2015四级作文模拟练习.doc

Directions: Write a composition entitled Idol Worship in My Eyes. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.简要描述年轻人偶像崇拜的现象；2.陈述崇拜偶像对年轻人的影响，包括利弊两方面；3.简述你对追星、偶像崇拜的态度。【步骤构思】步骤1：审题：这是一篇以偶像崇拜为主题的解释说明文。步骤2：引入话题：指出年轻人崇拜娱乐圈偶像的现象；展开话题：从两个方面说明偶像崇拜的好与坏界限不明显；话题结论：表达自己对偶像崇拜这一现象的看法。【作文背诵范文】Idol Worship in My EyesMost people have their idols, be it scientists or pop singers. Many youngsters, in particular, worship stars in the sports and entertainment field, who catch most of the public attention.大部分人都有他们的偶像，无论是科学家还是流行歌星。尤其是许多年轻人，崇拜那些体育界和娱乐圈最吸引大众注意力的明星。It is hard to say whether idol worshiping is good or bad, for it is not a black-and-white issue. For one thing, idols may inspire they young people in different ways. Usually, these public figures walk into the spotlight after a great amount of hard work, therefore they set up role models as talented and industrious persons. But for another thing, it may not be wise to blindly admire anyone. Some youngsters try to imitate their idolsdressing, pronunciation, life style and everything. This is dangerous, because to err is human and stars have their weaknesses as well, and in some cases, even scandals.很难说偶像崇拜是好还是坏，因为这不是个黑白分明的问题。一方面，偶像可以通过不同方式启发年轻人。通常，这些公众人物是在大量努力工作之后才走到聚光灯下的，因此他们作为有天赋和勤劳的人，树立起了典范。但是从另一方面来说，盲目崇拜任何人也许都是不明智的。一些年轻人试图模仿他们的偶像一一服饰、发音、生活方式和所有事情。这很危险，因为人非圣贤孰能无过，明星也有他们的缺点，而且在某些情况下，甚至会有丑闻。As I perceive this phenomenon, there is nothing wrong with idol worshiping inherently. What matter are the aspects in which we admire them and to what extent it goes. Even if a certain star always presents a good public image, the worship should not go to such extreme as pure imitation, otherwise there will be a lot of carbon copies lacking individuality. (196 words)根据我对这一现象的看法，崇拜偶像从本质上没有什么不对的。真正重要的是我们崇拜他们什么方面，以及崇拜到了什么程度。即使某个明星展现的公众形象一直很好，这种崇拜也不应该走向完全模仿的极端，否则就会出现很多缺乏个性的一模一样的东西。【高分句型解析】This is dangerous, because to err is human and stars have their weaknesses as well 这很危险，因为人非圣贤孰能无过，明星也有他们的缺点点评：这句话中活用了习语to err is human,表示“人非圣贤孰能无过”，在写作中正确运用习语成语，是文章高分的一个因素。otherwise there will be a lot of carbon copies lacking individuality. 否则就会出现很多缺乏个性的一模一样的东西。点评：这句话中活用了短语carbon copies,这个短语本意指“复定的副本”，在本文指缺缺乏个性的人，通过carbon copies这一形象的描述，使得文字变得栩栩如生。【作文加分词】black-and-white adj.黑白分明的to err is human 人非圣贤，孰能无过a great amount of 大量的，许多的scandal skndl n.丑闻，流言斐语industrious indstris adj.勤勉的，刻苦的inherently inhirntli adv.天性地，固有地imitate imiteit n.模仿carbon copies 一模一样的事物Directions: Write a composition entitled The Prevalence of Western Holidays. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.1.中国传统节日受到冷遇，西方节日却日益升温；2.形成这种现象的原因；3.你对这种现象的态度。【步骤构思】步骤1：审题：这是一篇以西方节日为主题的解释说明文。步骤2：引入话题：简述相比中国传统节日，西方节日流行这一现象；展开话题：分析造成这种现象的原因；话题结论：陈述自己的态度：携起手来保护中国的传统节日。【作文背诵范文】The Prevalence of Western Holidays-it is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected. Young people in China who are ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays are crazy about Christmas or Valentines Day.值得注意的是，西方节日正日益流行，而中国传统节日在一定程度上却被忽略了。对中国传统节日一无所知的中国年轻人却热衷于西方的圣诞节或情人节。There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon. First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect. Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people. Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to prevail in China. Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while treating our own possessions with contempt.造成这种现象可能有几个原因。首先，西方国家，如美国和英国，在世界各个方面都占有强有力的主导地位。这些国家的一切都被一些现代年轻人认为具有优势并受到崇拜。第二，英语作为一种世界通用语的普及以及全球化的发展使得西方文化在中国盛行。最后，但也是同样重要的是，一些中国人迷信外国的东西，而蔑视自己拥有的东西。I am critical of this trend. China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions. Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted. If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions. Nobody expects such a consequence. So let us join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition, especially traditional holidays. (180 words)我对这一趋势持批评态度。中国拥有灿烂辉煌的历史和传统。中国的传统应加以保持和促进。如果这一趋势继续下去，我们祖先的宝贵遗产，将被西方传统所取代。没有人期待这样的后果。因此，让我们携起手来保护中国的传统，尤其是传统节日。【高分句型解析】China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.中国拥有灿烂辉煌的历史和传统。点评：这个句子结构很简单，但用的都是“大词”，比如：boast,brilliant和splendid，在四级写作中准确运用这样的词是考试得高分的一个亮点。 【作文加分词】prevalence prevlns n.流行，盛行noticeable nouustisbl adj.显而易见的neglected niglektid adj.忽视的ignorant ignrnt dj.无知的dominant da:minnt adj.占优势的superior su:pirir adj.出众的，优秀的prevail priveil v.流行，盛行have blind faith in 盲目相信possession pzen n.所有物，财产contempt kntempt n.轻视，蔑视brilliant brilint adj.灿烂的splendid splendid adj. 辉煌的，灿烂的heritage heritid n.遗产;传统ancestor nsestr n.祖先Directions: Write a composition entitled Waste Separation from Your Campus. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.1.大学生垃圾分类的意识仍然较弱；2.垃圾分类的重要意义；3.垃圾分类应该从校园做起。【步骤构思】步骤1：审题：这是一篇以校园垃圾分类为主题的议论文。步骤2：引入话题：校园垃圾大量存在，学生的垃圾分类意识薄弱；展开话题：详述垃圾分类对于环境保护和垃圾处理的益处；话题结论：加强垃圾分类的教育，提高大学生的垃圾分类意识，同时自觉地转化为实际行动。【作文背诵范文】Waste Separation from Your CampusIts no doubt that university campuses will produce a large amount of rubbish every day, however, there are fewer college students paying attention to its classification.毫无疑问，大学校园里每天都会制造大量垃圾，但是，注意垃圾分类的大学生很少。Factually waste separation is vital to create an environment-friendly campus. Firstly, waste separation does great contribution to the environmental protection. Since some of waste is recyclable, while other is unrecyclable, if all the students could voluntarily differentiate recyclable rubbish from unrecyclable rubbish, the risk of the environmental pollution will be greatly reduced. Secondly, waste separation could save a lot of energy and tirne on its processing.其实垃圾分类对创造环保型的校园来说至关重要。首先，垃圾分类对保护环境贡献很大。由于一些垃圾是可循环利用的，而另外一些是不可循环利用的，如果所有学生都能自主地把可循环利用的垃圾和不可循环利用的垃圾区别开来，对环境造成污染的风险会大大降低。其次，垃圾分类能使人们在处理垃圾过程中节省大量的时间和精力。With the rapid increase in the amount of rubbish at the campus, rubbish classmification does not permit of any delay. On the one hand, as the well-educated people, college students should act as hosts of the universities and separate waste from this moment in their daily life. On the other hand, university authorities should strengthen students awareness of environmental protection and guide students to separate waste in a reasonable way.(166 words)随着校园垃圾数量的快速增加，垃圾分类刻不容缓。一方面，作为受过良好教育的人，大学生应该以大学主人自居，从现在起，在日常生活中就把垃圾进行分类。另一方面，大学校方应该加强学生的环保意识，引导学生用正确的方式对垃圾进行分类。【高分句型解析】Since some of waste is recyclable, while other is unrecyclable, if all the students could voluntarlly differentiate recyclable rubbish from unrecyclable rubbish, the risk of the environmental pollution will be greatly reduced.由于一些垃圾是可循环利用的，而另外-些是不可循环利用的，如果所有学生都能自主地把可循环利用的垃圾和不可循环利用的垃圾区别开来，对环境造成污染的风险会大大降低.点评：这句话读起来好像是绕口令一样，主要是因为运用了recyclabel和unrecyclable这样一组反义词，特别要注意这两个词的构词特点。【作文加分词】classification ,klsifikein n.分类contribution ,ka:ntribju:n n.报助，贡献recyclable ,ri:saiklbl adj.可循环利用的voluntarily ,va:lnterli adv.自动地，自发地differentiate ,difrenieit v.区别，区分weU-educated weledukeitid adj.受过良好教育的awareness werns n.意识Directions: Write a composition entitled On the Low-carbon Life. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.目前人们很崇尚低碳生活；2.低碳生活的重要性；3.怎样创建低碳生活。【步骤构思】步骤1：审题：这是一篇以低碳生活为主题的议论文。步骤2：引入话题：低碳生活日趋流行；展开话题：从三方面说明低碳生活的好处；话题结论：提出创造低碳生活的具体措施。【作文背诵范文】On the Low-carbon LifeRecently, it is very popular to live a low-carbon life. It not only res ults from the promotion of the government but also rises out of the peoples internal heart.最近，低碳生活非常流行。这不仅得益于政府的宣传，同时也是人们发自内心的结果。Living a low-carbon life is of great importance to eveyone. First of all, it can protect the environment to a great extent. Second, it can save the limited natural resources and energy, and will leave a better world for our offspring. Third, it is a healthy lifestyle and will help mould a harmonious social atmosphere.低碳生活对于每个人而言都十分重要。第一，很大程度上它能保护环境。第二，它能够节约自然资源和能源，并为我们的后代留下一个更美好的世界。第三，它是一种健康的生活方式，将有助于塑造一种和谐的社会氛围。Therefore, how to create a low-carbon life is necessary for us to consider. To begin with, we should save the energy, such as the electricity, water and domestic gas. Second, when we go out we can walk or ride a bike instead of by car. Third, we should not use the plastic bags which are hard to break down. If so, we can live a low-carbon life and gain the happiness of it. (158 words)因此，如何创造低碳生活是我们需要考虑的问题。首先，我们应该节约能源，比如，电能、水资源和家用燃气。第二，当外出时，我们可以步行或骑自行车来代替汽车。第三，我们不应使用不易降解的塑料袋。这样，我们才能够在低碳生活中生存，并且从中感受到乐趣。【高分句型解析】Third, we should not use the plastic bags which are hard to break down.第三，我们不应使用不易降解的塑料袋。点评：这是一个定语从句，which引导的定语从句修饰the plastic bags。 【作文加分词】results from 起因于，由于to a great extent 在很大程度上offspring a:fspri n.子孙，后代mould mould v.铸造，塑造domestic gas 家用燃气，民用煤气break down 分解Directions: Write a composition entitled Early Bird Catches the Worm. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.1.“早起的鸟儿有虫吃”是大家都熟悉的谚语；2.人们这么说的原因；3.作出总结。【步骤构思】步骤1：审题：这是一篇以谚语为主题的议论文。步骤2：引入话题：引出众所周知的谚语，并赞同此观点；展开话题：从三个方面阐述理由；话题结论：要意识到早点开始的重要性。【作文背诵范文】Early Bird Catches the WormEarly bird catches the worm is a well-known proverb which all of us are familiar with. I fully agree with it and its implication, in my mind, can be justified in three respects.“早起的鸟儿有虫吃”是个很出名的谚语，我们都很熟悉。我完全赞同这句话，而且我认为，它的含义可以从三个方面进行说明。First, it takes time to accomplish a task the earlier you begin，the more likely you will reach your goal earlier. Otherwise you call never be sure of your success. Second, when diligence becomes a habit, nothing will be difficult to a determined and persistent person. For example, you will never feel bored and tired at doing social investigation if you really enjoy it. Third, looking at the matter from another perspective， we will find that social resources are always limited and opportunities are always for those prepared minds.第一，要完成一项任务需要时间一一你越早开始，就越有可能更早达成你的目标。否则你不可能确保你的成功。第二，当勤奋变成一种习惯，对一个有决心能坚持的人来说，没有事情是困难的。比如说，在做一项社会调查的时候，如果你真正喜欢它，你就从不会感到无聊和疲惫。第三，从另一角度来看这一问题，我们会发现，社会资源总是有限的，机会总是留给那些有准备的人的。Living in an age when most people are intelligent, diligence seems more than necessary. As the modem competition becomes more and more fierce, we should realize the importance of early beginning. (152 words)生活在一个大部分人都很聪明的年代，勤奋看起来非常有必要。由于现代的竞争变得越来越激烈，所以我们应该意识到早点开始的重要性。【高分句型解析】First, it takes time to accomplish a task the earlier you begin，the more likely you will reach your goal earlier.第一，要完成一项任务需要时间一一你越早开始，就越有可能更早达成你的目标。点评：这句话中运用了一个句型“that+比较级”，表示“越就越”。类似的句型，在写作中要学会运用。 【作文加分词】proverb pra:v:rb n.谚语，俗语be familiar with 熟悉implication ,implikein n.含意，暗示accomplish ka:mpli v.完成，达到diligence dilidns n.勤奋persistent prsistnt adj.坚持的social investigation 社会调查perspective prspektiv n.看法，观点Directions: Write a composition entitled Popularity of Green Food. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.1.绿色食品现在越来越受到消费者的青睐；2.为什么绿色食品如此受欢迎；3.绿色食品将有更大的发展空间。【步骤构思】步骤1：审题：这是一篇以绿色食品为主题的解释说明文。步骤2：引入话题：说明绿色食品越来越受欢迎的现象；展开话题：解释绿色食品受欢迎的原因；话题结论：预见绿色食品在未来会在更大的市场份额。【作文背诵范文】Popularity of Green FoodDue to its high-quality and original tastes, green food appeals to more consumers. From supermmarkets to chain stores, green food is found everywhere.绿色食品凭借它的高品质和天然味道，为众多消费者所钟爱。从大型超市到连锁店，到处能找到绿色食品的身影。Why is green food so popular even though its price is usually higher than other food? On the one hand, recently a series of issues on food safety makes customers disturbed and anxious. In order to have the reliable food, more housewives opt to select green food for their family. Green food has been labeled as a kind of healthy, delicious and fashionable food. This is perhaps the most important reason for the popularity of green food. On the other haod, with the advance in living standard, people will pay more attention to the quality of food and their raised income is enough to cover the expenditure of food with a comparatively high price.绿色食品的价格往往高于普通食品，为什么还能如此受欢迎呢?一方面，最近一系列的食品安全事件使消费者心有余悸。为了买到更值得信赖的食品，更多的家庭主妇选择了绿色食品。绿色食品已成为健康、美味和时尚食品的代表。这也许是绿色食品受欢迎的最重要的原因。另一方面，随着生活水平的提高，人们更关注食品的质量，而他们的收入也足以支付价格比较高的食品。With the development of the society, green food is certainly to hold a larger portion in the market. In the near future, people will be accustomed to enjoy the fresh vegetable, fruits and cereals without pesticide residues, artificial feed and contarnination. (183 words)随着社会的发展，绿色食品必然在市场中占据更大的比例。在不久的将来，人们会习惯于品尝没有杀虫剂、人工饲料和污染的新鲜蔬菜、水果和谷物。【高分句型解析】and their raised income is enough to cover the expenditure of food with a comparatively high price.而他们的收入也足以支付价格比较高的食品。点评：这句话中用了一个单词“cover”，我们知道cover通常的意思是“覆盖”，在本句中“（钱）是够付”的意思，在写作中我们要学会运用一词多义的单词。【作文加分词】chain store 连锁店opt to do sth. 选择做某事expenditure ikspenditr n.开支，消费额comparatively kmprtivli adv.比较地portion p:rn n.部分be accustomed to 习惯于cereal siril n.谷类食物，麦片pesticide residues 农药残留artificial ,a:rtifil adj.人工的，人造的ontamination kn,tminein n.污染Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composi-tion on the topic Aid Education in China.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 每年，高校许多大学生受到鼓舞去贫困地区支教。2. 支教活动的意义。3. 我的看法。 参考范文：Aid Education in ChinaEach year, college students, encouraged to aid students in the poverty-stricken areas, volunteer themselves in poor villages for a year and try to improve education in poor areas.Aid-education has been beneficial in two aspects. On the one hand, college volunteers are really devoted to the cause. They have opened the eyes of students in underdeveloped regions to the outside world by bringing them new knowledge and thoughts. As a result, they are extremely well-received by the children there. On the other hand, college students have received a rigorous training by adapting to the harsh living conditions. They are enjoying the appreciation and no-distance friendship from the children. Whats more, they are greatly inspired by the moving and tireless spirit of the children.In my opinion, Chinas educational development cant be isolated from each individual and we college students should take the lead in response to the appeal for offering aid to children in poor areas.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:1现在很多年轻人缺乏拼搏精神2导致这一问题的原因是什么3大学生应该加强拼搏精神 参考范文：Young People Should Have Combatant SpiritNowadays, quite a few people believe that combatant spirit is essential for ones success in todays competitive world. However, some young people today think nothing of this spirit which，in their opinion, is only needed in revolutionary age. Even worse, when facing the difficulties, they will choose to yield or cower without making any efforts.There are many factors resulting in young peoples lack of combatant spirit. Among these, comfortable living environment plays a vital role. Todays parents provide nearly everything to the children, which results in the childrens lack of motivation for striving on their own. Whats more, the present education system does not pay much attention to help the young people build up the combatant spirit.Considering the importance of combatant spirit, I think it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen young peoples combatant spirit. Above all, parents shouldnt spoil their children and should ask their children to strive for what they intend to obtain. Moreover, schools should build a better environment for students to develop their struggle and aggressive spirit. Besides, young people themselves should adjust their minds and follow the examples of those people in history or around us who achieve their success under the stimulation of combatant spirit. In a word, it is an urgent thing for todays young people to enhance combatant spirit.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should cars be allowed into College Campus? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 现在某些高校校园禁止车辆驶入，2. 这种规定的考虑，3. 谈谈你的看法。 参考范文：Should cars be allowed into College Campus?With the rapid development of our national economy, private cars have become in large number; of course, quite a few cars are heavily driven into College Campus.In a significant way, these cars do not take up students places for study, but actually affect their daily life and study- for instance, this crowd of cars may make noise and emit filthy gas to choke us to death. And the campus is jammed with lines of cars and seems to be parking lot instead of an academic institute. So cars have been strictly prohibited into many College Campuses. It seems that this is not convenience to some persons, indeed, but this is