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读写任务 写作指导 ByNo 75MiddleSchoolZhuQianyin 预测 阅读材料的体裁可以是说明文如实地说明一个现象 可以是一个记叙文 如用一个故事引出一个话题或道理 可以是一个新闻报道引发的一场争论 还可以是旗帜鲜明 说理性很强的文章 总之 让大家 有话想说 而且有话能说 读写任务 的写作过程 1 把握阅读材料的结构 思路 观点与意图 2 概括阅读材料的观点 论证过程 3 在 写作内容 的引导下写作 第一步 分析阅读材料的结构 思路 观点与意图 以2007样题为例 所给短文的说理思路如下 论点 论据 结论 2 6 正面论据 8 11 反面论据 12 13 1 概括作者的说理过程 阅读材料的观点是 1 可以概括为Somepeoplethinkthatteachersshouldnotcorrectstudents mistakesforthem 其正面论据 2 6 可以概括为Childrenlearnbycomparinghisbehaviors includinglanguage withthoseofmoreskilledpeople 阅读材料的反面论据 7 11 可以概括为Teachers frequentcorrectionofstudents mistakesmakesstudentsunabletojudgetheirownwork 阅读材料的结论 12 13 可以概括为Sothosepeopleencouragestudentstolearnbycorrectingtheirownmistakesinsteadofhavingtheirmistakescorrectedbytheirteachers 用自己的语言整理如下 1 Theauthortellsustheimportanceofself learningforchildren Notonlyshouldtheteacherhelpthestudentstocorrecttheirmistakes butalsotheyshoulddependthemselvestocorrecttheirownmistakes 33 2 Thispassagediscussestheimportanceofself learningforchildren Studentsshouldhavethechancetocorrecttheirownmistakes learn by doingandlearnfromeachother notjusttheteacher 29words 3 Thearticlegivestheviewthatteachersshouldletstudentscorrecttheirmistakesbythemselves Studentsareabletocorrecttheirownmistakesandteachers frequentcorrectionwillmakechildrenunabletojudgetheirownwork 35words 4 Somepeoplethinkstudents mistakesshouldbecorrectedbythemselvesanditiswrongfortheteacherstodoitforthemtooofteninschool Itwillmakethechildrendependentontheteachers 35words Theauthor Thepassage discussedthebenefitofextracurricularactivitiesincludingbeingawaytoimprovestudents health widentheirsocialcircleandintroducethemtonewideasandpeople 30words reviewsthemostimportantpointsofthetext Itshouldbebrief short Furthermore thesummaryshouldbewrittenasmuchaspossibleinyourownwords Itcontainsonlythemainideasandwhattheauthortalksaboutthetopicbutnotincludemuchexplanationorexamples Asummary HowtowriteasummaryBeforeyoubeginyoursummary youshouldidentifythemainpointsofthetext 2 Underline highlightand ortakenotesonthetext 3 ThenWriteasummarywhichincludestheauthor smainideaorpurposeforwritingthetext thetopicandthenwhattheauthorsaysaboutthetopic Omittingspecificdetails examples description andunnecessaryexplanations 4 Trytouseyourownwords 5 Don tputyouropinioninthesummary6 Beconciseandcoherent 议论性或论说文 概括时则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点 概括对方观点首先是要转换视角 即以 第三人称 或 无人称 来概括 注意 eg 1 Theauthortellsustheimportanceofself learningforchildren Notonlyshouldtheteacherhelpthestudentstocorrecttheirmistakes butalsotheyshoulddependthemselvestocorrecttheirownmistakes 33 2 Thispassagediscussestheimportanceofself learningforchildren Studentsshouldhavethechancetocorrecttheirownmistakes learn by doingandlearnfromeachother notjusttheteacher 29words 3 Thearticlegivestheviewthatteachersshouldletstudentscorrecttheirmistakesbythemselves Studentsareabletocorrecttheirownmistakesandteachers frequentcorrectionwillmakechildrenunabletojudgetheirownwork 35words 4 Somepeoplethinkstudents mistakesshouldbecorrectedbythemselvesanditiswrongfortheteacherstodoitforthemtooofteninschool Itwillmakethechildrendependentontheteachers 35words 如果给定的阅读材料是一则故事 应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么 不能拖泥带水讲细节 而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理 比如说 Thisstorytellshowateacher swordsavedashyandunconfidentchildandhelpedhimfindhimselfandholdontohisdreams Ittellsusthatteachers wordscanmakedifferencetoachild slife 如果是说明性或描述性短文 就必须用概括性的文字说明一现象 比如可以概括如下Thisarticlepointoutthecommonphenomenon rareanimalscannote