2016高考作文复习(学生版).doc

高三英语书面表达：应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一，常见的应用文有书信、电子邮件、通知、日记、便条、演讲稿、广告、海报、寻物启事、招领启事、请帖等。一、书信与电子邮件书信一般分为商业书信和私人书信。从内容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括邀请信、致谢信、致歉信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、介绍信、自荐信、求职信、读者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。写作时应注意: 格式正确，语言简练地道，语气要因人、因事而异。英文书信常识1.信头 （heading） 2.称呼 （salutation) 3.正文（body）4.结束语（complimentary close ） 5.签名（signature） 电子邮件：邮件是一种用电子手段提供信息交换的通信方式，是互联网应用最广泛的服务。电子邮件可以是文字、图像、声音等多种形式,它的格式与书面信件的格式一样，常有称呼、正文、结束语、姓名和日期等。在写电子邮件时，须具备以下几点内容：1. 自我介绍或写信的背景和目的。2. 邮件的具体内容。3. 表明期望或客套话。I、习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)Dear Peter, I would like to ask you to write a article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Culture” section in our newspaper is very popular between us students. It carries articles writing by foreign friends about the cultures of their home country. Would you please write anything about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would special welcome articles about what Americans spend their holidays and festivals, but the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant to as long as it is interesting and informative. 400 words would fine. Could we have your articles before June 28? I am looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li HuaII、高考典型真题范文背诵：1.2015新课标全国卷II假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1.出发及返回时间；2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结语已为你写好。One possible version（参考范文）：Dear Lucy, Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 2. 2015四川卷假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin) 水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1.词数120左右，开学语已为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。One possible version（参考范文）：Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think Im fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So Im quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin.Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. Im eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.Hope for you early reply!Yours Sincerely Li Xia 3. 2015北京卷假定你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：1.介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；2.说明你打算参加的原因；3.询问对方的意向。注意: 1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：龙舟训练营Dragon Boat Training CampOne possible version（参考范文）：Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and Ill send youmore information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. Yours, Li Hua 4. 2015天津卷假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。 1、自我介绍; 2、拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等; 3、询问对方的其他需求。 注意： (1)词数不少100; (2) 请适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。参考词汇：学生会 the Student Union One possible version（参考范文）：Dear Chris, Im Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang High School. Im writing to tell you something about donating books to your class. To enhance communication with your school, we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to Literature. With them, you may have a better understanding of China and its culture. Well take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your school. Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needs. I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendship. Best wishes! Yours, Li Jin 5.2012新课标全国卷I假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括: 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准. 注意: 1.词数100左右: 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China。_ Regards, Li HuaOne possible version（参考范文）：Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua III. 模拟训练题：1. 假定你是李华，你校和一所美国学校签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你的英语老师是来自这所学校的Norma。不久前，她返回美国任教。请根据下面要求给她写一封电子邮件，要点如下：1. 对她表达感谢之意。2. 介绍她离开后自己和班级发生的事情。3. 希望了解她的近况。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Norma, I am Li Hua, one of your students in China. Its almost a month since you left us. _All the best! Yours, Li HuaOne possible version（参考范文）：Dear Norma, I am Li Hua, one of your students in China. Its almost a month since you left us.We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together. We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Norma. Will you come back to see Norma? Hows everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.All the best! Yours, Li Hua2. 假定你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请你根据下面要求给他回一封邮件，要点如下：1. 未及时回信的原因。2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Tom, Im so sorry that I havent replied to your last email in time because _ Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li HuaOne possible version（参考范文）：Dear Tom, Im so sorry that I havent replied to your last email in time because I have been busy preparing for my final exam. Certainly, Id like to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer holiday. As you know, our summer holiday will last about 8 weeks, so Ive intended to do something as follows. First, I plan to do a part-time job in a KFC restaurant for a month. On the one hand, Ill make some money in this way. On the other hand, Ill gain some work experience. Besides, Ill go to visit Mount Tai with my friends, enjoying the beautiful scenery of my motherland. What about your summer holiday? If possible, Id like to invite you to join us, going traveling together. Im sure well have a great time. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua二、A diary (日记/周记)文体概述 英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或是自己感受最深的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要注意下面几点：一、格式要正确 英语日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，再写日期，最后写天气。(例如：Friday February 26th, 2016 Sunny)二、时态要正确谓语动词常用一般过去时态，但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。三、写正文时应注意的问题1. 围绕一个主题来展开。交代事情发生的时间(time)、地点(place)、主要人物(character)、事件的经过(action)、原因(reason)和结果(result)。2. 若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用“同义转换法”。3. 结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。如： 1) What an unforgettable experience! 2) Though tired, I felt very happy. 3) From the experience we have learned a lot. 4) I benefited a lot from the activity 5) We can realize that.I.做短文改错，背经典范文：Passage 1:Wednesday July 20, 2015 Fine Yesterday I went to Qingdao with my family by the train. The sunshine and fresh air there made us comfortably. We went to the seaside, where the sea was as blue as the sky. Bathing in the sunshine on the beach were really an enjoyable thing. I picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister. There we buy many interesting souvenirs. I was planning to send them my friends. We ate many thing there, such as fish, prawn(大虾), beef and so on. They were very delicious. At night they lived in a hotel nearby where was clean and tidy but the price was reasonable. Qingdao is such a beautiful and interesting place that it is well worth see a second time.Passage 2:(2010北京卷)Last weekend, I help my grandparents prepare their tripto Beidaihe. In Saturday morning, together with my grandparents,I searched Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe,and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, I went back to the trainstation and managed to buy two ticket for my grandparentsalthough there have a long queue. After dinner, I packed intothe suitcase the things their grandparents needed, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went tothe station to see them off.Waved goodbye to them on theplatform, I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.II.高考典型真题：1.(2013北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。爸爸出差回来，表演了你。注意：1. 周记的开头已经为你写好。2. 词数不少于 60.One possible version (参考范文)Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning.I found my mother wasnt feeling well. She had a cold.I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done. I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.2.假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。I am an 18-year-old middle school student, .One possible version (参考范文)I am an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.III. 模拟训练题：1.假设你是李华，今天(星期日，3月20日，晴)在公园爬山时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如下：1. 想跟他谈话却不知所措。2. 你向他介绍你的城市。3. 他给你一些学习的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好。Sunday March 20, 2016 FineThis morning when I was taking a walk in the park, I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city. This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner. I wanted to talk with him, but I was so excited and nervous that I didnt know what to do and how to start a conversation, though I did well in English classes. Eager to practise my spoken English, I encouraged myself and went to say hello and welcome to him. He was very friendly and we talked for about 15 minutes. As a native, I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him. Finally, he gave me some advice on how to further improve my English. It was more than an experience!2.假设你是李华，今天(星期六，4月2日，多云)学校组织去科学馆参加题为“Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”的活动。请围绕这次活动写一篇日记。要点如下：1. 野生动植物的现状。2. 保护野生动植物的意义。3. 保护野生动植物的措施。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好。Saturday April 2, 2016 CloudyThis afternoon I took part in an organized activity with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection” in the science museum. From the activity, I learn that at present the environment is being destroyed because of peoples harmful activities, which causes a decrease of wildlife. Besides, many people hunt wild animals for their meat and money. To make matters worse, in response, the decrease is doing harm to peoples life. So it is necessary to take effective measures to protect our environment, such as creating wildlife reserves and passing laws to raise the awareness of wildlife protection. Wild animals are friends of our human beings. To protect them is to protect ourselves. All in all, I benefited a lot from todays activity.三、感谢信感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当收到馈赠、邀请、赴宴、照顾、慰问、祝贺时，给对方道谢的信件。感谢信应写得真诚、具体、及时。通常包括以下内容：感谢的原因对方给予的帮助或礼物对方的作用和对自己的意义给出细节再次致谢。I.典型范文背诵： 假如你是李华，去年在夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件生日礼物-一件红色的上衣，并附有一封信询问你的近况。请你给他写一封100词左右的回信表示感谢。回信包括：1.向他致谢；2.衣服的颜色是你最喜欢的，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢；3.告诉他你的近况，及上周你的生日聚会情况；询问他的近况Dear Jim, I am very happy to hear from you again and Im writing to express my gratitude for your birthday present. I love the shirt very much, whose color, red, is my favorite. Whats more, it is just perfect on me. Every time I wear it, Ill think of you. Im getting along well with my study these days. Last week I had a wonderful birthday party together with my classmates. We had a good time enjoying the delicious food my mother prepared for us. It reminded me of the happy days we spent together last summer. How are you getting on in England? I miss you so much that I hope you can come to China as soon as possible. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua II.感谢信写作模板：Dear _,I am writing to extend y sincere gratitude for _(感谢的原因). If it had been for your assistance in _(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been _ (没有对方的帮助会产生的后果)。Everyone agrees that it was you who _(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Hua III.常用的短语表达：1. 非常感谢 Thank you very much for2. 写这封信是为了表达我对的谢意I am writing to express my thanks for3. 请接受我诚挚的谢意 Please accept my sincere appreciation for4. 我真的很感激I am truly grateful to you for5. 你真好 It was really kind of you to6. 我真诚地感激 I sincerely appreciate7. 我想表达我对的谢意 I wish to express my appreciation for8. 我谨代表我全家，我想On behalf of my whole family, I would like to9. 我真诚希望I sincerely hope that10. 没有你的帮助，我就不会Without your help, I wouldnt11. 在某人的帮助下with ones help / with the help of sb.12. 由于你的鼓励 thanks to/due to/because of your encouragement13. 无私的奉献 selfless dedication/devotion/contribution14. 对某人有耐心be patient with sb. / have much patience with sb.15. 宽容的和大方的tolerant and generousIV.常用的句式表达：1.非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。 Thank you very much for the gift you sent me.2. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。I am writing to express my thanks for (your) helping me improve my spoken English.3. 你太好了，假期照顾我弟弟。It was really kind of you to take care of my brother in the holiday.4. 请再次接受我诚挚的谢意。Please accept my sincere appreciation again.5. 我谨借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时支持和帮助。I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.V. 习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)Dear Mr. Li, Im very exciting to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreamed about it. Mr. Li, I still remember the days which you taught me English. My English have been improved greatly because your creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too many homework and the high expectations makes me depressed. I was tired of a warning that if I didnt do my best, I wouldnt have a chance to go to college. Thanks for your encourage, I wish more and more of your student could go to their ideal colleges. Hoping to hear from you soon.Yours,Li HuaVI. 模拟训练题：1.假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下：1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。3. 对老师表示祝福。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。One possible version (参考范文)Dear Mr. Wang, Again, I sincerely thank you for your help! I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would n