginwith whenwedo weshould 具体措施1 What smore 具体措施2 lastbutnotleast we dbetter when 尽量多用定从 名词性从句 倒装句 强调句及分词作状语或when whiledoingsth 的句式结构 Para3 AsfarasIamconcerned 阐明个人对于该主题的看法或观点 ontheonehand wecan ontheotherhand wecan 对主题作进一步的阐述 themore themore better 来作结束语或下结论 Onepossibleversion Thereisnodenyingthatsafetyplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife Recentlyourschoolhascarriedoutaprogramaimedatmakingourcampusasafeplacetostayin AsfarasIamconcerned Iconsiderthisasindeedagoodpractice whichwillmakeusawarethatsafetyshouldalwayscomefirst Firstofall Whendoingsports weshouldattachimportancetothesafetyandavoidbeinghurt Furthermore whenwegetintotroublewith ourclassmates weshouldstaycalmandavoidanyformoffighting whichmayonlybringsufferingandpaintousmentallyandphysically Aboveall itiseducationthatcanreallymakeagreatdifferencetoputusatalowerriskofbeinghurtatschool Iappealtoalltheteachersalong