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Part IWriting (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Creating a green campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1. 建设绿色校园十分重要2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色环境3. 为了建设绿色校园我们应该Creating a Green Campus_参考范文Creating a Green CampusDuring recent years, the topic of a green campus, which has aroused wide public attention, is becoming increasingly popular. Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has profound impact on both individuals and society.A green campus means more than planting trees, flowers or grass on the campus, or having indoor plants in the school buildings. It also means that we should have a mentally-healthy environment. Without green surrounding, the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish. In that case, in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.To bring green campus to its full play, effective measures should be taken. First, school authorities should bring the theory of sustainable development into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities. Second, we, college students, should have the green concept in mind. Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to peoples well-beings.译文创建绿色校园近些年来，绿色校园的话题引起了广泛的社会关注。毫无疑问，绿色校园是大学生发展不可或缺的一个部分，它对社会和我们个人都有着深远的影响。绿色校园不只是在校园里种树、种花或种草，或者在室内种些植物。它也指我们要有个健康的精神环境。没有绿色的环境，学生的心灵就不会那样纯净。那样的话，建设绿色校园先得很重要。要充分发挥绿色校园的作用，必须采取有效的措施。第一，学校当局必须把可持续发展的理论带进课堂，制定环境管理守则和进行环境教育。第二，我们大学生必须要有环境意识。只有通过全社会的努力才能建设绿色校园，并使之造福于人类。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2. 出现这种情况的原因3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling_【参考范文】Due Attention Should Be Given to SpellingCurrently, finding essays fraught with a host of careless spelling errors on university campus is not uncommon, which lays open to a disturbing fact that the bulk of college students fail to put a high value on correct spelling. While this problem is in its infancy, it does deserve our urgent attention.Probing into this undesirable trend, we can identify that a couple of driving forces are at work, of which the single most important one roots in our inadequate emphasis. As far as the students are concerned, they stress the content of a piece of essay over its form. To put it in another way, they maintain that spelling doesnt matter much. From another perspective, exam-oriented educational mechanism, in which the focus is grammar, making teachers direct attention to emphasizing spelling in daily learning.Spelling to a piece of writing is what appearance to a person. Therefore, prompt and concrete moves are supposed to be taken in an effort to cure this unfavorable situation. On my personal level, the school authorities are urged to launch a campus-wide campaign designed to awaken pupils as well as teachers to the crucial importance of correct and neat spelling. Only in this way can the prospect of shrinking the spelling mistakes in essays be brighter.【译文】拼写应该得到应有的重视如今，在大学校园里经常见到充斥着许多粗心拼写错误的文章，这反映了一个令人担忧的事实：大部分的学生对于正确拼写重视不足。虽然这个问题处于初级阶段，但是的确需要迫切的关注。仔细探究这个不太好的趋势，我们可以发现有几个因素在起作用，其中最重要的一点就是不够重视。就学生而言，他们重视文章的内容而非形式。也就是说，他们认为拼写并不重要。从另一个角度看，应试教育体制注重英语语法，这使得老师在日常学习中不怎么强调拼写。 拼写之于一篇文章，重要性犹如外貌之于一个人。因此，应该采取迅速并且具体的措施来改善这一不良趋势。我认为，应该敦促校方发起一场校园范围内的运动以提醒学生和老师正确及工整拼写的极端重要性。只有这样减少文章中拼写错误的前景才会光明。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2. 为了孩子独立，父母应该How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?_【参考范文】How Should Parents Help Children to Be IndependentCurrently, a considerable proportion of parents do virtually everything for their kids, which is nothing new in contemporary society. Indeed, latter-day children are excessively indulged and protected by their parents. We, however, are dismally to find that the bulk of children are sorely lacking in basic living skills and incapable of leading an independent life, reflecting our far too much care and love yield counterproductive impacts. Therefore, how to make their kids gain independence concerns a majority of parents. As the pillar of our society, children are obliged to shoulder the huge responsibilities to revive our country. Therefore, parents should strive to help their kids become independent. Firstly, parents are urged not to lavish too much affection and indulgence on their spoiled children. Secondly, parents ought to teach their kids how to cope with various situations, especially awkward ones. Lastly, parents shouldnt rescue their children from normal obstacles, which is beneficial for their healthy growth. Simply put, we all fervently hope that children have less reliance on their parents and become truly independent economically and emotionally. 【译文】父母应该如何帮助孩子独立如今，大部分的父母几乎为孩子包揽所有的事情，这在当代社会已经不是新鲜事了。的确，现在的孩子被父母过度宠爱和保护。然而，我们失望地发现大多数的孩子极度缺乏基本的生存技能，不能过独立的生活，这反映出过度的关爱产生了适得其反的效果。因此，如何使孩子变得独立让大部分父母忧心忡忡。作为社会的栋梁，孩子们有义务肩负起振兴国家的重任。因此，父母应该努力帮助孩子们独立起来。首先，家长们应该被敦促不要过度溺爱他们的“惯宝贝”。其次，父母应该教会他们的孩子如何处理各种状况，特别是艰难的。最后，父母不应将孩子从正常的挫折中解救出来，毕竟这些挫折是利于孩子成长的。总之，我们热忱地希望这些孩子能对父母少些依赖而在经济和心智两方面真正独立起来。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shoping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题3. 我的建议Online Shoping_【参考范文】Online ShoppingGiant leaps of the Internet industry have set the stage for the mushrooming of online shopping, which is gaining growing popularity for the past year or two. According to one recent survey conducted by Sina Weibo, an immensely popular microblogging service in the Middle Kingdom, close to 90 percent of respondents have once done web shopping.Undoubtedly, Internet shopping enjoys a host of benefits. For one thing, the prices of the commodities and services you desire to purchase are typically lower in online shops than that in physical ones because the sellers in most cases grant a bulk discount of some stuff possessing the same quality as offline items to consumers in an effort to boost sales volume. For another, virtual shopping, to some extent, enables customers to become increasingly excel in employing the Internet to determine how to spend their money offline. For all the various strengths of Internet-based shopping, the dark sides of it also exist, however. Take a concrete example. A tiny minority of merchants with evil motives use the false information to trick people into parting with credit cards and other important personal details, which cost consumers dear.From my own perspective, the rewards of Internet-based shopping outweigh its risks. Simply stated, we are supposed to make full use of its virtues to serve our purposes and do all in our power to minimize its adverse impacts on us meanwhile.【译文】网络购物互联网工业的迅猛发展为网络购物的繁荣奠定了基础，网络购物在最近一两年越来越流行。极其流行的微博客服务-新浪微博最近进行的一项调查显示，接近百分之九十的受访者曾经通过网络购物。毫无疑问，网络购物具有很多优点。一方面，你想要购买的商品或服务的价格在网络店里通常要比实体店里低，因为大多数时候卖家为了促销会对与线下商品具有同等质量的一些物品进行打折出售。另一方面，在某种程度上，网络购物使得消费者更加善于决定如何到网络以外的地方去花钱。然而，尽管网络购物具有各种各样的优点，它的缺点也是存在的。举一个具体的例子。一小部分带有不良动机的商人通过虚假信息骗取信用卡和其他个人详情，这使得消费者付出沉重代价。在我看来，网络购物利大于弊。总之，我们应该充分利用其优点为我们服务，同时将它带给我们的负面影响降低到最低程度。Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will_参考范文】Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillAn an ancient wise philosopher once put it, Where there is a will, there is a way. This truth is self-evident to everyone, but not everyone would put it into practice. It reminds me of a humourous story that after having experienced many failed attempts in giving up smoking, a man still insists he consistently has a great determination to attain success. Plus, a host of similar cases should trigger rounds of home-searching over this classic proverb among the general public.Undoubtedly, an iron will is supposed to be an essential quality with which top-performers are equipped. Take Kobe Bryant, a world-renowned basketball player with Los Angeles Lakers. It is the very great will to taste success, in my eyes, that has enabled him to pocket five titles. To name another well-known example, Steve Jobs, an extraordinary innovator who designed a series of products having immensely bettered our life, has obtained huge success that no one else can rival thanks to his great strength of purpose. Indeed, a considerable proportion of prominent folks all ascribe their accomplishments to a dogged will.Each individual desires to stay ahead in their life, with no exception to me. On my personal level, in our path to success, a wealth of predicted and unexpected difficulties and obstacles are bound to crop up. Therefore, it takes a strong will to surmount them. Having an iron will counts a great deal. It is my unwavering belief that possessing a strong will, we can effortlessly translate our huge efforts into deserved achievements. 【译文】若无坚强意志，则一事无成一位睿智的古代哲学家曾经说过，“有志者事竟成。”这个道理每个人都会明白，但并不是每个人都会付诸实践的。这让我想了一个诙谐的故事：在经历了许多次失败的戒烟尝试后，一个人仍然坚持认为他一直有取得成功的坚强决心。另外，一系列类似的事件应该在公众间引起对这个经典谚语一轮又一轮的深刻反省。无疑，钢铁般的意志应该是高成就者所具备的必不可少的素质。以世界著名的洛杉矶湖人队球星科比布莱恩特为例。在我看来，正是想要取得成功的坚强意志使得他获取了五个总冠军头衔。再举另一个大家熟知的例子，史蒂夫乔布斯，这位杰出的创新家设计了一系列极大地改变了我们生活的产品。由于其坚强的意志，他取得了他人无法匹敌的巨大成功。的确，许多著名人士都将他们的成就归因于顽强的意志。每个人都想在一生之中取得成功，我也不例外。我认为，在我们通往成功的道路上，必然会出现许多预料的并且未曾料到的困难和障碍。因此需要坚强的意志去战胜它们。拥有钢铁般的意志是很重要的。我坚持认为具有坚强的意志，我们能不费吹灰之力地将我们的巨大努力转化为应有的成就。Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象2. 出现这一现象的原因3. 我对于这一现象的看法和建议On Excessive Packaging_【参考范文】On Excessive PackagingFor the past year or two, folks have begun to attach growing importance to the form of things, especially its outward appearance. Consequently: excessive and luxurious packaging has impressively emerged on a massive scale. A prime example is various richly decorated mooncakes.This prevailing trend rests with a couple of factors, I would argue. On the one hand, in most peoples eyes, a products quality and value are intimately tied with its outer appearance. The more elaborately it is wrapped, the better its quality is. This mentality is taken advantage of by a host of unlawful manufacturers, who st