甘肃省金昌市第一中学高中英语《Unit 1 Friendship》Writing课件 新人教版必修1.ppt

人教课标高一必修1unit1 英文建议信属于应用文写作范畴 是向征询建议者就某事提出写信人的建议和忠告 高考中此类信件多属于半开放性作文 要求考生根据所给的材料 多为征求建议信 提出合理化建议 或者给出有针对性的解决办法 建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外 还要求在信中针对别人的问题 给出你的观点及解决办法 常用于建议的句式有 inmyopinion youshould myopinionis ibelieveweshould idon tthinkit snecessaryto iadviseyouto wemustdecide i mafraidthat ithinkyoushould don tworry iagree idon tagree ithinkso idon tthinkso 注意格式 书信格式 客观地提出建议 针对对方的问题 给出你的观点 语言要委婉 精炼 同时要简洁 表达清楚 开门见山 表明写作意图 在本段中 写信人应该先简单介绍自己 然后陈述事由 表明写信的目的及原因 委婉地提出建议及改进措施 或提出忠告 礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复 misswanghasreceivedaletterfromxiaodong heisalsoaskingforsomeadvice readthelettercarefullyandhelpmisswanganswerit dearmisswang i mastudentfromhuzhouseniorhighschool ihaveaproblem i mnotverygoodatcommunicatingwithpeople althoughitrytotalktomyclassmates istillfindithardtomakegoodfriendswiththem soifeelquitelonelysometimes idowanttochangethissituation butidon tknowhow iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice dearxiaodong i mgladtoreceiveyoure mail youaskmesomethingabout 建议的主题 thefollowingismyadvice inmyhumbleopinion youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions 建议的内容 ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals andiwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouto yourssincerely useful furtherdetails youhavetroublein withothers andyoudowantto thissituation makingfriends change youmust othersifyouwanttomakefriendswiththem you dbetterlookafterothersmorethan befriendlyto yourself itisimportanttotrytomakethestrangerfeel ifyouhavedifferentopinions youcan others it snotnecessaryto them easy comfortable discusswith quarrelwith 巧列提纲 详略得当 针对问题需要提出什么样的建议 要讲哪些内容 应该先列出提纲 并要做到内容重点突出 详略得当 井然有序 达到提纲挈领的作用 pointingouttheimportanceoffriendship showingyouradvice 翻译要点 勾勒脉络 列出提纲后 可以尝试着将文章中涉及到的建议要点或忠告翻译成相应的英语句子 这样全文的骨架就已经形成了 在此基础上 可增加合理的想象以及适当的扩展 everyoneneedsfriends sohowtomakefriendsisveryimportant youmustbefriendlytoothersifyouwanttomakefriendswiththem lookafterothersmorethanyourself trytomakethestrangerfeeleasy ifyouhavedifferentopinions youcandiscusswithothers it snotnecessarytoquarrelwiththem 巧妙构思 浑然成篇 增加适当的情节和一些过渡词将上述要点连接起来 加以适当润色 形成一篇地道 完整的英语建议信 i mgladtoreceiveyoure mail youaskmesomethingabouthowtomakefriends thefollowingismyadvice 合理过渡 everyoneneedsfriends sohowtomakefriendsisveryimportant firstyoumustbefriendlytoothersifyouwanttomakefriendswithothers then lookafterothersmorethanyourself finally idon ttrustthosepeoplewholeaveyouwhenyouareintrouble 体现层次分明 first then finally inmyopinion trytomakethestrangerfeeleasy ifyouhavedifferentopinions youcandiscusswithothers idon tthinkit snecessarytoquarrelwiththem inmyopinionidon tthink 表达个人观点 贴切委婉 idon ttrustthosepeoplewholeaveyouwhenyouareintrouble becauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed 合理发挥不可少 规范书写 落笔成文 上述四个步骤是构思写作的基础 而规范书写是落笔成文的关键 在这个环节中 切不可因为书写潦草 乱涂乱改而让人看不出个所以然 结果使整篇文章黯然失色 dearxiaodong i mgladtoreceiveyoure mail youaskmesomethingabouthowtomakefriends thefollowingismyadvice everyoneneedsfriends sohowtomakefriendsisveryimportant first youmustbefriendlytoothersifyouwanttomakefriendswiththem then lookafterothersmorethanyourself inmyopinion trytomakethestrangerfeeleasy ifyouhavedifferentopinions youcandiscusswithothers idon tthinkit snecessarytoquarrelwiththem finally idon ttrustthosepeoplewholeaveyouwhenyouareintrouble becauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed ihopeeveryt