短文改错训练 名校 含答案.docx

The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kids song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didnt realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and mygrandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Dear Editor,I used to be a physician in the childrens department of a hospital. Form time to time I treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didnt know the medicine was danger ; they just knew it tasted sweet. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China.Some days before I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and Im sure our Chinese factories could produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning. This is difficult for most young children to do so , though grown-up can open these bottles very easily.Im certainly that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor , Id love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful.Cheetahs(猎豹) are the fast land creatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly? The only animal that comes close to the cheetahs amazed speed is its best favorite food, the gazelle(瞪羚). In order to catch up a meal thats as swift as the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none of them can match the speed of the cheetah.Kunming is a famous city with long history. Locating in the southwest of China, it is the capital city of Yunnan Province, it is called “the Spring City”. It is said that Kunming got its name over 2000 years ago and it had never changed since then. There is a large number of famous cultural and natural sites here, which have always been attraction to tourists from around theworld. Tourists come not only to see the historically sites, but also because that it has beautiful scenery. A walk along the sides of the beautiful Dianchi Lake will offer a feast for everyones eyes. On a word, Kunming, as a famous saying goes, is a city which you will not want to leave once you have come.I used to feel I was the sun in my familyBut when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to herSo I disliked her and couldnt get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that timeI tried to find a proper time to apologizeWhen my cousins family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outsideIn the way to the playgroundI bought much snacks for herThen we began chatWhen we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gentlyShe was silently，so I thought that she hadnt heard me clearlyBut after while she said：“Dont say thatIn my memory，you are always friendly答案第一行：while改为when：was/were doing sth when 是固定搭配；第二行：bicycle改为bicycles，those后应当用复数；dressing 改为dressed，dress是及物动词，与主语是被动关系，故用过去分词形式；第三行：去掉sounded前的was，sound是不及物动词，不能用被动语态；total改为totally，用副词修饰形容词；第四行：dropped后加a，一张20美元的钞票；bill是可数名词；he改为she，此处应当指代的是a lady；第五行：out改为up，pick up是固定短语，捡起；but改为and，上下句是并列关系；第六行：How改为what，固定句型：what a/an adj+可数名词单数=Howadj a/an 可数名词单数。【答案解析】1.waited后面加for 句意：有一次我在等车来。Wait是不及物动词，waited后面加for2.past改成 passed句意：30分钟过去了。Past是介词，这句话缺少谓语动词： passed3.feet.改成 foot句意：我决定步行。On foot步行4.when 改成than句意：我已离开公共汽车就到了。使用no sooner. Than，句型5.a 改成 the句意：如果我选择等下一班车。特指the next bus6.other改成another句意：我还要再等30分钟。Another+数词+名词“另外7.do 改成did时间状语是Only then用一般过去式：did8.possible 改成possibly句意：不耐烦可能浪费我们投入的所有的努力。修饰waste用副词possibly9.去掉it这是定语从句，that在定语从句中做宾语，去掉it10.lose改成losing be close to doing几乎做，lose改成losing第二行：1.时态：go went前后时态一致。2.代词误用：oursour.这里要用our作定语。而ours则不能作定语。第三行：3.删掉so,前一分句为as soon as 引导的时间状语从句，主句前再不需要连词。4. 介词误用BeforeAfter根据题意是等了半个小时以后，而不是以前。故用After.第四行：5.副词误用:impatientlyimpient这里是形容词和前面的get形成系表结构。6.连词误用：andbut根据句意需要转折，而不是顺承。第五行：7.主谓一致误用： were was there be 句型中be 和最近的名词保持一致。8.fish前加a.根据题意这里是钓了一条鱼及根据fish后的was,故在此加a.第六行：9.名词复数误用：minuteminutes few修饰的名词要用复数形式。10.非谓语误用：FeltFeeling根据句意，feel 和句子主语之间是主动关系而非被动关系had 后面加been考查被动语态。Be poisoned by 被。所毒害。withfor考查介词。句意：时不时，我会收治那些被大人的药所误食中毒的孩子。dangerdangerous考查形容词。句意：孩子们不知道这是危险的；what -that/which/去掉what 考查宾语从句。the bottle做先行词，定语从句we now use in China缺少宾语故用that/which或者把之省略；beforeago考查副词。句意：许多天后我， 我与美国人谈论此事；themit考查代词。句意：瓶子的顶部只有用力按压旋转才能打开。It代指瓶子。to do so 去掉so考查固定句型。To do 做后置定语用来修饰most young children.grown-up-grown-ups 考查名词的复数。句意：虽然这对大人来说很容易打开。certainly-certain考查形容词。句意：我确定做这些盖的费用很小。形容词做表语。doingdone考查动词的用法。See sth done看某事被做。1. fastfastestin the world提示我们要用最高级。2.runningrunbe able to 后用动词原形3.fastlyfast fast 既可以做形容词，也可以做副词，英语中无fastly。4.amazedamazing ed修饰人，-ing修饰物5.去掉best favorite=likebest，这里重复，去掉best。6. catch up后加上withcatch up with 追上；赶上7.had has 短文整体时态用一般现在时。8. asthan 句中出现faster比较级，故用than。9. aanexcellent example元音发音前用an。10. isare several species是复数，故用there are。第一行：1.with long awith a long history 历史悠久；2. Locating Located 位于，locate要用过去分词做状语；第二行： 3. 第一个it which 此处which引导的非限制性定语从句；4. its 改为its ，此处是形容词性物主代词做定语；第三行：5. had has 从那时到现在，应该用现在完成时态； 6. is are there be 句型应当和be后面的名词保持人称和书的一致，a large number of famous cultural and natural sites是复数，故应该把is改成are第四行：7. attraction attractionsattraction “吸引人的事物”是可数名词，对应前面的sites，故用复数形式。第五行：8. historically 改为historical 形容词做定语。9. that去掉 because是从属连词，that 多余；第六行：10.On改为 In，in a word ，固定短语，表示“总之。”【英语改错题的常见错误类型】1、谓语动词的时态和语态2、句子结构和句子完整性3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题4、上下文语意和代词5、介词固定搭配6、固定（习惯）用法7、形容词和副词是否误用及其比较等级是否正确；8、冠词。取舍与选择是否正确9、连词和从句引导词10、非谓语动词